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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
I am loving your FF 😃. Read all the updates in one go and now am eagerly awaiting the next upate. I wonder who screamed Ahemji!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow maaneet👏👏👏👏 too good ahem ji is getting very bold hhmmm 😍 showing his feeling telling her of his needs 😍😍 i like it i like it 👏👏👏👏keep going👏👏 i,m rubbing my hands in anticipation on whats gonna happen next well done dear keep going 👏👏👏👏 pm me when you've updated 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superrrbbb!!!!!!!!! please pm yur update... eagerly waitinggg!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
I am glued to this FF now. You always end with a cliff hanger..keeps me hooked lol. Please PM me when you update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Lovely update.

Ahem cannot stay away from his Gopi.

He is so good with all his demands and Gopi is so succumbing.

Update soon as precap is very intriguing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃Very interesting and intriguing FF, especially the precap...please update soon. I love your Ahemji. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4

The next morning, Gopi wakes up to find something holding her hand. Her eyes flutters open to realize that her Ahemji was holding her hand while they were sleeping. Her cheeks starts to turn pink. She looks up at the clock

Gopi: Ahemji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahem wakes up in a startle.

Ahem: Gopi are you alright? What happened?

Gopi: Ahemji it is 5:45 and Maaji wakes up at 6:00 every morning. You have to leave now so you can reach on time. Oh god, your car is broken and should go and call the mechanic.

Ahem who was just shocked at how Gopi was talking without stuttering, came out of the trance and held Gopi's hand before she left.

Ahem: Gopi. I'm sorry, I kinda lied to you.

Gopi looks up to him with a curious face, yet still the blush in her cheeks as he was still holding her hands.

Ahem: The car didn't break down. I didn't want to leave you so I said I lie. I'm sorry for lying.

Gopi started to blush so much, her cheeks were red as tomatos. He didn't want to leave me.

Gopi: No... it's .. ok.. you .. don't .. need to... say .. .sorry

Ahem: Ok, I'll leave now. I'll be back at 7 sharp, so you better be ready with your things. Don't go downstairs after you get ready. That mami of yours will give you some kind of chore and you'll end up staying. I don't think I can be apart from you any longer.

Both Ahem and Gopi are shocked at Ahem's confession. Both blush and look away.

Ahem: OK. Bye

Gopi: Bye

Gopi gets disappointed. He didn't kiss me like last night. Gopi blushes at that thought. Just when she was about to close the door, Ahem comes back.

Ahem: I forgot something

Gopi looks confused. Ahem then leans down and kisses her cheek.

Ahem: This is what I forgot. My good morning kiss. Can you promise something?

Gopi could barely speak. It was if he could read my mind. She nods her head to his question, not being able to speak.

Ahem: Even if I forget, will you give me my morning kiss?

Gopi blushes even more. ME giving HIM a kiss. Oh god.

Ahem: I won't leave till you say yes.

Blushing even more, she nods her head.

Ahem: How do I trust that you will keep your word? To promise, you have to give me a kiss on the cheek.
Gopi is shocked. She nods her head in no.

Gopi: Not now'..you are getting late.

Ahem: I won't leave till you promise.

Ahem leans forward to give her his cheek. Gopi had no other option. She hesitantly reaches up and kisses his cheek. She backs down, blushing, cheeks red as tomatos.

Ahem: Now you have signed the agreement. You can't back out of it. Don't forget, I'm coming to pick you up at 7 o'clock.

Gopi nods her head, blushing red as a tomato.

Ahem: Gopi look at me

Gopi looks up. He smiles at her as if to say are you ok? and Gopi smiles back as if to say I'm fine.

Ahem finally leaves. He gets back home, acts as if he was there the whole night and before he leaves, he goes up to his parents room.

Ahem: Mom, Dad...I'm going to take Gopi out. I want to apologize for everything that I've done to her. I'm going to ask her for her forgiveness. I'm going to let it up to her to see if she wants to continue this relationship. I'm going to give her the option of leaving if she doesn't want to continue.

Kokila: Are you sure Ahem?

Ahem: Yes Mom. I want this relationship to work. But her input is important too.

Kokila: Then you have my blessings.

Ahem turns to his dad, Are you ok with this?

Parag was bit shocked as to Ahem asking for his opinion.

Ahem: I should first ask you for forgiveness. I never treated you properly like a father. I hope you forgive me and from now on I'll be the ideal son.

Parag: Oh Ahem, no need to apologize. I haven't been the ideal father as well. But I'm glad you want to work on our relationship as well. Both you and gopi have my blessings.

Ahem bids them good bye and literally runs to the car. Jigar and Rashi who were sitting in the living room were shocked to see Ahem like that.

Jigar: Rashi, did you see that? It looked like Ahem bhai just skipped?!

Rashi: Yes it did and I think I know the reason why.

Jigar: What is it?

Rashi: Oh Jigarji, its Gopi. He's going to pick up her from my house.

Jigar: Oh!!! Well thats good. I can see he's changing and it's a good change. I'm finally happy that he finally understood Gopi Bhabhi.

Rashi thinks Oh god. Half the misunderstandings are caused by me. Ahemji is ready to open up, I think I should too.

Jigar notices Rashi in deep thought.

Jigar: Rashi, whats up? Whats on your mind?

Rashi: Jigarji, I need to talk to you. If you don't mind can we go up into the room so we can get some privacy?

Both go upstairs. Rash reveals everything that she has done. She begs him for his forgiveness and tells him that it is up to him if he wants to forgive her. She is ready for any decision he places upon him, even if he wants her to leave the house.

Jigar, on the other hand, is shocked. Even after the first time, she hasn't learned. But she is owning up to her mistakes.


Jigar: I don't know what to say. I had slowly started to trust you, and now you place this in front of me? How can I trust you this time?

Rashi: Yes I know Jigarji, it is my fault. I'll do anything to earn your trust back, if you are willing to let me.

Jigar: I don't know Rashi. I really don't know. I'm getting late for work. Let me think about it, and I'll let you know what's going to happen. So are you saying if I say to leave, you are willing to leave.

Rashi: Yes Jigarji I'll leave for your happiness.

Jigar leaves for work after having breakfast.
So what happens next? Does Gopi forgive Ahem? Does Jigar forgive Rashi? All in the next update.
Edited by maaneet93 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Loved it!!!!!!!!!! loved both the couple specially rashi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Another cliffhanger...I hate those. But then again that is what keeps us coming back. This was a wonderful update and I loved every part of it. The best part was the deal sealed with a kiss...so to speak. Ahem is smart and I know Gopi is going to forgive him...I hope if Rashi is owing up to her mistakes, Jigar gives her a chance...

Thank you for the pm and thank you for this fantabulous update to a already fascinating story. Please continue the next chapter and I will be waiting for my pm to reming me of the update...Than you 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Great update.

Ahem is going to pick up Gopi. Jigar is unsure what to do with Rashi now that she has revealed all her kalakaris.

What a place to stop. You have to update soon.

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