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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for the short update guys...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice, please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Pls make Ahemji jealous of doc !!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Nice update, keep going. Will be waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rashi supporting Ahem is good !!! And Ahem realising as a husband how he needs to be more concerned about his wife !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update with ahem smiling at gopi n anita being jeolous.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hearing Ahem shout everyone rushed downstairs...They see kokila lying on Sofa and enquired wat happened...Everyone starts asking questions.
Ahem tells jigar to call doctor and while caressing kokila's forehead related to everyone wat happened.
Anita is in a panic thinking that she will be exposed now...
Anita: (Ab me kya karu. Ahem apni mom se bahut pyaar karta hai agar usko pata chal gaya ke ye sab maine gopi ko raaste se hatane k liye kiya to me use hamesha k liye kho dungi...ab


gud one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pt 3

Gopi was in the mandir praying to kanhaji for her maaji's wellbeing(Typical Gopi).
She then takes some gangajal and walks in kokila room just as ahem asks about her.
Anita sees gopi and quickly says "wo rahi gopi" Turning to gopi she says "Kaha thi tum gopi, aunty ke saath itna bada haadsa ho gaya aur tum gayab thi...agar tumhari zarurat hongi aunty ko to kya hum tumhe poore ghar me doondhe. Ye kya gopi apni zimmedari ka kuch to khyaal rakhho"
Ahem doesnt like t ur writing style is lil, differnt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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different in a good way or...
can u elaborate
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Pt4 :
Hi Guys I m back with the next update.
Looking forward to your feedback.

Ahem and everyone chuckles hearing this (I have yet to hear ahem laugh, i dunno if the guy even knows how to)
Ahem to gopi: Gopi, doctor ye poochna chahte hai ke kahi tumhe chot to nahi lagi. Tum theek ho na
Gopi (Smiling brilliantly at Ahem😃):Ji Ahemjii me theek hu...
Kokila gains conciousness and the first words out of her mouth are" Gopi Vau, ahem" (hey Khuda yeh kya ho gaya...order reversed...pehle gopi fir Ahem)
Gopi:Maaji, hum yahi hai...aap kaisa feel kar rahi hai...
Ahem:Mom aap theek hai na
Kokila:Haan dikra me theek hu...Mota bhabhi sab log theek hai na
Hetal: Haan Kokila sab theek hai...Ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai, tumhe kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to batao
Kokila: Na mota bhabhi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...aur gopi vau hai na
Hetal:(smiling sweetly in ahems direction who was looking at gopi)Haan gopi to hai, Chalo Tum aaraam karo...kisiki zarurat ho to bula dena
Kokila: Ji Mota Bhabhi
Everyone leaves except Ahem and Gopi
Gopi: Ahemjii aap jaaiye me maaji ke saath hoon.
Ahem: Nahi!!! me mom ke saath hoon.
Kokila: Ahem dikra,Gopi vau theek keh rahi hai, tum office jao
Ahem:Nahi mom aaj me ghar se kaam karuga...jigar aur kaka sab sambhal lenge
Kokila: theek hai dikra...Par tum ab kamre me jao...mujhe aaraam karna hai.
Gopi: Ahemjiii aap jaaiye me hoon na. Me maaji ka Poora khayaal rakhugi aur koi zarurat hongi to aapko bula doongi
Ahem: Ji Mom
Ahem leaves kokila and gopi
Here Anita is in her room sulking...
"why is ahem behaving like this...maybe bcoz his mom is injured...gosh why does she has to go in the kitchen...Stupid Gopi and her maaji ruined everything...its all her fault. Who lights diya in the kitchen...Its not my fault. I didnt do anything.
Just then she sees ahem going towards his room and rushed out to talk to him.

Ahem is walking towards his room and thinking about the accident..."How can the kitchen just explode like this unless there was a Gas leak...but how can that happen.
Wen ahem neared his room he heard someone calling his name. He turned and saw anita and thought "oh god!!!!!here she come, maybe gopi was ri8 i shudnt have called her pretending to be nilesh but now it cant be helped. God I m so tired of bumping into her everytime i turn around. Doesnt she have a job to do, why is she sitting idle.She is an educated gal and wen we were dating she had a job, wonder wat happened. MY GOPI is uneducated but she is never idle. That gal is always doing something.
Anita is now standing in front of ahem and talking non stop about how afraid she was and how she was about to help.
Ahem is tired hearing all this and thinks "where is gopi wen i need her the most.
Suddenly anita says: Ahem tumhe office jaana honga na aao me tumhari madat kar du...
Ahem looks at anita as if he is seeing her for the first time...

Ahem: Wat wrong with this gal...why is she behaving like this.Is there no work for her to do.
Ahem: Nahi Anita aaj me office nahi jaa raha hu. Mom Ki tabiyat kharaab hai. Aur me unke paas rehna chahta hu
Anita: Par ahem tumhara kaam
Ahem is really annoyed now and replies tersely " Mera kaam mere parivaar se badhkar nahi hai anita"
Anita: Ahem tum hamesha se mama's boy rahe ho. par tum pareshaan kyu ho rahe ho. I am there na. Main aunty ka khyaal rakhugi.
Ahem is really annoyed now and thinks (gopi kaha ho tum. And how dare anita call me a mama's boy. Gopi ne kabhi mujhe ye nahi kaha, aur ye anita😡.)
" Anita me ghar me isliye rehna chahta hu kyunki mujhe mom ki fikr hai...aur rahi baat mom ka khyaal rakhne ki to uske liye gopi hai na. Uske rehte mom ko koi takleef nahi hongi. Wo mom ka mujhse zyada khyaal rakhti hai"
Anita is really annoyed hearing ahem praise gopi and says "Achcha ahem me tumhare liye green tea leke aati hu..fir hum baith ke baat karege"

Ahem is beyond annoyed now and says "Anita me green tea sirf din me do baar peeta hoon. Aur gopi mujhe green tea de chuki hai. Mujhe bahot kaam hai me baad me baat karuga"
He turns around and goes towards his room thinking (ise kya laga me vella baitha hu. God i have so much work to do. And she keeps on chattering all the time. She is like raashi. God i m missing gopi's silence)

So how was it ...do you want me to continue
Plzzz comment

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