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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

that was an awesome os...loved it

Edited by sks21 - 13 years ago

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thank you for this insightful OS - it was an enjoyable read.

You have brought out his quandary he was facing with an interesting take on him contacting her on her mobile.

You have made him so possessive over her, for him to eventually seek her and take her back to their room for this matter to be cleared.

I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was so beautiful. It was just what should happen. Except the part about Gopi crying. I hope she is stronger by now. Anyways, this was beautifully written and so well put together. It is something that has possibilities in the serial. If only the CV's think like you...Thank you for making my weekend 😳

And two thumbs up for your talent in writing 👍🏼👍🏼

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JJ15

@JJ15

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

A beautiful OS. Needed this to keep me optimistic this weekend. I can actually visualise what you have written - the thoughts/feelings of your Ahem and Gopi are described precisely. Very musch alike the real Ahem and Gopi. Thank you for this wonderful OS. 😊

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Lovely OS Angel...we could actually see some scenes happening in SNS !!!

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Like, Like, Like, Like. Thank you for brightening my day.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Hetp
OMG...awesome OS ...loved it...was imaging the scene happening...n hope something related to ur OS also happens in the show in order to make Gohem love story ...a sweet lovely twist by showing this

Thanx much Hetal, I am glad u liked it.. 😊

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

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Originally posted by: sbp1971
Res.

For my Angel. Thank you so much for this.

I love, love this os so much. I have had many mood swings regarding this current track, only thing I have been hanging on to is the fact that he loves her very much. I know when he remembers he will hurt more for her then himself. He will regret not remembering those special moments and her special gift to him. I can see he will be even more considerate and loving. He won't miss any chance to make up for not remembering at first.

I can just imagine things to happen as you have written here and I thank you for this.

For the best agent and friend in the whole wide world.😉

Awww. thank u very much Babe... I definitely draw inspiration from your fabulous work and wish I could write like that. ⭐️

A BIG thank you for making my time on the forum fun and enjoyable 🤗🤗. U r just SUPER gurll... 😊

I am glad u liked the OS.. It is heavily dependent on the fact that Ahem was into Gopi pre-bhaang and his emotions were changing for the better. I refuse to believe his love would change after he realizes what happened on Holi. If anything the bhaang helped him loosen up.

As far as i am concerned it should be all happy and gay for GoHem from now on...😳