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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: vibz88



Where was he now?wat if something happened to him?could she imagine a life without him? She was used to him used to his naughty comments. Dint her day begin either with waking up next to him,looking at his smiling face,the days when she would get up later than him she would involuntarily hug his pillow and sleep for some time engulfed in his familiar smell which made her feel safe. The nights when she would feel cold she would snuggle close to him drawing comfort from his body warmth.when ever she had a bad scary dream he would pat her head sleepily and put her back to sleep. Dint she always think wat his reaction would be when ever she dressed up everytime she wore the bangles he had given on her birthday she expected some comment. Dint her heart swell with pride when he had given his gym money to her mom?she always felt like a princess when he used to shower compliments and tried romancing with her. Knowingly or unknowingly she knew his fav dishes and stuff which he would never eat. He liked solving crosswords he loved animals and birds just like her.everytime he would give her a teasing look or smile she enjoyed the attention could she live without it? He had given her so many things which she never appreciated before the gajras the anklets the ring which he never gave her. she was scared of living without him his smile which encouraged her his eyes which were always full of love and admiration for her.rashi bit down hard on her trembling lower lip. Jigar must not die he must not. She could never forgive herself she had almost killed him physically and mentally.love was a funny thing. It could grow in most unlikely places.why was it that adoration in his eyes earlier was a matter of total indifference but now she would gladly do anything to see it.


This para is the best part of your os...loved it.
It'll clear many people's doubt that Rashi is not in love with Jigar. 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: BlackSonic


This para is the best part of your os...loved it.
It'll clear many people's doubt that Rashi is not in love with Jigar.😉

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@bold gals do it jitu !! Yup rashi loves jigar but she does not realize it she is dependent on him the day she looses him and his attention she will break down.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: amalaziz

fantastic OS..👍🏼

😊 glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
vibz...I'm speechless...

I've no words to tell u tht how beautifully u've written it...loved how u portrayed both rashi and jigar's emotions...and the last para took the cake...
hope nothing happens to jigar and rashi can express to him how much she loves him...

very very well writen👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_raji

vibz...I'm speechless...

I've no words to tell u tht how beautifully u've written it...loved how u portrayed both rashi and jigar's emotions...and the last para took the cake...
hope nothing happens to jigar and rashi can express to him how much she loves him...

very very well writen👏👏

🤗 thank u for such sweet comments. The last para is something every gal experiences some time in life rashi is no different. Rashi and jigar will survive all the ups and downs!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Vibz.. thats wonderful OS... hope rashi get back to her senses and start Loving Jiger & Family un conditionally :)))

Superb work.. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

🤗 thank u for such sweet comments. The last para is something every gal experiences some time in life rashi is no different. Rashi and jigar will survive all the ups and downs!



gr88...can't wait to read the next part...plzz update soon...and here's a big bear hug for u as well🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Excellent OS Vibha. Well written. More please. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Cool OS..read both the parts now.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
OMG vibbzyy it awesome !! So u kept ur promise..😉 i thought u forgot !!

U've explained every emotion really well . Love it !!😃

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