OS: The after effect - Part III - Page 6 - Page 6

Originally posted by: aris22l

Loved this OS. I hope they show it that way in the serial too. I liked the way you showed Hetal's realization of what she had done. I understand, since this is an OS, you could not show Hetal's suffering to last for too long. And what to say about Kokila. She is something else. She is honest, upright and full of integrity and truthfulness. All these characteristics come across from you OS clearly.

I didn't understand the following paragraph where Gopi is taking leftover oil and has a blush on her face. Why does she need the oil and why is she blushing?

"Gopi vahu, it is enough. You go and rest too. It is already late and I know Aham does not like if you go late to the room. Now go and rest." Hetal was walking by when she heard Kokila's voice and saw Gopi come out with a small bowl of leftover oil and a blush on her cheeks. She greeted her and hurriedly left.

😆 Aris.. She is not blushing because of the oil.. She is blushing for Koki's statement before that..
I know Aham does not like if you go late to the room.

Gopi is almost a new bride . She is blushing because she knows why Aham gets angry if she oes late to the room.. 😉😆

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

😆 Aris.. She is not blushing because of the oil.. She is blushing for Koki's statement before that..
I know Aham does not like if you go late to the room.

Gopi is almost a new bride . She is blushing because she knows why Aham gets angry if she oes late to the room.. 😉😆

Oh,OK😳 But what does she need the leftover oil for😕

Originally posted by: aris22l

Oh,OK😳 But what does she need the leftover oil for😕

She is just taking it back to the kitchen to clean😆

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

She is just taking it back to the kitchen to clean😆

Amazing Love it

gud one . nice creativity. plz continue

Just read all three parts to your OS and have enjoyed reading the gradual realisation of Hetal and who means to most to her, and her desire to have what Kokila and Gopi have for each other.

You have let her off easily but it's very in tune with SNS!!

Read all three parts when i had the time, Itried reading 1 part at a time, but as soon as i quickly had a skim thru the first part before really reading it, SOm e bits in it, just GOT me hooked, AND i made up my mind: I was not gonna read this part by part:::

I waited till i saw all parts were over: AND then read it all , all parts at once :) ::: AND WOW,,,, extremely Awesome::: tooo goood:: Hetal getting let off easily, but no big deal, loved the story cohesion, great work:: it was basically like my brain opening up like a kettle, and someone pouring tea into it in a calm way , and me enjoying it as everything that you included how it flowed, was sooo GOood::: the feeling of taking in all parts at once from scratch pretty much was incredible, thanks a lot for this :)

amazin parts wish to see dis in d show