OS:Azaadi...shayad(freedom...perhaps)part8 pg17 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i see u guyz are really excited fr the next part but im really really sorry cudn't update today..😭..
i just made it however to inform u guyz...THNX FR ALL UR LOVE FR THE OS!!😳 surely won't dissappoint u like the CVs..🤢
Guyz lv reading ur comments!!😳..keep commenting👍🏼!!
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
OK...i cudn't resist so i updated it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cant wait too read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I coudn't resist anymore so i came up with the update..😉..you see im addicted to my OS too..😆-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------PART-5Gopi was about to go to bed when on her way to the room she collided with Hetal who was just going downstairs to get pills for Chirag who was suffering with a severe headache.Hetal said..
"gopi dikra tum abhi tak..achha ahem ka koi phone aaya ya to phir koi.."
((gopi dear you are still..did ahem called you or did you get any information about him..))
gopi started in between..
"nahin kakiji..wo ahemji..ghar aa chuke hain..mujhe laga ki maaji thak gayin hain to main kal batadoongi...lekin kakiji main abhi jaakar bata deti hoon.."
((no kakiji..actually..ahemji..has returned..i thought you and maaji would get disturbed so i would tell you tommorow...but now i will immediately go and inform her..))
gopi was about to go when hetal stopped her..
"gopi dikra tum chinta mat karo main kokila ko jaakar batadoongi tum jao aur so jao kaafi raat ho gayi hai na.."
((gopi dear you don't worry ,i will inform kokila you just go and sleep it's already very late,isn't it..))
gopi nods her head and makes her move to her room.
It was almost 1:00am when gopi entered their bedroom and to her surprise ahem was there waiting for her,but what on the bed.She couldn't imagine ahem on the bed and that too with her.Ahem lay there reading a file in his hand and rested his head on the head board.At the jingling of gopi's bangles,it was then he noticed that gopi was at the door step gaping at him.He just stood up and walked up to her and said.."gopi tum kab aayi.."
((gopi..when did you come..))
waking gopi from her thoughts,which were impractical to happen.He continued..
"waise main tumhare hi intezaar kar raha tha.."
((actually i was waiting for you only..))
gopi was elated by ahem's words and said..
"ahemji aapko mera intezaar karne ki kya zaroorat thi main to..."
((ahemji you needn't wait for me i was..))
ahem stopped her in between and said..
"agar main light off karke so jata to tum andhere mein kaise dekh pati.."
((how would you have seen in the dark if i had switched out the lights..))
all gopi's dreams came crashing on the ground.But she never hoped very high as to why his ahemji would like to share the bed if he doesn't likes to share his life with her anyways.Actually she was only perplexed at seeing ahem on the bed.Well soon ahem made his bed and gopi too changed and both of them retired to their respective beds after putting out the lights.Gopi lay on the bed with her back facing ahem.Ahem noticed gopi still and considered her to be asleep.
After half hour or so,ahem's sweet dream was disturbed by a weaping.Soon he was perplexed to figured out that it was gopi.He switched on the lights and found gopi lay crouched on the bed shivering and weaping,even she was feeling difficulty to breath.Whereas gopi was so much in her emotions that she didn't took notice of ahem who had put on the lights and had made her sit on the bed.She cried and weaped and mumbled something which ahem didn't got them.She was crying not for the reason that ahem didn't sleep with her or something else.Rather she felt really difficult to accept the truth that this night is going to be her last one in the MM.All the while ahem said dearings to her and caressed her back to pacify her.After a long while,she actually gain her concious of her nearness to ahem and was just left with some hiccups.So ahem asked..
"to gopi batao kya hua..tumne koi bura sapna dekha ya to phir tum..soyi hi nahin thi..hmm?"
((so gopi tell me what is it..did you had any bad dream..or you were awake still..hmm?))
gopi choked and said..
"nahin ahemji..sapna to bohut achha tha lekin...wo toot gaya.."
((no ahemji..the dream was beutiful..but it shattered))
gopi in order to answer a perplexed ahem said a half truth which she considered her life.At this ahem chuckled and said..
"oh..oh meri gopi.."
((oh..oh my gopi..))
and couldn't say more and asked her to sleep and not worry because eveything is going to be fine.He closed his eyes and slept with a smile playing on his face.Gopi gave a sigh and tried hard to fly into dreams but it was impossible because now she is sleep deprived forever...
PRECAP:
It was morning and ahem searched gopi everywhere in the house but couldn't find her anywhere.He inquires koki and tells her that he couldn't find his yellow file which he gave gopi and now gopi is nowhere to be seen but koki gives a shocked expression.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my, very very interesting indeed

WHere cud Gopi be now, left alraedy? WOW, or gone for a makeover with Anita? hmm lol I think too much

cant wait for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update stephenie...glad that ahem was able to console gopi...but she still left MM in the morning didnt she...hope fully ahem finds her soon and brings her back...
stephenie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
THNX..
fr thinking about my OS!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Very nice os Amazing Update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
well Ahem had an opportunity yet he lost it...so she is leaving in the morning...well waiting to see how Ahem & family will react !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Nice update. update next part son.

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