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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was beautiful.. I can see Gopi going through the motions and Ahem trying to make her talk.. Well done Aish.. The end was very beautiful👏⭐️

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doc4ever

@doc4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

What a heart-wrenching build-up! ⭐️Fantastic Aish! 👏

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

What a superb OS Aish.

A gradual build up then the explosion that faltered his step.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow, great OS, and I can imagine this easily, and picture it play out just like this. Great job.

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: swasthi
What a superb OS Aish.

A gradual build up then the explosion that faltered his step.

Thanks Swasthi... Means a lot coming from you.. 😊

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-neela-

@-neela-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Oh Aish, that was brilliant ⭐️ 👏. I could feel Ahem's fustration throughout while reading, I even had a lump building up in my throat 😳

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suk19

@suk19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aish that was fabulous brilliant would love to have a second part where aham gets to work in winning over gopi

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow, Aish👏. Don't have the words to describe how good it is. Loved how Ahemji knows her routine and how he knows if she is carrying something just by listening to her sounds. Loved the build up to the final moment. I could totally imagine Gopi acting like that and Ahemji blowing his fuse. Now, you know what they say. A good deed never goes unpunished. And your OS is one of the best, so please continue. You can't leave us hanging. I am dying to know what Ahemji does next. Please make it a multiple part OS.