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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Ur story lne is awesne I keep cheching on update please update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Will ahem and gopi be together
Love it but sad at the same time

Pm me when you update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-9

Ahem woke up and ordered green tea and then had a light breakfast. He shouted at the waiter for the delay in service. He wanted to go out early so he felt as if the every body there was conspiring to make him late.

Aham's cab arrived just in time and he asked his driver to go to Sevakshetra bus stop. Ahem's mind worked overtime thinking about the possible ways in which Gopi could react. He didn't want to mess things up so he tried his best to be prepared for any eventuality, he didn't want to confront her on a busy street but he had no other option. Ahem ordered the cab driver to park near the hospital. Ahem wanted to talk to Gopi before she reaches the bus stop in order to avoid creating a scene.

Ahem waited for 10 minutes and was getting impatient but the wait was worth it and he was rewarded by a sight he could not believe. She was wearing a stylish pale sky blue sari with a sleeveless blouse, she let her hair open and was walking confidently. Ahem couldn't believe that Gopi could look so graceful. He noted that she was looking taller, must be the heels he mused. The closer she came the more beautiful she looked. Finally, as she she came within two foots Ahem called out Gopi.

Gopi turned and her face betrayed the shock she had. She saw Ahem and stood still , here was the man who had deserted her seven years ago... and never ever contacted her ..and now he is standing right in front of her. Her life with Ahem came flashing before her eyes. Ahem went forward and held her shoulders. Ahem's touch woke her from the trance and she took a step back and asked " Ahem what are you doing here"?

Ahem replied with a voice full of affection - To meet you my love. I want to sort out problems between us.

Gopi replied by saying that she has moved on and now there is no "us".

Ahem held her hand and asked her to give him one more chance. Gopi withdrew her hand and asked him to not create a scene on the street as her family lives nearby and they are respectable people.

Ahem flared up and said " family? what family ? your family begins and ends with me"

Gopi walked off in anger but Ahem held her inappropriately, she tried to free herself but she couldn't . Ahem then said - "Gopi we need to talk. Even I don't like to do all this fuss on the streets, we need privacy so come to my hotel room and we will discuss things. Gopi knew Ahem very well, she knew that she can't talk him into freeing her. She could see curious onlookers so she finally agreed to go with Ahem on the condition that he won't talk anything till they reach the hotel. Ahem agreed and they began their journey towards the hotel...and their life too set off on a new journey.

Gopi prayed to Kanhaji for help. It was difficult to say whom she was afraid of - Ahem or herself.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Read all ur updates now. Why did u stop? I want it to continue. It was really nice reading a story where gopi moved on in her life. Pl continue soon. Dont u dare kill our bangalore huduga nalin.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read all the updates and loved it dear very different loved it
so what will happen now??very curious...
and happy that ur story takes place in bangalore😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

Read all ur updates now. Why did u stop? I want it to continue. It was really nice reading a story where gopi moved on in her life. Pl continue soon. Dont u dare kill our bangalore huduga nalin.


Thanks. will update by noon...don't worry no one will kill Nalin ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sks21

read all the updates and loved it dear very different loved it
so what will happen now??very curious...
and happy that ur story takes place in bangalore😊


Thanks😊. I know only two cities well so had an option to set it either in Punjab or in Karnataka...finally I decided to serve bisibele baath with dhokla😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: feviewer


Thanks😊. I know only two cities well so had an option to set it either in Punjab or in Karnataka...finally I decided to serve bisibele baath with dhokla😛


lol nice combination bisibele baath with dhokla...
really u have mentioned all the places perfectly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part- 10

Gopi threw nervous glances at everybody as she entered the hotel, what would people tell? What will Nalin think if he heard about it? . After entering the room, she noticed that Aham was putting Do not disturb sign on the door. Gopi immediately told Ahem that she has to go soon as her employers have a new dress collection coming out soon. Ahem ignored what she said, so she added that she is a married lady and staying in a hotel room with him will tarnish her reputation if someone sees her.

Ahem was seething in anger, he shook Gopi and said- remember one thing- you are my wife in both legal and moral sense. Getting close to me is not immoral.

Gopi cried out that she has moved on and is now a mother. She told him that she wants to give them all the love that she was deprived of. She begged Ahem to find a suitable girl and marry her. Gopi also asked forgiveness for the bad time she gave to him during their marriage.

Ahem got emotional too. He told Gopi that he can't forget her confession on their first holi as a married couple. He was blind to not see her pure love towards him. He begged Gopi to give him one chance to make amends and turn over a new leaf. He held her close to his heart and said -"Gopi I want your love - all of it".

Gopi made further pleas but they didn't work on Ahem. Gopi knew that they never worked in the past and they won't work now too. She wasn't afraid of that, what really scared her was the fact that her own pleas were half hearted . Thoughts about Ahem hit her heart like waves hitting the shore. She had prayed to God to make Ahem accept her - and Kanhaji did accept her prayer - but a little too late. Suddenly a thought came to her mind - Was it really too late? Gopi didn't have an answer for that. She tried to shake off the thought but it clung to her. Ahem was right in front of her and she knew that he loves her now but she didn't know what to do about that.

Was it God's signal or was it the signal of her doom? She remembered how she wanted to be close to him, how much she wanted to put his head on her lap and feel his face...how much she wanted to rest on his strong shoulders...how much she wanted to feel the warmth of his body.
Gopi felt as if she was going mad, all her defenses have broken down and she can't think straight any more. She tried reminding herself that Ahem was her past but her heart told her to plunge into the depths of her feelings.

Gopi embraced Ahem and told him "Ahem why did you leave me? I love you more than myself"
Gopi was like an nation whose soldiers have deserted, all Ahem had to do was to move ahead and conquer her...she was willing to be ruled over by him.

Ahem made his conquest and Gopi rejoiced her defeat. They slept peacefully and were woken up by a call on Gopi's cellphone. She was rudely awaken to the reality - it was Nalin's call. She froze and Ahem came close to her and felt her again and asked whose call it was?...Gopi stammered NNN Nalin. Ahem received a jolt and he cut the call...soon an SMS came informing that he will be a bit late today as his project is behind schedule.

Gopi knew that she had to go back to her house but she was scared of facing Nalin. After Gopi wore her saree again, Ahem said come let's eat something and then let's rush to the airport . He smiled and said that he booked a ticket for her as he knew that she is still in love with him. Gopi declined - she asked him to not rush things - her kids will be traumatised if she leaves like this so she'll make some excuse about some fashion show in Mumbai and fly to Rajkot .She urged Ahem to give her two days time...and she'll spend a week with him.

Ahem reluctantly agreed and arranged for her to be dropped home - But before leaving he made Gopi promise him one thing - She won't allow Nalin to touch her.
Edited by feviewer - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wow it so lovely i must say just one thing hope gopi dont do some mistake now as i love if she live with the kids nalin now ahem must get the punishment when u do next please on your update pu num of pg will know on which pg we need to go please dont get angry if i hurt u 😊

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