Dil khilte hai...The hearts bloom OS last part upd - Page 7

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so Cute Update Loved it Thanks for the pm!😃
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👏 That was so hot and sweet...continue soon.😳
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⭐️That was a lovely update rupal👏

superb confession and the relation is going great
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments...I am truly happy that you are all enjoying my OS. I hope I continue to write stories that will bring a smile on all your faces. I know many of you write stories that make me go gaga and I walk around with an idiotic smile for the rest of the day and that is my aim here😉 Thank you all for your beautiful comments...❤️🤗
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awesome!!👍🏼! and thanks for the pm!!!😳
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wow rupal loved readin this nyce OS n thanx 4 the PM...
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Omg that was absolutely beautiful , fantastic rupal , u made the confession very passionate and romantic.cvs can learn a lot from this scene when they are creating the confession scene for gohem.
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rupal that was a awesome update...loved it
loved ahem's confession...
very well written
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Rupal.. Loved the story.. Caught up with all three updates.. Lovely OS or SS..

Ahem is woooing with his own wife, but goo that Gopi is responding to him and know what is he doing with her :P,

Pleas e PM when you update the stroy..

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I think everyone here needs a picker upper. So I am going to try and add some more romance to my story😃 Hope you all enjoy it

Part 4...

In the garden Gopi went to see if she could help out her MIL, and Ahem went to where his dad and Kaka were standing. Ahem was making sure Gopi was within eye sight. Gopi also made sure to make eye contact with Ahemji as much as possible. They both would smile and be happy with the progression of their relationship. Ahem could not stay away any longer so he went to her...she was standing near the food table...and Ahem said Gopi, lets go back to our room. I think we were having more fun there, don't you think? Gopi blushed a deep shade of red and said Ahemji, please. I beg you. We cannot leave, Maji will be upset with me. Ahem then looked around and said look Gopi, and Gopi turned around to where Ahemji was pointing and Ahem said That part of the garden is empty. No one is going there, lets go and have some private time. And while talking and looking at Gopi Ahem winked at her. Gopi wanted to run from there, but she couldn't. Ahem then smiled and leaned in a little closer and said I cannot wait to get you alone again, Gopi. You are bringing me desires I never knew existed within me. I love you jaan. Just then Koki came and asked Ahem, what are you doing so close to Gopi vau. Ahem looked at his mom and then at his blushing bride and said Mom...jee voh...I thought I saw something crawl into Gopi's hair, so I was just making sure. Gopi at first looked scared thinking something crawled in her hair...then she saw Ahemji wink and knew he was only being a nathkhat as before. Koki said sharu. And then Ahem, left with no choice, left the ladies and went back to greeting his guests. Ahem looked for Gopi, but she was nowhere to be found. He thought his mom probably had her go and get something from the kitchen. And so thinking this to be a good opportunity, he went to the kitchen to get some time alone with Gopi.

In the kitchen, Rashi and Urmi were talking about how to make Koki look like an idiot in front of Hetal. Urmi said we should do some fake kalakari and make that Kagdi think we are doing something wrong and when everyone is gathered we tell the truth. This is the only way she is going to be put in her place. Gopi heard their conversations and gasped...why would Mami and Rashiben do this to Maji. Why do they hate her so much? Gopi was thinking about what to do and was spotted by Urmi. Urmi went to Gopi and started to blasting her about eavesdropping on their conversation. Gopi said no Mami, I was just getting some more water for drinking, Maji sent me. Urmi dragged Gopi into the kitchen so no one could see and then twisted Gopi's ear and said You are nothing but a cunning girl who will do anything to make yourself look good and make my Rashi look bad. You are a manhoos. Gopi had tears in her eyes and said Mami, I swear I did not hear anything. Urmi twisted a little harder and said are you talking back to me? Do you know what happens when you talk back? Gopi screamed again saying Mami please let me go. I promise whatever I heard I won't tell anyone. Urmi then said you think I am going to believe you...you have been after my and my daughters happiness since the day you came to live with us. You are always thinking about yourself and no one else. Don't forget Gopi, when...I am not saying if...WHEN you get kicked out of this house, you will have no place to go but back to RPN. And if you continue to make Rashi's life a living hell here, I will teach you a lesson you will remember for the rest of your life. And you know what else, I am going to make sure your in-laws and your husband see the real you. The manhoos gawar who only knows how to take away everyones happiness and give grief to everyone. My Rashi should have been the older DIL of this house, and as always you took that away from her too. Gopi wished to her Khanaji please Khanaji, I want to go back to my room and be held by Ahemji. I only want to be with him...please make it happen.

