OS:Azaadi...shayad(freedom...perhaps)part8 pg17 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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THNX!!...
now im really trying to get u some gud gohem moments and my hands on romanticism!!
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Guyz i asked u not to have ur hopes high because i think it's gonna b the worst this tym...so get ready fr the crape..-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------PART-7
Ahem returned home with his kaka while jigar was still at the office completing some leftovers and would come back late.When ahem and chirag entered the MM,to ahem's dissappointment gopi couldn't come to greet him so there stood only hetal and koki with rashi busy by gopi's side showing tantrums.Koki asked ahem jigar's whereabouts and was glad to know that he would be late at home.She automatically asked ahem to go and purchase jigar a gift from him and gopi as well.Still ahem's eyes were searching for gopi and failed everytime.Ahem said in an obvious tone and then asked wether he could take gopi along with him.Ahem saw his mother confused and said ..
"nahin mom wo actually...gopi ki choice kaafi achhi hai to main ne socha ki gift lene mein aasani ho jayegi.."
((no mom it's actually..gopi's choice is very good so i thought it would be easier to make a choice..))
koki got the real point of his son and called out to gopi and asked her to accompany ahem to the gift shop.Soon ahem too got fresh and ready for the market.Both of them were climbing downstairs in no time.
When both of them reached the mall,the same one,got shivers at the thought of those escalators,ahem got the idea and said..
"pareshan mat ho gopi..yahan main ne kuch elevators bhi dekhe hain to hum usse hi istamaal karenge...thheek hai?"
((gopi don't worry...i've seen some elevators we would use them..alright?))
gopi didn't understand what an elevator is but was glad it was apart those escalators!Gopi and ahem proceeded towards the mall and seeing the rush ahem suggested gopi..
"gopi aaj bohut bheed hai to tum..erm..mera haath pakad lo.."
((gopi today there is too much rush around..erm..here you hold my hand..))
gopi gaped at him and thought that she wasn't supposed to be doing this but this is all for her BIL's birthday and nothing else.Gopi gave a sigh and held her hand to ahem.Then ahem swayed gopi from the crowd.
Here in the MM rashi called her mother and told the news of the day.She spoke to her that tommorow there was Jigar's birthday and ahem and gopi have gone to bring a gift,whereas she hasn't even got chance to think about it.Urmila gave her some ideas which went in mime.Rashi also told her about anita's coversation with koki,to which urmi told to stop her in the house at any cost if she wants her kalakaries to work.
Back to the mall,ahem and gopi reached by the elevators,but gopi was feeling like someone was continuosly following them especially her.She didn't wish to trouble her ahemji but understood that a man was staring and following her.She didn't like it a bit and started to feel nervous.The man in order to tease her just went past her touching and pressing her arm to stand in the qeue for the same lift.At the same moment gopi clenched ahem's arm and wrist in nervousness.Ahem noticed that gopi was getting really uneasy,but thought that it was due to the pushes propagated by the crowd,so he held her tighter by her hand and consoled..
"gopi fikr mat karo abhi lift aajayegi to bheed kam ho jayegi theek hai.."
((gopi take it easy the crowd will become easier after the lift arrives..))
soon the crowd got relaxed and there stood only the stranger and the couple.Ahem soon noticed that the stranger had no good intentions and ahem went alarmed.After a quiet while waiting they afforded an empty elevator.The stranger stepped first followed by gopi.As soon as he saw gopi enter he pressed the door close but gopi screamed..
"ahemji.."
((ahemji..))
ahem got in action and kept his palm between the doors which were about to close ahem's hands into pieces.At that point ahem gave a really deadly look at the man and hastily entered the elevator.Ahem stood holding gopi by her arms and gave frequent glances to the stranger.Gopi still shivered to death.
Soon the man got out on the first floor itself as he couldn't bear ahem's glances.Ahem hugged gopi tightly at her shoulders and asked..
"gopi tum ne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya ki wo aadmi tumhain pareshaan kar raha tha.."
((gopi why didn't you inform me about that guy teasing you,earlier..))
gopi couldn't say a word and kept crying in his arms.Ahem wiped her tears and said to cheer her up in mock anger..
"is liye kehta hoon ki itna makeup karke bahar mat nikla karo.."
((thats the reason i suggest you not to have a heavy makeup when you are going for an outing..))
gopi blushed hard and ahem continued..
"waise agar makeup nahin bhi karke niklogi to bhi log aise hi dekhenge.."
((however..even if you don't have makeup people would still gape like that at you..))
and smiled.Gopi said..
"ahemji..wo shayad hum pohunch gaye hain.."
((ahemji..i think we are already there..))
releasing herself from ahem's arms.Ahem sighed and mummered..
"uff.."
((uff..))
PRECAP:
Ahem and gopi were in a garment shop.A maid asked ahem that if he likes the shirt then she would help him try it,gopi stood in the corner unable to hear the conversation.
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
just updated now...
coudn't hv it more than this..
plz like it even it's crape & boring..
THNX!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
well who can stand a possesive Ahem 😉 !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Lovely Update stephanie👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guyz wasn't it a crape??
well thnx fr liking it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved possessive, teasing ahem and his glares. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: svtsns

Loved possessive, teasing ahem and his glares. Continue soon.

thnx fr loving ahem and my OS as well!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update. You are consistent.😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Xarina

Good update. You are consistent.😃

Good update!!...thnku..😃
You are consistent.😃...thnk u as well!!

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