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Posted: 13 years ago
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as a request, i have tried to make this one lenghty. 😊 chirag will be added to the story though he will not have much to say.
PART 7:
Jigar: Rashi, i have a couple of ideas going through my head.
Jigar quickly told Rashi his ideas and rashi thought that the ideas were good. gopi and ahem will definitely start falling for each other.
Rashi: shoosh, jigar quickly talk about something else, both of them are coming.
Ahem: hey guys,
rashi & jigar: hey ahem bhai
ahem: do you know whether gopi is coming today?
gopi: goodmorning everyone
rashi: looks like you got your answer.
jigar: bhai, lets go, we have to go to class.
jigar and ahem left for class even though ahem didnt want to leave right that moment. gopi told rashi how urmilla left for her world tour, and luckily didnt tell her to do extra chores. gopi officially had freedom for two whole months. rashi was happy for her and told her that they would go shopping everyday after college. gopi didnt entirely agree to that. soon it was lunchtime. rashi told gopi that she needed to go to the library. gopi agreed to go, on the way she realised that her dhaval bhai wasnt at college. rashi noticed that too. rashi assured gopi that he is fine and maybe something important has come up. when they got to the library, gopi was surprised to see ahem and jigar there.
rashi: jigar, ahem, what are you guys doing here?
jigar: woh...i was going to ask you the same thing.
rashi: well i needed to come here, needed some research for something. jigar, i need you to come somewhere with me...is that okay?
jigar: sure...ill come
rashi: awww...you r shawww shweet
gopi: rashi...jigar can stay and ill go with you
rashi: no its okay, ill be back soon.
rashi quickly grabbed jigar's hand and powerwalked out of the library. ahem and gopi just stood there awkwardly. ahem made the first move and asked gopi if she wanted to sit down. gopi agreed to sit. soon gopi and ahem started talking and wouldnt stop. ahem made gopi laugh and then ahem made himself laugh when gopi laughed because he was trying to be serious. ahem found gopis smile and gopis laugh absolutely adorable. meeanwhile, jigar and rashi were looking through a window that was open a little bit. rashi and jigar were so happy that their plan actually worked. rashi gave jigar a kiss on the cheek because she was so proud of him. jigar then became super happy.
jigar: i didnt see that one coming...
rashi: well, dont expect too much from me, im still angry from yesterday
jigar: what did i do yesterday?
rashi: i would've been a little happy if you tried to propose to me...you didnt even say that you will.
jigar: dont worry rashi, when the time is right...i will
rashi smiled, how could she be angry with her jigar. no matter what he does, his smile just makes rashi forgive him.
As the days passed, gopi and ahem were becoming friends and soon good friends. dhaval came back to college after a couple of days. everyone was so happy to see him as he cheered the place up. dhaval had gone with his kaka on a business trip to see how it is all handled. when dhaval came back he, was so proud to see his best friend and his sister getting along so well. everyone had seemed to forget about the dinner plan that dhaval made, apart from one person and that was ahem. ahem didnt say anything though because what would be the point if he couldnt go, so he just kept quiet. they were all talking when something fell out of gopis bag. it was her wallet. ahem picked up this wallet saying "oh what is this i found?" and was about to open it when suddenly he heard a loud voice saying " no ahem!" ahem was surprised that gopi could even yell. this was his oppurtunity for gopi to get close to him.
gopi: ahem, give it back!
ahem: you want hey, well guess what? tough luck
ahem ran around the college with gopis wallet and gopi was chasing after him until gopi grabbed ahem's hand and tried to reach her walllet that was above ahems head with his arm waving around with it. ahem was having fun teasing gopi like that. it was a new side to her. gopi jumped and jumped until she finally got her wallet. when ahem and gopi finally came to into reality, they found to be in each others arms and eyelocking each other, they were standing on the edge of a hill. then unexpectedly ahems foot had slipped, causing them to roll down together. when they reached flat ground, ahem found himself to be slightly on top of gopi. gopi was on the floor with her light pink dupatta covering her face. ahem pulled the dupatta off her face and both were in la la land again. out of the blue, dhaval jigar and rashi came back into the picture.
