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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey vibz...caught up with the other part 😉 ...so Rashi finally realises what Jigar means to her...hope she now works on her love & marriage !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 Vibha, that was a beautiful OS. Thank you for the PM. It was worth it. You did a wonderful job in executing all the emotions that Jigar was going thru the whole time. I was also happy to see how Jigar came to her rescue even when he was upset with her. That is what a husband would do.

The whole Hetal trying to wake him up and Koki shedding tears brought tears to my eyes. It was a beautiful scene. I hope that on the show Rashi really does realize Jigar's worth and she changes for good. Thank you Vibha for this wonderful OS 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89

👏 Vibha, that was a beautiful OS. Thank you for the PM. It was worth it. You did a wonderful job in executing all the emotions that Jigar was going thru the whole time. I was also happy to see how Jigar came to her rescue even when he was upset with her. That is what a husband would do.


The whole Hetal trying to wake him up and Koki shedding tears brought tears to my eyes. It was a beautiful scene. I hope that on the show Rashi really does realize Jigar's worth and she changes for good. Thank you Vibha for this wonderful OS 😃



u promised an os too..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi.krishna



u promised an os too..😉



Today is the day...give me a couple of hours to write it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89

👏Vibha, that was a beautiful OS. Thank you for the PM. It was worth it. You did a wonderful job in executing all the emotions that Jigar was going thru the whole time. I was also happy to see how Jigar came to her rescue even when he was upset with her. That is what a husband would do.


The whole Hetal trying to wake him up and Koki shedding tears brought tears to my eyes. It was a beautiful scene. I hope that on the show Rashi really does realize Jigar's worth and she changes for good. Thank you Vibha for this wonderful OS😃

am glad rupal you enjoyed it:-)jigar is one character the cv s have never developed.he needs to support her in front of everyone probably that will make her happy. I knew you would be the oly one to notice koki s tears and be moved by it 😛 on the show rashi s redemption might take a long time:-(
waiting for ur os now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

am glad rupal you enjoyed it:-)jigar is one character the cv s have never developed.he needs to support her in front of everyone probably that will make her happy. I knew you would be the oly one to notice koki s tears and be moved by it 😛 on the show rashi s redemption might take a long time:-(
waiting for ur os now




LOL...I love Koki and so yeah that would be the first thing I would notice...I had a few tears in my eyes, I am not ashamed to admit it 😃 The whole show of Rashi sitting with Jigar's head on her lap and Hetal and Koki's tears would move anyone...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oki guys this is the next part of the os… i dont feel like giving them a happy ending so soon so 😉it might go on some more so its either a ss or ff

Life is a circle

Jigar walked into the disc Athenas at Leela bangalore.He blew a breath of air.These parties wewe a pain but really necessary to succed in business socializing was the key and once you succeed throwing a huge party to show it off was equally important.Tonight was really important he had managed a small coup,not him alone obviously his bro was involved but the 7 years had changed ahem modi. He was a man who found happiness in small things in life his wife his kids his mom were his first priority while Jigar modi had become somethoing different. He was called a Midas . everything he touched in business was gold while his private life had burned to ashes. Jigar mentally scolded himself " think youhave to act sweet , flash your perfect smileclick a few pics with the long legged gals and leave" . this party was to mark the success of a partnership with a french designer Andre Dupont who was the very choosy and was in the news often for his beautiful work and his temper. Ahem had warned Jigar that this man was "handle with care".


He entered the dim lit disc the loud music irritating him he met the man who had got him this deal- Nilesh Patel a school friend who was now setttled in bangalore. "How are you Nilesh ? Where is the man of honour-andrew?"



"Andy is throwing a hissy fit. He forgot his favourite pair of shoes in paris and he thinks no other would do for tonight's party.he wanted to cancell the partu and have it once his shoes were here "

Nilesh grinned.

Jigar was shocked "what the hell!!!! Is he crazy delay a party over a pair of shoes ???? crazy man!!! Wait I wll give him a piece of my mind" before he could proceed nilesh caught his hand "relax dude everything is under control. The launch of Modi garments happens tonight. Jerry is taking care of everything.i am sure he will be back to being happy bunny in no time" sais nilesh confidently.

He continued "Jerry is the oly one who can take care of andre in minutes. Ever time he has a temper tantrum and becomes a lion jerry has him purring back like a kitten in no time. You are so lucky jerry dedcided to come down for this merger oh here s jerry"he said waving to someone behimd him . Jigar Modi heard clicking of heels he turned his head slightly and his eyes widened jaw dropped he found himself drowning into very familiar chocolate eyes that ruined his sleep ever night . Rashi Jigar modi stared back at him fearlessly correction it was ex mrs jigar modi they were divorced 7 years ago.their marriage over .

