OS: The after effect - Part III - Page 6 - Page 7

Well Harini...loved the end...finally Rashi & Urmi are caught...& Ahem saying, I know when my wife leaves myside says so much of what Gopi means to him...he loves her dearly & cannot even think of spending a moment away from her but at the sametime realises she is like this & would go & help anyone who needed her support !!!

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

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Harini , this was awesome... 👏⭐️

but again, as u said, even i feel, you have let go off her easily...

had this update been done a couple of days before... it would have been a fair ending... but today, i think u were too generous...but bravo u could still show hetal in a positive line😛

the scenes were super good harini... the saree scene, the clip one... so natural ...👏

Thank you so much harini... for this wonder OS.. and i loved the whole of it and i mean it😛

lets' just wish the CVs give a nice close to this..

but relations are like mirrors once broken... can't be fixed.. even if they are fixed.. there will be a mark on it... hope that does not happen in MM in future

Thank you so much Munni..😛
I know I let Hetal off very easily.. But I had not seen the Friday episode and the update was made before that😕
@Bold - Well said👏 That is my exact thought.. I do not think, relations, once broken can be fixed easily. Even when fixed they will not be the same.. It will be like a motor that went wrong once.. We will always be frightened that it will go wrong again..
I am sad that Hetal just does not realize that.. But then with her Java Dena attitude, it is no surprise she does..
I wish that we get to see proper justice done done to Koki and Gopi.. The CVs have done well.. They have to do well as we go forward😛

Originally posted by: sbp1971

👏Bravo Harinil. I just loved this last part. You are very generous indeed, because I would have chucked this after seeing Hetal today, but I hope this is how her realization is shown. Frankly I am tired of CVs always screwing up.

This was so good, and I read it as soon as you posted the update. I was hoping you would update today and you did.

Loved it and thanks so much.

I can't say enough for this wonderful OS.

Aww Shilpa.. Thank you so much..😳

I made the update before I actually saw the episode in total otherwise I would have chucked it too.. Koki is better off at Naani's and Hetal needs to suffer more and better before she even gets a little mercy...
I am hoping the CVs do it well this time especially as this seems to be the last chance. A good joint family is being broken and if we do not get to see proper closure and UrShi getting scot free again, then there is nothing that an make up for it.. Till now it was Gopi and her happiness.. Now the happiness of the entire family is gone due to the evil two..
Let us hope and see where this will lead us to😛

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

beautiful and perfectly written OS...absolutely loved it!!

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: rsk16

really awesome story.

Thanks Raunaka😛

Originally posted by: varshu27

great finish harini...u have been kind to hetal...i dont know if i would have been...i would like hetal to suffer some more in SNS though...

Thanks Varshu😛

I am not that kind.. I just did not watch the episode so naturally that saved Hetal😕 I second your wish.. I want her to see the actual result of not trusting a relationship of 30 years.. The day Jigar tells her he is tired of her advices about his relationship is the day she will realize that it is easy to hurt with words but difficult to make up for them..
I do not know how the creatives plan to take this further.. But am hoping for some good to be done and hope that the drama stays positive

Originally posted by: Jiggarr

Nyc update.it would have been more nyb if u cotinued it

Thank you.. I am glad you liked it😛
As for another update.. No.. Sorry.. I do not think I can do justice to bringing Rashi down and I dislike Rashi too much to make this a happy ending😕

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Harini, another super duper update to the OS. I am in agreement with everyone here. You let Hetal off easily. But then again, I hope even though Kokila is back home, she is still going to be a little distant from Hetal. Hetal needs to suffer for all the pain she is causing Kokila.

For someone to break a bond of 30 years over another person whom you just recently met, is called a relationship that never was strong or solid. Apparently, Hetal had all these thoughts in her, and Rashi was the cannabis to Hetal's state of mind. And all Hetal needed was to sniff some the S**T that Rashi was putting out and Hetal's brain took over. Sad to see this relationship come to this...

You have given Hetal a lot of leniency. She deserves much worse than this. But overall,l a fantabulous OS, and a fantastic job at putting it all together. I hope the CV's take some ideas from you about how to have Kokila and family move out and leave that Rashi to fend for herself. I can see Rashi do this in real. She is quite capable of all this drama...some we have already seen.

