FF Gopi Ahem (Part 6 Updated on Page 12) (June 5) - Page 6

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update will be posted earliest tomorrow night.. latest by wednesday

sorry have some personal problems going on that restricts me from sitting down to finish up the update sorry
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PART 5

Ahem rushes to Gopi's mama's house. He checks himself out in the mirror as if he's going on his first date. Get a hold of yourself Ahem. You have to own up for your mistakes. Just hope luck is on your side.

Ahem goes to the door and rings the doorbell. His sister opens the door. He greets her but his eyes are wondering for his wife but she wasn't there. Where is she?

Kinjal waves her hand in front of his face.

When she catches his attention, she asks him with a teasing tone: She's upstairs. She wanted me to ask you if it was ok if she could stay a few more nights here.

Ahem: NO!

Kinjal starts laughing: oh bhai, can't stay away from bhabhi for more than one night? hahaha

Ahem starts to blush.

Ahem: umm.. uhh...

Kinjal: Don't worry, I'll bring bhabhi downstairs.

Kinjal goes upstairs while Ahem sits down. I hope they don't take too long.

Upstairs

Kinjal: Bhabhi, Ahem Bhai is here.

Gopi blushes at Ahem's name.

Gopi: Yes, I'm ready. I'll come downstairs.

Kinjal: Gopi Bhabhi, I'm sorry.

Gopi: Kinjal ben, how many times are you going to say sorry? I've forgiven you. Don't worry about it. You've made a mistake and now you've asked for forgiveness.

Kinjal: Promise you wouldn't tell Ahem bhai about it? I want to tell him and I want to ask for his forgiveness.

Gopi: Don't worry, but I think you should do it as soon as possible.

Ahem walks into the room.
Ahem: You guys take too long. What did you want to ask my forgiveness for?

Kinjal: Ahem bhai, this is not the correct place to talk about it.

Ahem: What is it about?

Kinjal: Mistakes I've done that I deeply regret now.

Ahem: Does it involve Gopi?

Kinjal nods her head not being able to look at Ahem.

Meanwhile at the office, Jigar is confused.

How am I supposed to trust her again? This is the second time she's broken my trust. What are the chances that she won't break my trust again. But then again she did come forward with her mistakes. What am I supposed to do?

Chirag: JIGAR!!

Jigar: Oh sorry papa. I was thinking about something. Why did you come? I would of came to your office.

Chirag: I called you quite a few times but you didn't pick up so I came down personally to make sure you were alright. Are you ok? Is there anything you want to talk about?

Jigar: No Papa, I'm all right and there isn't anything I want to talk about. But what did you want to talk about?

Chirag: Well, always remember that I'm always here to listen to whenever. I came cause there is a meeting Chennai and I need you to go now. Our clients are leaving town for overseas for 6 months so they have given us until tomorrow morning when their flight leaves. I was going to send Ahem, but he's not here and I need you to leave right away. I need you to close the deal. You can either fly back after the meeting or in the morning, whichever but you have to leave now.

Jigar: Sure papa, I'll leave now. Can you tell the family at home?

Chiraj: Don't worry. Now here are the files, all the details are in it. If you have any questions, call me.

Jigar: OK papa, I'll leave now. Bye

This would be a good opportunity for me to go and think about what to do with Rashi. I do really love her but I'm afraid I'm going to get hurt again. Hopefully after the meeting I would have a clear mind to think about all that has happened.

Two Questions: What will happen to Kinjal and Ahem's relationship when he finds out about the truth? What will Jigar decide to do with his relationship with Rashi? Find out in the next update

I'm sorry for updating so late. I hope to pick up my speed again to do 1 update at least once a day or every two days. Please comment :)
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really nice update. eagerly waiting for more
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Nice update. Waiting for ur next update.
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Loved it!!! Our ff's,ss,and os writers could write more interesting than cvs!!1
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nice update...!eagerly waiting for the next update...!thanks for the PM...!😃

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