My first OS... Saath part 5 updated (page 8)

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

What an awesome day they have had. It felt that this place was truly magical that brought Ahem closer to Gopi.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

That was just perfect. I always have said that if there is anyone to bring Koki round to thinking like a mother it would be naani. Love the song as well.

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

really very very nice story... too good...

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

fantastic update...loved it
well written👏

Edited by sks21 - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@Mandy20

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

superb update!!! thanks for the pm!

Edited by SNS_fan101 - 13 years ago

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@MereMahiyaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Awesome Update but Half of the story was in Hindi soo didnt understand all😔

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scorpian87

@scorpian87

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

loved it 👏cant wait for another part😊

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IF_Rocks

@IF_Rocks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Awesome Update but Half of the story was in Hindi soo didnt understand all😔

sorry... :( will try and add English translations next time...

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IF_Rocks

@IF_Rocks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Thanks everyone for your appreciation... will try add the next part soon... :)

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Hey Saathiya...loved the update...it was so nice...Nani explaining Koki...family going to the market...Ahem & Gopi losing in the game ...it was fun...the night bought the special time for the couple...with 2 more day at hand...lets C who woos whom !!!

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