Thank you once again Harini for this wonderful piece of work 👏

Thank you Rupal😳 That was so nice of a comment..
And what can I say but yup.. Hetal was let off too easily..😕 All due to making the update before watching the episode.. I would have chucked it as Shilpa said if I had watched it😡
I hope the CVs are not as lenient as I have been and show us Hetal's sufferings a bit more.. She needs to realize that relationships are not toys to make and break
Her Java Dena will not work and some mistakes are unforgivable..
But one thing I am glad of Rupal is that even in my OS, I did not want Koki accepting all the responsibilities back. It is not fair to Koki nor is Hetal's mistake that easily accepted..
However Hetal may try, she has to see the effect of her stupidity.. I hope that happens soon and we get to enjoy😛

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing Love it

Cant wait too read the next part

Thank you..😃 Glad you liked it..
But this is the end.. I apologize..

Originally posted by: white.band

gud one . nice creativity. plz continue

Thank you😛 I am afraid this is the end of this small piece..

Originally posted by: abbay

👏

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: swasthi

Just read all three parts to your OS and have enjoyed reading the gradual realisation of Hetal and who means to most to her, and her desire to have what Kokila and Gopi have for each other.

You have clearly shown how intertwined both Modi families are and their symbiotic relationship that coexists between them.

Hope it is not going to end there Harini. One more update is needed to bring this whole drama to a close.

Thank you so much for your comment Swasthi😛
But I am afraid I do not have a 4th part.. I dislike Rashi too much to give this an unbiased ending.. And I still feel bad that I let Hetal off quickly.😉
But I am glad that you liked the way the relationships work in the Modi's.. That has been my biggest sadness.. By showing this split, the CVs are breaking not just one relation of 30 years but a lot more... Hope they handle it with care😕

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

You have let her off easily but it's very in tune with SNS!!

Kokila would have the same respect for Hetal but possible would keep some boundaries like she did here!!

I love that you showed the bond between Koki and Gopi, the little touches between them were gorgeous even though this was about the separation. Also loved that Ahem came to Gopi's rescue at the end!! Us GoHem fans need to see our GoHem!!!

Absolutely loved it!!!

Thank you so much Nazma😃
You have nailed it to the T😛
I just hope the CVs are not this kind and show Hetal repenting a little more.. But again as you said this is SNS.. Gopi would suffer for 2 years but Rashi's sufferings end in a couple of weeks.. 😕

You caught me @ Bold.. Actually the entire last paragraph.. Yeah.. If I am not careful my story takes a turn and it is GoHem and GoKi I am writing about😆... I couldn't help adding them in.. I love them so😳

Originally posted by: Vinder90

Read all three parts when i had the time, Itried reading 1 part at a time, but as soon as i quickly had a skim thru the first part before really reading it, SOm e bits in it, just GOT me hooked, AND i made up my mind: I was not gonna read this part by part:::

I waited till i saw all parts were over: AND then read it all , all parts at once :) ::: AND WOW,,,, extremely Awesome::: tooo goood:: Hetal getting let off easily, but no big deal, loved the story cohesion, great work:: it was basically like my brain opening up like a kettle, and someone pouring tea into it in a calm way , and me enjoying it as everything that you included how it flowed, was sooo GOood::: the feeling of taking in all parts at once from scratch pretty much was incredible, thanks a lot for this :)

Oh.. Thank you so much😳 I am glad I could write something that has a calming effect.. Actually writing this down calmed me down after Hetal's behavior at the beginning of last week..
But you are right.. Hetal was easily let off.. But then Rashi was let off in SNS in a couple of weeks so no surprise that Hetal will be let off in a couple of episodes🤢

Harini. I am speechless. That was sooo good. Read all three parts in one go and felt like I was reading the write up for an episode. That is talent with a capital T. Awesome.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin parts wish to see dis in d show

Thanks Tina😃

Originally posted by: navyab

Well Harini...loved the end...finally Rashi & Urmi are caught...& Ahem saying, I know when my wife leaves myside says so much of what Gopi means to him...he loves her dearly & cannot even think of spending a moment away from her but at the sametime realises she is like this & would go & help anyone who needed her support !!!

Well the relationship between Koki & Gopi seems to have become stronger both understanding each other & Hetal also realising her relationship with Koki will not be the same as it was in the past !!!

Lovely OS 👏

Thanks a lot Navya😛
Hmm... I wanted to just have a teeny bit of GoHem in this sad tale😆.. I confess, I added that for my own satisfaction.. I personally believe that Aham will have to be the wall between Gopi and the UrShi pair for she is helpless against them even if she does want to confront them.. They treat her like garbage only because they think only Koki supports her.. The day Aham stands and defends her, UrShi will see that they cannot take Gopi for granted anymore..😛
As for GoKi... I love that relationship.. I have believed that GoKi have always been complementing each other and their relation just grows stronger and better everyday😳
You are absolutely right.. A relation once broken is never the same😕

👏...You have portrayed Rashi's character so well...I hope CVs have something similar installed...Rashi needs to be thrown out for good...