SS: Realising what he has done. Scene 5-Page 19

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Amal Aziz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Awesome ... Loved it ..
waiting for the next part!

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@MereMahiyaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Amazing writting aish loved it cant wait too read THE next part

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taniks

@taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Aish this is brilliant , I read both parts together and loved it ,awaiting next part eagerly. Pls make Ahem suffer a lot more and Gopi must put that evil witch in her place.

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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

aish...glad u have turned it into a SS...loved the update...my absolute best part was when ahem crumbled to the floor...waiting for his tears...go ahead and make all our dreams come true...

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

loved it a lot.thanx for turning it to an ss

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Loved it but I want ahem to suffer yet
He need to suffer,

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

loved it aish
this is for you for making aham suffer.

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-neela-

@-neela-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Oh Aish, I am also happy you decided to carry on with this os/ss.. 😃

How wonderful it is to see Mr Ahem Modi suffer 😍 😆

Best part was when realisation hit him and he fell to his knees. Looking forward to the next update of more suffering 😛

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Oooh, Aish. Fantastic. I am so glad you are continuing with it. Please make him beg for Gopi's love. Please make him suffer more. I loved it how you made him so sure of himself when he gets Gopi away from her work, but then Gopi puts him in his place. Both of them are so true to their characters. I could see it happening in SNS, but the CV's are not as smart as you, what to do. Please, please more pain for Mr. Modi. Can't wait to see more.