OS:Azaadi...shayad(freedom...perhaps)part8 pg17 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya ahem always does looses the opportunity!!
bt this tym u've gotta watch!!
KEEP READING..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Has Gopi left him!!!!????? Will he leave no stone unturned in his quest to find her. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OKAY guyz!!
gud nyt..and sweet dreams!!
see u tommorow..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really well written. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice update..👏!where is gopi..!was she left?cant wait for this questions...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you make us wait for so long

this os is turning out to be a wonderful one
a small suggestion why dont you make it a long one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nyc cant wait to read the next part n thanx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gohemmania

you make us wait for so long

this os is turning out to be a wonderful one
a small suggestion why dont you make it a long one

im sorry couldn't make it long coz of hectic routine...moreover im writing tihs os in a very difficult condition that u guyz may not even imagine!!...bt i'll try my best...
AND SORRY FOR MAKING U WAIT FR SO LONG
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I read your os its really nice 😊
hahahahaha its good that u are addicted to ur own os so we can get updates soon... Waiting for the next one.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx guyz fr all ur motivation...im highly oblidged😊..-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------PART-6It was a beautiful morning at MM,but not very pleasant for someone.Along with gopi someone else was also in dillema of making decisions.
Rashi stood at the door arguing with the milkman for adding water to milk and cheating the modis as usual,when koki interuppted stopping rashi abruptly and said..
"Rashi shu chhe,tum ye achhi tarah se jaanti ho na ki ye hamaare kaafi puraane doodh wale hain aur bohut imaandaar bhi to phir bekaar mein behas karke apna aur unka samay kyun barbaad kar rahi ho.."
((what is this rashi,you know it very well that he his our very old milkman and is very honest..then why are you wasting your and his time as well..))
rashi got irritated but koki apologised to the milkman and went to bring the money from her room and asked rashi to wait.While anita was anxious to have a talk with koki and found koki marching towards her room and grabbed the opportunity.Anita stepped forward and went to knock at koki's door.Koki was surprised to see anita at her doorstep but allowed her to enter in her stern voice.
Here rashi was standing and waiting for koki,but the milkman soon asked her that he may take his salary tommorow otherwise he would get late for the deliveries.Rashi chided him again and said..
"Achha to tum ye baat pehle kakiji se nahin keh sakte the,abhi hi yaad aaya...der ho jayegi..uff.."
((oh...alright so couldn't say it before to kakiji...im getting late..uff..))
rashi got pissed and went to inform koki.Whereas koki and anita were in the room and anita was hesitating to get her thoughts articulated infront of koki.Soon rashi reached at the door and stopped before she stepped in and eaves dropped both of their conversation..
"erm..wo aunty mujhe aap se kehna tha ki mere is ghar mein aane se mera matlab hai ki...main wo yahan nahin rehna.."
((erm..actually aunty i wanted to say that since i've come to this house..i mean i wanted to lea..))
anita could further,rashi interuppted in betweeen and thought that if anita went from the house all her kalakaries would fail and said..
"KAKIJI...erm..wo doodhwala...wo keh raha hai ki wo chala jayega to aap use jaldi paise de dijye.."
((KAKIJI...erm..that milkman..he wants to go so will give him money..))
koki got angry on rashi and said..
"tum ek kaam bhi dhang se nahin kar sakti...hay krishn bhagvaan!!..chalo jaldi.."
((you can't even do one thing properly..oh my god!!..come quickly))
anita stood wondering in the room that now how was she going to tell her that she wants to leave for america!
In gohem's room ahem almost got ready and now was searching wildly for gopi she was to be seen nowhere.He was getting late for his office and now gopi was getting on his nerves.He hastily walked towards kitchen where he found koki and enquired her about gopi's whereabouts and ahem was surprised that koki had no idea and was same for the others.Ahem informed her about the yellow file which he gave to gopi yesterday and now gopi was to be found nowhere.Kpki got shocked and said..
"gopi vau ko main ne kitni baar kaha hai ki ahem ko batakar uski cheez rakha karo...GOPI VAU...GOPI VAU..."
((how many times i've told gopi vau to inform ahem about his things...GOPI VAU...GOPI VAU..))
gopi answered her call from the store room and ahem and anita gave a sigh of relief.Gopi came and apologised ahem that he got late all because of her and brought the file for him.She knew that ahem must've thought that she left and actually she was to do the same but couldn't make in the early morning as koki was very busy to have a talk with.So she decided to talk with koki when ahem was away.
Soon it was midway,after a tiring day for all the women in the house.Now gopi wanted to inform koki.Infact koki called gopi for some reason and gopi was glad to have the opportunity so she went to koki's room and koki asked her to enter and continued...
"haan gopi vau..mujhe tumse bohut zaroori kaam tha.."
((yes gopi vau...i wanted to tell you something..))
gopi said..
"ji kahiye maaji.."
((yes maaji tell me..))
koki continued..
"gopi vau kal jigar ka janam din hai to main chahti hoon ki tum uski tayari ki zimedari lo...kyunki main rashi par to kisi baat ke liye bharosa nahin kar sakti...is liye tum rashi ki sahayta karogi...aur haan koi gadbad nahin honi chahiye...samjhi gayi gopi vau.."
((gopi vau tommorow is jigar's birthday and i want you to do the preparations..because you know i can't rely on ahem...and take care..there should be no mistakes..got it gopi vau..))
koki explained gopi with full authority.Gopi nodded in hesitation but soon agreed as how she could just leave before her lovely BIL's birthday.So she just decided to stay for one more day which wont make any difference.
PRECAP:
Koki asked ahem to bring a gift for jigar on his birthday which would be from him.Ahem asked could he take gopi along with him as she has a good choice(in absence of gopi)

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