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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update Rupal.. Already looking forward to the next part..

Good Job !! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Thank you Rupal for this lovely update...like the way your story is developing...awesome😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWW Rupal this is such a feel good OS ...Loving it !!! its really cute when Ahem calls Gopi 'gopijee' and Ahem teasing her in open is soo sweet , the hug part was so lovely ...hope u conitnue soon :D
Edited by sweetsugar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loving it more and more as u update . Rupal , u are doing a fantasic job , ur flirting ahem is irrestible. Can't wait for next update ,btw thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3...


It had been two days and Ahem and Gopi had been getting closer day by day. It was the day of Holi. And Ahem thought today is the day Gopi is going to know what is in my heart. And he had been waiting for this day for a long time now. And he knew that a year ago today he found out about Gopi's love for him, so it was time to see her reaction to his confession. He could not help but smile thinking about how she is just going to stand there going jee? He knew it was going to take a few minutes longer to comprehend what he had just said. He had already changed into his white Kurta and had seen Gopi in a beautiful light cream saree. He could not believe he had spent such a long time ignoring her. She had such simplicity to her needs and wants, and yet she had the power to make the simplest saree look sexy on her. Once he had seen her wear a saree that if someone else had worn it, would have been the ugliest saree ever. But his beautiful wife pulled it off so well, then he thought how does she do it? He thanked his lucky stars for her. She was beautiful, smart and was completely capable of handling this whole MM by herself and she would do it without any complaints, mistakes or problems. Unlike her cousin sister. Just the thought of her sister made him cringe. He was sad for his brother to have a wife like Rashi, and yet at the same time he was over the moon happy to have Gopi in his life.

Later in the morning, the whole family had gathered at the table for their breakfast before the guests started to arrive to begin the Holi celebration. Gopi and Ahem could not help but smile whenever they saw each other. Ahem used every opportunity to tease her and make her blush. Yesterday, while she was serving him, he caressed her finger in such a way no one else could see. Or when he winked at her whenever she looked at him, and that would bring on a dark shade of pink to her cheeks. Today he wanted to do something that would make her blush and sweat at the sight of him and so he went to his room after breakfast letting Gopi know to bring him his tea when she done. Gopi on the other hand could not fathom what had gotten into her Ahemji. He had openly flirted with her and even touched her in such a sensual way that she had almost dropped the serving spoon from her hand. She was enjoying the attention, and could not help but thank her Khanaji for the affection she was receiving from her husband these days. She also prayed that he would not stop. Some of the things he did would melt her, but at the same time she wished for him to continue doing it over and over again. All the ladies had so much work in the kitchen that she almost forgot to take tea for her Ahemji. Maji reminded her and said don't be too long we still have a lot to do before the guests arrive. Gopi nodded and made the tea and took it to their room. And when she walked in she put the tea on the table and when she was about to leave, she felt Ahemji grab her from behind putting his hand around her waist and pulled her to him. Ahem on the other hand had been waiting for Gopi and had hoped she did not forget his tea. When he heard her come, he stood behind the door and waited for her to put the tea down and grab her. He was going to kiss his wife on the mouth no matter what. And he was not about to take a no for an answer. So after she had put the tea down he grabbed her just before she left the room and pulled her to him and that brought on a vibe to his whole body that was very hard to ignore. He never knew that being so close to her would make him feel so turned on and so hot for his wife.

Ahem and Gopi stood there for a minute getting used to the waves of passion that was spreading thru both their bodies, caused by the closeness. Ahem then slowly turned Gopi around while still holding onto her. Gopi could not bring herself to look at him. She was turning a different shade of pink and then red. Ahem was so into her nothing could have brought him out of this hypnosis.Ahem held on to Gopi with one hand around the waist and the finger of the other hand was busy caressing her cheek very slowly, making her quiver at his touch. Gopi stood there with her hands on Ahemji's chest. She could feel his heartbeat as fast as her own heartbeat. She was still in awe at knowing this closeness was having the same effect on Ahemji as it was having on her. She slowly looked up at him and saw that he was looking at her with so much passion, need and want, and it was all for her. Ahem was so happy to have Gopi look at him and he could also feel her pulse at her neck and it was as strong as his and it seemed to beat with his. Kind of like being in sync with each other. How wonderful it was to hold her like this. And when she looked at him he could not help but lean and see what her reaction would be to their first kiss. Gopi saw her Ahemji coming close to her and she almost shivered in his arms in anticipation. They kept looking at each other while closing their distance and coming to taste the nectar the other had to offer. And when their lips were close to touching, Ahem looked at Gopi's lips and was happy to see them parted waiting to welcome him in. And on this side Gopi had her eyes on his lips waiting for the final touch. Just as their lips were about to unite she looked into Ahemji's eyes and saw him looking at her lips and she saw a kind of want and desire she never knew existed for her. And then slowly when their lips met they just barely grazed. Then Ahem pulled her closer and took the kiss a little more deep. He tasted her lip and gave Gopi a chance to taste his. They caressed each other lips slowly and when the need was so strong that neither could hold off, Ahem plunged his tongue into her mouth, and that move made Gopi moan. Her moan caused Ahem's desires to triple. They kissed each other and felt each other bodies respond to the desires that were being released. The kiss abruptly broke when the heard Koki calling out for Gopi. Ahem still stood there holding Gopi and smiled and said Gopi, do you have any idea how much I have wanted to do that for a long time. Before Gopi could answer they heard Koki calling out for Gopi again. Gopi looked at Ahemji pleadingly and said please let me go Ahemji, or Maji will come here and she will get angry. Ahem said fine, but tell me did you like it? Gopi blushed again and said I feel like I have been traveling in the desert wanting some water or anything to keep myself alive, and today after this kiss, I found the nectar that has brought me back from the brink of death. Ahemji, I feel like today is the first day of my life. Ahem kissed her quickly on the lips and said me too. Gopi, when you get a chance come back here. I want to kiss you now every chance I get. Gopi blushed and nodded. Ahem released her and said go, but remember there is more to come. Gopi didn't want to let go, but left while looking at Ahemji and she could see the longing in his eyes were the same as hers. They both wanted to stay there tasting each other forever. Ahem and Gopi smiled at each other before they both turned towards their work.