Ahem had a smile ear to ear thinking, I am going to give Gopi a kiss she is not going to soon forget. I am going to make sure she begs for more and then I will let her go. See how she likes it. He knew he would not be able to do it, but just thinking about her face and her blushing made him walk faster towards the kitchen. When he was on top of the stairs he heard a scream coming from the kitchen. He ran faster and when he got closer he heard the conversation going on. He could not believe his eyes or his ears. Gopi's mami was twisting Gopi's ear and threatening her. How dare she. Ahem walked into the kitchen and in a very stern and angry voice said let go of Gopi...NOW. Both Rashi and Urmi jerked around to see Ahem standing there fuming in anger. Urmi and Rashi went to each other for support. Gopi ran to Ahem and held on to him. Ahem returned the hug and held Gopi to comfort her and comfort himself that she was ok now. Ahem looked at Gopi and then he turned towards the evil duo pointed a finger towards both of them and said if I ever see you near MY Gopi again, you will see exactly what I am capable of. I will tell you one thing...Gopi is my wife. She is the woman I love and nothing that comes out of your dirty mouths is going to change that. She is not going anywhere. This is her house and she is going to stay here with me. And if you ever try and frighten her or make her feel helpless again I will make sure you are not only kicked out of this house Rashi, but that you and your mom will spend the rest of your life in jail. And you know what I can make it happen. He then turned his attention towards Gopi and said Lets go jaan, don't listen to useless people. I love you and so do my parents. And thats is all you need to know. He then held Gopi close to him and started to walk up the stairs. Koki saw them walking holding each other and she got irritated. She did not like her son showing affection like this in public. She decided to tell them this. She went to their room and saw Ahem hugging Gopi and shushing her cries. She walked in and said what is going on? Why is my Gopi vau crying. Ahem looked at his mom in the most angered way and told her what he heard in the kitchen and what he saw. Koki now knew her son had rescued his wife from the likes of the evil duo. Ahem also made Koki promise to not do anything yet. They will think about all this before taking another step. Koki reluctantly agreed and left. Ahem went to the door and shut it and took his wife to the bed and sat there holding her till she was calm again. All the while assuring her he loved her and they would never be separated from each other no matter what the circumstances.

The day after Holi, it was all quite at MM. No one was saying much. Rashi was walking around wondering when Ahem jiju's anger would boil over and call the police. Jigar had his own reason to be quite. Unbeknownst to anyone there, he had also heard the conversation that took place in the kitchen. Only Hetal was talking to Rashi. Ahem came home early that day from work. He had told his mom so and she was not happy but she also saw there was no arguing with Ahem and so she let it slide. As long as this was not going to become a habit of his. Ahem went directly to his room and on the way he was about to tell his mom to have Gopi bring him his tea. Ahem saw Rashi in the kitchen and decided to go there himself and ask Gopi for tea. When he entered he saw Gopi was making tea for him and said jaan, you knew I came home? Gopi said Maji told me you were coming home early. Ahem looked at Rashi and said I will wait here for you. Rashi thought she was going to be killed by the way her jiju was looking at her. Gopi got the tea ready and said lets go. Ahem smiled at Gopi and said lets go. When they were in their room Ahem made Gopi put the tea down and held his wife and said how are you? Gopi hugged him back real tight and said I am fine, but I missed you so much. The held each other for a while and then Ahem and Gopi both looked at each other for a minute leading them into another deep passionate kiss. Ahem had his left hand around Gopi and his right hand started to wander and landed on her left breast. His hand made circles around the mound and then he stopped. He looked at Gopi and said Gopi, I want to make love to you. But I don't want to rush you. So whenever you are ready let me know. Gopi blushed real hard and hugged her Ahemji. Ahem then lifted her and sat on the sofa and put her on his lap. He then said Gopi lets go for a drive. I want to go to my special place with you. Gopi smiled and then hugged Ahem by holding his neck and said that sound like fun, but Maji...Ahem said I have already told her and she said yes. Gopi looked at Ahem who smiled and then he said I have covered all our tracks...so let me have my tea and change and then we will leave. Gopi was about to stand up, but was pulled down by Ahem, who started to kiss her passionately again. Gopi and Ahem stayed there holding and kissing each other till Ahem knew if he did not stop...there would be no stopping him. And so he told Gopi let me go change and have tea real quick. Gopi kissed his forehead and said I will go and wait for you downstairs. Ahem said nope...you stay right here. Understand? Gopi nodded and moved to sit next to Ahemji. And after he finished his tea he went to change. They both came downstairs and Koki and the family were waiting for them. Koki handed Ahem a four tier tiffin and said you are going to go and have a picnic, and I don't want you to rush home. So I packed some food for you. If you want you can eat there or come back home and eat with us. But don't eat outside...ok? GoEm nodded and thanked Koki and they left.

