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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Shilpa, that was another beautiful update...I loved how Ahem slowly and methodically explained everything to Gopi at the end...and before that the stare and the threat he gave Rashi and Kinjal was so worth it...I could just see all this happening...

Thank you so much for this much needed uplift for a boring saturday. As always another fantabulous job in updating...cannot wait to read the next chapter...I hope Ahem starts to show his love for her and She slowly starts to trust him again...Thank you...

Fantastic, Fantabulous, Amazing, Superb, stupendous...

just a few of many words to describe your writing and story telling 👏

Edited by Dhabu89 - 13 years ago

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

awww!!!!! clap clap clap!! loved it so much!!!!!!

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

That was the most touching part ever👏⭐️

Shilpa, Swasthi.. You have outdone yourself👏

What a way to confront everyone. Ahem proved that he is Ahem by warning Anitha, Kinjal and Rashi off. Not going overboard but yet being Ahem.. I loved his defense for Gopi. He deeply knows the pain she is going through.

Ahem's worry and concern at Gopi fainting and the recollection of past moments.. That would have been the most painful thing ever. He now his task cut out trying to make Gopi trust his love. She will trust that he accepts her as his wife. But to trust his love, he may have to work a little😛

Poor Gopi.😭 I wonder when she will faint in SNS out of exhaustion.. She carries so much burden on her frail shoulders.. But she is learn to trust Ahem again. 😃

Thank you for the weekend treat😛 I loved it.. And am looking forward to read the next part😊

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

A special note to Swasthi...I keep forgetting to mention your name when thanking for the update...I apologize...You could say my mind is never in its right place 😆...But obviously the collaboration of yours and Shilpa's mind is bringing about a story that we are all falling in love with 👏

Sorry aging...But a huge THANK YOU to you as well Swasthi

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641345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

shilpa ben and swasthi...ur work is just brilliant...Please continue soon...Thumb up

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@Arnisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

this is jus wow thanx 4 the pm cant wait 4 the nxt part ...

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

pretty gud,

for once i thoguht that when Gopi fainted, oh no, pregnancy track , 😲

but then it wasnt anything major wrong, a relief, thank God,

nice SS Update, 👏

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Eva456

@Eva456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

shilpa,swasthi a fab update,hats off to u!!just cudn't get my eyes off the screen while reading...it touched my heart!lovvveed the update,it was a treat,plz continue soon...xx

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

really gr8 update .loved the way ahem shouted at anita. really amazing update

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JJ15

@JJ15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Shilpa/Swasthi...

A nice update. Thank you for taking the time and effort to update this frequently in your busy life. It really does help us think positive these days.

I thought the doctor was going to say that Gopi is pregnant. This would be another chance for Kalakaries. So 👍🏼 all good and clear there.

I am glad all the members were present when Ahem said he loves Gopi. Only person missing was Urmila Shah. But I am sure it will reach her ears in lightning speed.

Ahem knows about Holi - hmmm I wonder how he found out? Jigar or photographs or did he feel changes like in Maddy's post? LOL😆

Shilpa, thank you for this weekend treat. This is for you 🤗