One by one the guests started to arrive and they were led into the garden where the Holi was to be played. Gopi was busy in the kitchen with her Maji making the last minute preparations. Gopi tried hard not to smile too much, but was not successful. Koki had seen her smile and just thought that she was excited about Holi. Ahem was in his room and he could not get Gopi out of his mind. Every time he tried he went back to remembering how he felt when their kiss had gotten more passionate. He knew he would not be able to hold off making love to her. But he was going to have to try. He did not want Gopi to think his love was physical. It was more deeper than that, and he would wait for her signal before he took that final step. For now he liked making her feel wanted. He knew she must have had a tough life without parents. No matter how much someone else loves us, parents are always going to be the most needed and wanted for a child. He knew Gopi thought of his mom has her mother figure and same with his dad. But now he had to make sure she felt loved by him as well. He wanted her to be so confident in their love that nothing could shake the foundation. After all the work was done, Maji told Gopi to go and tell Ahem to come to the garden to greet the guests and then he could leave. Gopi nodded and then she went to get Ahemji. She could not wait to go and see him, hoping and praying for another kiss. And when she walked in, she was fumbling with her saree pallu and told him what Maji said. Ahem got up and went to her and said I am ready to go, but first you promised me a kiss whenever we would be alone. And saying that he took her hand and pulled her to him and started to kiss her with more passion and more desire. Gopi put her hands around his neck and held on to him and let him take what he needed and she took what she needed. About what seemed like a hour, they came up for breath and they both looked at each other and Ahem said Gopi, I need to tell you something. Gopi looked at him and asked what? Ahem said Gopi, for the past few months I knew I felt more than friendship for you, but after the accident when I realized I almost lost you, I faced the fact that I am in love with you. And saying that he hugged her and said Gopi, I love you so much. I cannot live without you. I have to have you near me always. Promise me you will not leave me...then he looked at her and said...not even to spend a night at your pheer. Gopi had tears running down her cheeks and said I promise Ahemji. And then she said I love you too Ahemji. I have always loved you and I do not know anything else but to love you. And they both hugged each other and held onto each other. Then they both looked at each other and smiled and then Ahem said you go ahead and I will come shortly. Gopi just nodded and was about to leave but paused. Ahem asked what is it. And Gopi found it hard to speak her mind. So Ahem said you promised me Gopi, you would tell me anything...so what is it? Gopi looked down and said jee voh, I wanted to kiss you one more time before I leave. Ahem looked at Gopi in amazement and said my pleasure and pulled her tight to him and they both kissed each other with the same amount of passion and want as ever. And parting for them was harder than to have a limb cut off. So instead of staying in the room to finish his work he walked out of the room with Gopi to go and play Holi and greet their guests. Gopi and Ahem held each other while walking until they got to the common area where people would be around. They let go of each other and just smiled and both mouthed I love you...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstemfirst😆

Your last stanzas always rock Rupal!

Gopi pausing and turning to say to Ahem that she wants to kiss him one last time😳

Indeed their parting kiss was very passionate.

Nice update!😊

Edited by shruts18 - 13 years ago
Dhabu89 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Thank you Shruts...I am trying to keep it G rated...A first for me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Thank you Shruts...I am trying to keep it G rated...A first for me😆


I was really getting bored with hubby not in town and was writing one more OS😊

Glad you came and we can talk for a while😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Give me a minute...i want to make sure i am caught up with your OS😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS Rupal...Finally the colour of Love was declared on Holi by Ahem !!!😊

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