Ahem held on to his wife's hand all thru the ride and when they got to that special place, the same on where he brought Gopi to cry her heart out, they got out and Gopi grabbed the tiffin and Ahem opened the trunk and took out a blanket. They walked to a private area...not easily visible from the road, and made their spot there. Ahem and Gopi both spread out the blanket and settled down. Ahem sat with his legs spread straight in front of him and his hands leaning behind him for support. Gopi was sitting there with her legs crossed, but then she just went with her instincts and leaned into Ahem's chest and held on to him. Ahem who was taken by surprise liked his wife taking the initiative to come to him without being told. Gopi then said Ahemji, you have given me so much happiness in the past few days that I feel like all my hard work and all my grief is washed away. Ahem sat up straight and held his wife and said Gopi you deserve more happiness than the last few days and that is what I am going to do for the rest of our life. He then put his finger under his wife's chin and raised her head and leaned in for a kiss. Their kiss was just a comfort kiss that turned passionate. Ahem was overtaken by his emotions and helped Gopi lie down and he got half on top and half on side of her. They kissed and Ahem felt like he was being tested by the Gods for control. He did not know if he could hold out much longer. The want for his wife was getting stronger and stronger. When they broke the kiss and came up for air, they just looked at each other and Gopi said Ahemji, I want to be yours in every sense of the word. I want to be your friend, your partner, your wife and also your lover. Ahemji, I cannot stay away from you much longer. Ahem looked at his wife and said I am happy you are ready. Because if I have to kiss you without doing anything else, I would not be able to handle it much longer. They both held each other and then Gopi said Ahemji, I love you and I want to become yours tonite. Ahem looked at her and said I love you too, jaan. And I also am looking forward to becoming one with you. They went back to kissing and then stayed there holding each other till their stomachs reminded them of their hunger for food. They sat up and ate what was packed and then after they were done, Ahem suggested a walk. Gopi was thrilled at the idea. They picked up their stuff and locked it safely in the car and went to walk around the isolated park. The held on to each other and talked about nothing but everything they want to see in the future.

At around 7 in the evening, just before it got dark, GoEm returned home and Koki was only too happy. She worried about them being alone in the dark. They returned the tiffin and said they had already eaten. They both sat with the family and chatted till it was time for bed. Gopi had left earlier saying she wanted to finish up some work in the room before Ahemji came to sleep. Gopi went to the room and decorated it like it was their SR. It was of sorts. She then went on to wear the saree Ahemji gifted her on Navratri. Ahem had come into the room when Gopi was changing and felt pride and passion for his wife. She had done this for him before, but he was too ignorant to have appreciated it. And today he was over the moon thinking I finally have a loving partner and wife whom I love with all my heart. He locked the door and when he turned around he saw a vision standing in front of the bathroom door. Gopi stood there with her head bowed and the pallu on her head. He could see her blushing. Gopi had shut all the lights and the only light in the room was coming from the candles she lit. But Ahem could see her and knew she would be a couple of shades darker than that saree. He went to her slowly and held out his hand for her. She put her hand in his and they both walked towards the bed.

My next update is going to be for members of 18 and older...so please beware😳

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