"doll this is Jigar modi ,he and his brother own modi industries in india who we just signed a deal with. We mere mortals report to him if andre is not around"grinned nilesh and put ghis arm around her waist drawing her closer to him. Rashi smiled at Nilesh jigar extended his hand rashi refused to axknowledge it" When in india do as the indians do she folded her hands and said namaste"


"Rashi" he whisperd huskily.. she glared at him "Correction mr modi I am Ms shah to you rashi is oly for my loved ones" Nilesh looked confused at this exchange" you know each other????"


"Oh. Yes darling We go back a long way. But we didn't really know each other all that well. He is the ex husband." Said Rashi casually. " Now tell me I look good" she said twirling around

"a chanel lbd check, a hermes scarf chec,jimmy choos heels check,a lv clutch check, you could walk the ramp now, except your hair just don't tie it.you look beautiful with open hair".niesh grinned

beautiful was not the world she looked gorgeous absolutely breath taking.the adjectives dint do her justice. The little black dress was hugging her body like second skin, her minimal make up perfect there was no jewellery except a diamond ring on her left hand the size of a rock.those heels were ridiculous 5 inches, her legs looked a mile long. Her hair pulled back in a pony tail. Never in his life he had imagined her to be like this severe untouchable like the ice queen unlike the bubbly saree clad rashi modi who wore a dozen bangles and heavily decked.

"thanks neal "rashi gave him a quick peck on the cheeks and turned before she could make a move jigar grabbed her hand and dragged her to the dance floor" we need to talk rashi" she pulled her hand back and replied " what s left to talk modi? We are finished and next time dare you touch me I will kick your ass"

She turned to neal and asked him "dance with me sweets" and pulled him to the dance floor.

Jigar was apalled by seeing her closeness with nilesh .all the kissing touching had left a strange taste in his mouth.

Rashi and nles were dancing really close and nilesh questioned" So this is yor ex husband? The one who " before he could finish rashi completed" yup the one who I tricked into marriage never loved made a huge mess. The day I realized I loved him was the day he had an accident. He recovered slowly I confessed all my deeds to him and the entire family. We decided to begin afresh, but sadly one month after that I was served divorce papers thrown out of the house for ruining his sister s marriage"

Before her emotions would get the better of her nilesh interrupted" Forget about it love, you have moved on and our present and future does not depend on our past deeds or actions"

Rashi gave him a warm hug" what would I do without you?" she whispered in hs ear.

Her thoughts still on the day kinjal had come home in tears , she and her mom were blamed for dhaval s accident as dhaval had come to know about all their kalakaris . her mom had washed her hands off the entire thing leaving her to deal with the music. She was branded a murderer without any proof. She had pleaded begged and cried saying she had no idea who or what killed him but sadly no one believed her. The modis had used their money to hush up the scandal and the divorce was done in 24 hours.she was thrown out of the house penniless

Jigar stared at them at the huge ring on her finger…. Were they engaged? His mind was turning rashi was back .He had made a mistake divorcing her . The police investigation had revealed that it was some loan sharks who had killed his brother inlaw who had borrowed a huge sum of money and failed to return it. Just because the last few calls he made were to his wife and she had a huge argument 2 days before dint make her a murderer. She had caused a lot of trouble in the past but she had admitted to each and ever one. He had made a huge blunder he had tried to search for her after the police investigaton but she had disappeared from rajkot. No one knew where she was. People assumed she was dead but here she was alive and kicking, doing well in her career. Hugging and kissing another man. But this time the tables were turned he had no intentions of letting her slip through his fingers while she was not even bothered to give him a second glance

Sorry dhaval fans !!!!😭 but he is never around on the show as well.

do ell me what you think😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sooo... fantastic... tables are turned.. u r amazing vibz 👏.. . for u ..

may i tell u one thing?? i don't like rashi kissing another man.. hug was enough.. so she is living with this man for past 7 yrs??.. now what will jigar do?? please can u update soon.. please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi.krishna

sooo... fantastic... tables are turned.. u r amazing vibz 👏.. . for u ..

may i tell u one thing?? i don't like rashi kissing another man.. hug was enough.. so she is living with this man for past 7 yrs??.. now what will jigar do?? please can u update soon.. please...

😳 thanks for the kiss!!! i can never make rashi cry for long!!! thats my problem!!! 😆🤗dont worry about the hug or kiss let jigar fret and fume!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

😳 thanks for the kiss!!! i can never make rashi cry for long!!! thats my problem!!! 😆🤗dont worry about the hug or kiss let jigar fret and fume!!!



will u update soon?? vibha... i am really sad that rashi is with another man. i hope they are not married or living in.😉 7 yrs is a long time.. it would have been good if rashi was pregnant while being thrown out and now has a 6 year old daughter 😍.. anyway please update soon.. me too don't like rashi crying for long but also don't like living with another man..

btw i felt like rashi don't have any feelings for him.. "kicking ur ass" is a strong proof.. i think she begged a lot in front of him before being thrown out.. u should write a flashback for both.. i was confused at the beginning how he ended up in a party straight from icu.
Edited by rashi.krishna - 13 years ago

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