OS - AHEM'S REPENTANCE - Page 2

Page

of

5

Frequent Posters

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

31

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow Anna this is a beautiful OS. Loved how Ahem showed Gopi how much he loves her.

Very good OS.

Reply

Quote

swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

28

Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely OS Anna.

An interesting take on how Ahem will repent.

Reply

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

...

@MereMahiyaa.

Inactive

40

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Super OS lOved it 👍🏼

Reply

Quote

-neela-

@-neela-

Voyager

15

Posted: 13 years ago

This is beautifully written, I especially liked Ahem's decision at the end. Well done 😉

Reply

Quote

gmjudv

@gmjudv

Explorer

6

Posted: 13 years ago

great os. thanks for sharing.

Reply

Quote

A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

24

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Xarina
That was such a lovely os. Well done. Look forward to reading lots more from you.

Thanks Xarina, will certainly try and write more. I quite enjoyed writting this one.

Reply

Quote

A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

24

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angl143
Lovely OS! 😊

Thanks dear.

Reply

Quote

A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

24

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavya
nice Os it seems real...

Thanks Bhavya.

Edited by A2ZV - 13 years ago

Reply

Quote

A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

24

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sinak
Loved the OS

Thank you so much Sinak.

Reply

Quote

A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

24

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
Good...really liked the adoption bit

Thanks dear, want Aham to repent for his deeds and this seemed the most beautiful form of repentance for Ahem, without hurting Gopi because if Aham was hurt, Gopi would be hurt more.

Reply

Quote

Related Topics

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".