FF:Where were you? pt 12 pg 13updated - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am so sorry for the delay, ive just been so stuck with homwork and assignments, still am, but i thought i'd take a break before studying again :)
PART 12:
Before gopis "Naahi"
AHEM: Fine than gopi, if you can sacrifice your love for anita, then i am going to sacrifice my life for you. You wont have to go away and anita wont fight with you or cause ny harm to you becasue of me.
ahem was really that ready that he would sacrifice his life but he had to stop gopi somehow. gopi and ahem were both anxious. gopi saw the gun heading towards his head. she couldnt take it anymore. thats when she yelled 'Naahi', she ran upto ahem and took the gun and chucked it on the floor. she hugged ahem and was crying heavily. (just imagine that scene when she got caught cheating and she hugged ahem except ahem hugs her back in this one). when gopi finally talk properly, she questioned ahem angrily.
GOPI: Why, ahem, why??? yeh sab kyun ahem?
AHEM: Cant you see, because i am in love with you.
ahem and gopi could not let go off each other so they decided that they were gonna go to a park to get some fresh air and sort things out.
meanwhile rashi rang jigar.
RASHI: JIgar, ive been trying gopi's phone but its not available. she hasnt even called me or replied to my texts and even lastnight she left so early. Jigar, there is something wrong.
JIGAR: Rashi, i'll tell you where gopi is on one condition.
RASHI: Kyaa, what condition??
JIGAR: First you will have to say i love you,
RASHI: Excuse me, just because i am your fiance, it doesnt mean...
JIGAR: SHOOOSH, you have to do as i say, otherwise there will be punishments
RASHI: Fiiine, i love you
JIGAR: i beg your pardon, i didnt hear anything, could you say it louder?
RASHI: I LOVE YOU!!!! are you happy now??
JIGAR: Indeed i am, but umm, i dont know where gopi is?
RASHI: say whaat??? jigar...
JIGAR: I love you too, bye.
beep,beeep, beep. there jigar left rashi hanging while ahem and gopi were trying to sort things out. gopi told ahem that she wanted to take things slow and she didnt want anyone to know. ahem was understanding gopis request as he too didnt want anyone to know either.
at modi bhavan, there kinjal was, planning something. she stood near the stairs and saw her kaki and ma talking. she went downstairs thinking that somehow she needs to get rid of her kaki ji.
KINJAL: Kaki, woh, mani is calling you, she needs some help.
Hetal gets up and leaves.
KINJAL: Maa, have you considered ahem bhais marriage
KOKILA: kyun?? why?
KINJAL: No, coz i was thinking that jigar bhai is going to get married soon and wouldnt it be nice to see the two brothers getting married together and the two bhabi's entering at the same time. i mean ahem bhai is even older the jigar bhai. and ma, ...
...
...and dont you think that this idea would be good.
KOKILA: your idea is good, and plus ahem did say that he would get married to a girl that is a choice of mine.
Kinjal stood up in anger, her mother wasnt even listening to her. she went upstairs immediately and tried to think but dhaval disturbed her by calling her.
Sorry guys this was short but i really need to get back to my studies. cyazz, hope u enjoyed and please like or comment. kindly appreciated😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Wow Part 11 Amazing love your writting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Jeej Part 12 Updated Amazing Loved it
Loved the phone call of rashi and Jigar
realy hate Kinjal little witch hope se get soon her punishment!
Cant wait too read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..! nice update.. love raji phone convo..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
love it gopi stop ahem hope kinjal dont bring anita
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
nice update dear!!!! update soon!!!1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what has kinjal got planned,
and raji convo so cute, he only wanted her to say i love you.
adorable stroy, please continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its a lovely storyline and rashi and jigar are cute. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: svtsns

Its a lovely storyline and rashi and jigar are cute. Waiting for the next part.

oh wow, thank you so much😃
except on what page did you find this ff😆

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