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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Thank you so much Angel for this fabulous piece of work...you are such a sweetheart and wrote so beautifully in these unsure times.

Edited by shruts18 - 13 years ago

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: abbay
😍hmmm!!!! 👏applause

Thanx much abbay...U r very generous... 😳

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sks21
that was an awesome os...loved it

Thanx much Kavya, I am glad u enjoyed reading it.. 😊

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: swasthi
Thank you for this insightful OS - it was an enjoyable read.

You have brought out his quandary he was facing with an interesting take on him contacting her on her mobile.

You have made him so possessive over her, for him to eventually seek her and take her back to their room for this matter to be cleared.

I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Thanx much Swasthi, I am glad u enjoyed reading it..

We did see him trying to get in touch with her earlier and then he got her a cell phone, so it is an extension of his bahaviour, I suppose..

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Beautifully written , I loved how ahem handled the situation. An amazing read ,well done

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: gmjudv
Great OS. TFS

Thanx much Uma.. I am glad u liked it..😊

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: varshu27
terrific OS angeli...loved it...

Thanx much Varshu.. I am glad u liked it..😊

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Shaz that was simply beautiful! 👏 👏 👏

I swear the recent epi's are really bringing out the cream of the creative juices on the Forum. I have never read so much delicious writing as the last few days! You guys are awesome!!!

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Dhabu89
That was so beautiful. It was just what should happen. Except the part about Gopi crying. I hope she is stronger by now. Anyways, this was beautifully written and so well put together. It is something that has possibilities in the serial. If only the CV's think like you...Thank you for making my weekend 😳
And two thumbs up for your talent in writing 👍🏼👍🏼

Thank you so much Rupal, you are way too generous... I am glad you enjoyed it.. 😊

Gopi, is stronger than before but she is emotional and this is a new territory for her. Ahem was giving her all the positive signals and then he forget.. she is bound to be heart broken..

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Joicej
A beautiful OS. Needed this to keep me optimistic this weekend. I can actually visualise what you have written - the thoughts/feelings of your Ahem and Gopi are described precisely. Very musch alike the real Ahem and Gopi. Thank you for this wonderful OS. 😊

Thank you very much Joice.. you are very generous.. I am glad you enjoyed the read...😊

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