OS: Husband and Wife - Note-Pg4-please read it

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Munni, well done on your serious OS.

A super title but while reading it hunted for this only to envisage smart Ahem applying reverse psychology to his mum. He has had enough of her. Hope he realises this in the show as well and teaches her a lesson too.

Now you can try your hand at another serious one.

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Xarina

@Xarina

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Absolutely amazing. I think you put it all together perfectly. The irrationality, the sacrifice, the consequence of blinkered actions and the conclusion. Well done.

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SriB

@SriB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

A very well written OS. Finally atleast in an OS Ahem is thinking about Gopi and their relation and where it is going. In the show it is in a limbo o like two steps forward and ten steps backward.

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@Arnisha

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

res amazin amazin wuld love sumthing like this to happn in serial very well written loved reading it... keep up the gd wrk..

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Really nice!! Why did u leave kagdi so easily? Ahem needs to taunt her more!!!great os.

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Good 😊. Ahem and Gopi have no relation as such and Kokila is putting too many strictures. Swift action is required and if they are incapable of making Kokila see sense then they should go for annulment . What sort of marriage is it ? No one did this kind of experiments in the past, however conservative they might have been. Ridiculous reasoning

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Fantastic munny, Aham needs to make her realise that she should stop living her life through him now, his been an obedient son, but his working all the time does deprive not only himself from his wife's company but her, from having a caring husband and she needs that, she didn't enter only to serve him and his family but also to have something in return and not only a roof over her head and her food, as that is not marriage, I can't think of another name for that, can you munni?

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kanajigokul

@kanajigokul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

what an excellent OS? it was really wonderful👏. made me to cry

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Beautiful OS, I like the way Ahem thinks and manipulate Kokila into realising her mistake.

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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

fantastic os munni...u seem to excel in both funny and serious stuff...ive been maintaining for a long time that koki treats kinjai and gopi differently...though she says shes like a mother to gopi...thanks for showing it to koki...ahem and gopi sacrificing for koki and suffering silenty was heartbreaking...thank god ahem came up with a way for koki to see sense...loved it...

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