OS: The after effect - Part III - Page 6 - Page 8

I read both the parts Harini, they are just too wonderful.

Harini, read all 3 parts of ur OS now..

Originally posted by: Xarina

Harini. I am speechless. That was sooo good. Read all three parts in one go and felt like I was reading the write up for an episode. That is talent with a capital T. Awesome.

Thank you so much for the kind words Xarina😳 I am glad you liked it.. 😛

Originally posted by: Scarlet28

👏...You have portrayed Rashi's character so well...I hope CVs have something similar installed...Rashi needs to be thrown out for good...

Thank you.. I am waiting for the same thing Scarlet.. I really wish something good happens after the split.. It is disheartening in itself... But if something good happens from it then I am all for it..😃

Originally posted by: shruts18

I read both the parts Harini, they are just too wonderful.

I really hope they show something like this in the show.

Thanks for the wonderful OS.

I loved your way of portrayal of all the characters...Koki, Hetal, Rashi and Gopi just the way they are.

Koki- disciplined

Hetal - soft and clueless about anything

Gopi - as naive as ever

Rashi - cunning and useless

I loved the entry of Ahem in the end to save Gopi and Urmi hiding in the lawn! It was just too good!

Thanks so much Shruts.. This was just for my own sanity.. Hetal is really getting out of hand these days and her stupidity is just too much for words.. I know that Gopi will remain naive that is why I want Aham and Koki need to be the way they are😛

Originally posted by: sns_addict

Harini, read all 3 parts of ur OS now..

it was too good.. 👏

Hope it pans out similarly on the show too.. Koki was simply superb.. the way she handled the family tension w/o giving away any clues to anybody was A1. ⭐️

Thank you so much😛
Koki never lets her family down. She may be stern but she does not wash dirty linen in the public even if it is Rashi.. I am glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

loved it

Thanks 😛