FF Gopi Ahem (Part 6 Updated on Page 12) (June 5)

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A new ff I wanted to start since I have lots of time on my hands. I hope you like it. If you want a pm, pm me as well as add me, it is much easier to track that way. Thanks

Let just say that Gopi for some reason ends up going to Mami's house and has to spend the night over there. Also an assumption that Mami and Kinjal didn't go to jail.

Late at night, Gopi finished all the chores that her Mami gave to her and she was getting ready for bed when she got a text message. Curious as to who would send her a message this late at night, she opens it to find its from Ahemji.

Text Message from Ahemji: Gopi, are you a sleep?

Message from Gopi: No, are you? Shouldn't you go to sleep? You have get up early for your meeting tomorrow.

Ahem smiles when he sees that she still concerned even if she is at a different house.

Message from Ahemji: I couldn't fall asleep. It feels weird without you here. Gopi, is everyone in the house asleep yet?

Message from Gopi: Yes, but why?

Ahem decides to call her directly. Gopi gets nervous. Why is Ahemji calling me for? She decides to pick up the call.

Gopi: Jai sri Krishna Ahemji

Ahem: Jai sri Krishna Gopiji

Gopi lets out a little chuckle when he says Gopiji rather than the normal Gopi she is accustomed to.

Gopi: ji... why did you call?

Ahem: Well, I was wondering I couldn't fall asleep, so I'm standing outside of your house, hoping that I would see you once, but you didn't come near your window at all.

Gopi gets confused. Ahemji outside? And that too waiting for me? She is in disbelief but she looks outside. OMG he is outside and it looks like its about to rain.

Gopi: Ahemji, I can't believe you are outside. It is about to rain, you should go home.

Ahem: No Gopi, I want to tell you something. Something that I understood when you were here and I was back home. I need to tell you.

Gopi: Then come inside, I'll open the front door.

Ahem: No Gopi, everyone may wake up and then I wouldn't be able to talk to you privately.

Gopi gets curious, why does Ahemji want to talk to me privately? I shouldn't conclude anything. I do not want to get hurt anymore.

Gopi: Well, do you see the stairs on the side of the house? If you climb those stairs, it would lead to my room.

Ahem climbed the stairs and knocked on her door. Gopi opened the door, but still couldn't believe that he was there, so she just stared at him.

Ahem leaned close and whispered: Are you planning on letting your husband in or are you going to make me stand out here all night?


I'm not much of a writer, I hope you do like it. Please comment :)


Part 1 - Right Above :)

Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 6

Part 4 - Page 8

Part 5 - Page 10

Part 6 - Part 12




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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice ff dear 👏 very interesting plz continue😃 i,m curious to what will happen next plz update soon and dont worry about not being a good writer or not we accept anything written with love for gohem or raji so plz continue 👏👏👏👏
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lovely start...cant wait to read more...
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very interesting ff. plz do continue .
very nicely done.gr8 update
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Oooh I love this!!!
And the curiosity about what's going to happen next is killing me!!!
I'm loving the premise and I can't wait to read more!!!
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Absolutely wonderful start. Pls continue soon
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Well you could have fooled me. I think you are a very good writer and this story is absolutely fantabulous. I am in awe. Please continue soon and don't make us wait long 😃 So far the story is progressing beautifully.

Thank you so much for this much needed FF...could you by any chance pm me when you have it updated 😊 Thank you 😃

Superb, Fantabulous, awesome, stupendous and absolutely a pleasure to read
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Great start, can't wait for the next part.
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Sounds really interesting dear...continue soon..
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Just lovely and a suspense. Please continue

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