dhaval: there you guys are, we were so tired of looking for you guys, hey jigar and rashi?
gopi was embarrassed and so was ahem so they finally got up and ahem helped gopi get up.
jigar & rashi: yeah, dhaval is right you know, we were wondering where you got off to?
college had seemed to finish fast that day and jigar and ahem went home with the driver. ahem was sitting in the car and started day dreaming about gopi. on the other side of the road, gopi was having the same problems in rashis car.
jigar: bhai...bhai...bhai!
ahem: yeah,
jigar: woh bhai, i need you to come with me for a double date on valentines day?
ahem: jigar, you know i cant,
jigar: i know bhai, but somehow ill convice maa to talk to kaki about it. so will you come? i really need you there and pluse your date can be gopi.
ahem: only if kaki convices mom.
ahem was only hoping that his mom says yes after hearing that gopi was going to be there. at the same time in rashi's car, rashi was talking to gopi about the same thing. gopi had agreed to go before rashi saying that ahem was going to be there too. infact rashi didnt tell gopi.
the two boys arrived at the modi mansion. meethi seemed to open the door and no one was there. so both of the boys went to their rooms to freshen up. ahem was still in his room and jigar went to see if his mum was in her room. jigar knocked on the door and entred the room.
jigar: jai shree krishana maa
hetal: jai shree krishna dikra, come inside
jigar: woh, maa...i needed to talk to you
hetal: what is it beta?
jigar: maa, im taking rashi out to dinner on valentines day and i was wondering if you could convince kaki ji to allow aheme bhai to come with us?
hetal: i could help you, but im sorry jigar...you will have to do the asking yourself
jigar: but maa, how can i ask kaki ji, ill never be able to convince her
hetal: jigar dikra, beleive in yourself, lets go downstairs and you can ask her.
jigar: ok maa
ahem goes downstairs before jigar and greets everyone. soon after that, hetal and jigar came downstairs. hetal nudged jigar to ask kokila.
jigar: kaki ji, i was wondering if ahem bhai could come with me tomorrow as i have some important work to do and i need his help.
kokila: sorry jigar, but ahem isnt allowed to go anywhere after college, he has betrayed me. (ahem looks guilty and doesnt look up)
hetal: jaava dena kokila...
kokila: naahin, mota bhabi, ahem...
chirag: kokila, let him go, if jigar has important work and he needs his brother then you should let him go.
kokila became angry inside but she had no other choice but to let ahem go with jigar. jigar was proud of his dad, but he wondered how his dad knew about it. when everyone left, jigar stopped his dad to talk to him.
jigar: papa, thank you
chirag: you welcome beta
jigar: papa, how did you know that...
chirag: woh, jigar, i overheard you and your mum talking...i know what it feels like to be young.
jigar: thank you so much papa, this really means a lot to me.
what has jigar got planned for valentines day and are gohem going to confess their love for each other on their date?
Edited by ashy924 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Amazing Update loved it
Cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Amazing updates. Cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
great update! can't wait to read what jigar has plannd for gohem!😉
update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
that was an amazing update...waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

thank you so much for your comments guys...i really do appreciate it, im glad your enjoying it,😃

Edited by ashy924 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
this story is way better than the show!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
that was an amazing update...plzz include more of raji in the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
This is awesome
Awww I loved how u got them guys to help Dhaval and Gopi reunite
wooo no urmi for 2 months - hopefully Gopi grows in confidence - what about Anita though???
Hope Ahem manages to teach kinal a lesson or two - stupid girl
I like Rashi and Jigar in this
ufff Kokila will always remain the same - gotta love her for tht though
Hetal is a softie and she admires Gopi n Rashi tooo - wooo
Looking forward to the double date ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
cant wait for next please come soon yaar so lovely

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