OS - AHEM'S REPENTANCE - Page 5

Brilliant job! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ShaunSA

Brilliant job!👍🏼

But something tells me you chickened out towards the end and rushed it. Something missing just before the epilogue...😛

Still a brilliant job though!

Ashwin yes there is lots of room for improvement, thanks for the constructive feedback, will improve in my next work. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Beautiful OS. loved it...thank you for the smile on my face😊

Thanks dear, am happy that I managed to make you smile. ❤️

beautiful OS.
aham really needs to repend. i love the way the story ended

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

beautiful OS.
aham really needs to repend. i love the way the story ended

Thank you my dear.

very nice os..!loved it..!👏

Originally posted by: vijayarvi

very nice os..!loved it..!👏

awesome os...😊 loved it

Originally posted by: sks21

amazing os

Thank you dear