FF:Destiny Last part pg102 (Thank you pg 109) - Page 57

Originally posted by: vibz88

Shilpa are you updating now?

Sorry Vibah, but no, I only have like one page written and not even that good yet.

I hope to update by the end of the week, still working on the SS.

Thanks so much and sorry for the delay, but I have house renovations in the works right now that are driving me out of my mind.

Originally posted by: svtsns

Amazing update and how beautifully u have worked on hetal koki , jigar gopi . Jigar and rashi jigar, koki gopi and ahem and koki relation. Loved it. Ahem and gopi are just perfect i hv no words for them.

Thank you so much. Glad you like the update and the story.

I just love for the whole family to get along without any major drama. I had intended to keep this based on Gohem love only with other characters for support and it has worked well so far.

Originally posted by: abhiyaa

Beautiful as always 😃

w8ing for next one.. 😊

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the update.

Will update soon, still working on it.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing Update Shilpa Just Love it!

Hope everything will be good its nice ahem try too talk too Kokila

Just love the arguing of Jigar and Gopi!

Thanks for the Lovely Update

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Everything will be fine, but for now we will enjoy Gohem marriage.

Will update soon, still working on it.

Originally posted by: Joicej

Shilpa ben,

Interesting update..

For a moment I thought Jigar was back to being the old Jigar😕. Gopi was quiet bold in that update.👏 Took me by surprise that little scene between Jigar and Gopi.

But the best part for me was when Kokila got really happy because Ahem spoke to her. That was touching.

So Gopi has money deposited under her sister's name- that's interesting. Is this going to change her views about Gopi? Is she after the money?

I must say your Ahemji is ADORABLE. 🤗

Thank you. 😊

Thank you so much Joicei. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Jigar is pretty much back to being normal, yet he can't resist getting a rise out of Gopi, little does he know she's got his number also and doesn't hesitate to do the same to him.
Mother/Son duo has long way to go but it's a start.
Thank you again, will update soon.

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Sorry Vibah, but no, I only have like one page written and not even that good yet.

I hope to update by the end of the week, still working on the SS.

Thanks so much and sorry for the delay, but I have house renovations in the works right now that are driving me out of my mind.

selfish me would not mind asking you to post that one page also lol and am sure its fantastic:-) house renovations seems fun enjoy!!! Will wait for the weekend :-)

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

i just adore this FF,very creative and fabulous update!loved it!

Thank you so much Nihira. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Will update soon.

Originally posted by: navyab

Lovely part Shilpa 😊 Ahem realising that given a choice, Gopi will back out & hence he immediately decided to get married not giving her a choice to say no !!! He know about each & everything about her...the dress her aunt got it for her...he knows she got it made with full love so he is getting her to wear that on their special day !!!

Well the ring...& his thoughts behind it were beautiful & Gopi accepting it after hearing...she finally realised how much he loves her...even after all of this she thinks it will be just friendship between them...then she is fooling herself !!!

Even though her realtionship with her parents is worse...it has not made Gopi synical about parents...she is supporting Ahem in becoming the son he was & helping him bridge the Gap with his parents !!!

Well Koki & Hetal are showing what is mother's love to Gopi & since they have accepted her in their heart they are all there to show support to her ...but will this support cotinue when they get to know she may never be able to conceive ???

Well as I said earlier in one of my posts in this FF...Jigar & Gopi will become best friends troubling each other but yet still one another for being part of their brother / friends life !!!

Gopi's family is yet to react to her wedding...will they take it as it is coming or will their hatred is yet to show it face !!!

And about Gohem love...anything said will be less...Ahem just knows how to get her to feel love, how to make her feel special, how to just care for her & be there for her...how do both plan to keep their relationship platonic, when both are stirring in passion of love !!! Well Ahem does not know the disfigurement...so how will he react...for her confidence in herself & in his love will be based on the 1st impression !!! And Gopi knows Ahem is deeply in love with her...so will she be able to withhold things which are eating her inside??

Will Gopi ever be able to rise above her insecurities, her pity to make Ahem feel special in love for Ahem will never complain as for him, she being with him is the greatest blessing...but what love is it that cannot make your lover feel special !!!

waiting for the next part 😉

Thank you so, so much Navyab. I just love reading your take on each and every one of my updates. It's like your analysis of daily Gohem scenes, always love reading those.

Ahem is one smart guy, and yes absolutely right he is not going to give her a chance to change her mind, so the quick wedding.

Gopi is in denial, she loves him to distractions and wants him just as much, but the fear holds her back. If she lets go of that she will discover a whole new side of Ahem that she has yet to realize, but lets let her have her false hopes for now.

This is what I like about Gopi, but there is also a reason for her not being cynical, you will be surprised. Let's leave it for now, it will come out soon after the wedding as they get ready for the double wedding.

Hetal and Koki are great and are not old fashioned, but at the same time they have not lost the basic cultural valus of their country. They are both very good for Gopi.

Yep I couldn't help but make Jigar and Gopi fighting friends, they understand each other more than they let on.

Gopi's family show their hatred by ignoring her and trying to intimidate when she does not react to their controlling tactics. No it is not yet over between them but soon they will realize that Gopi has a group of people who are willing to stand up for her and fight for her. And that she no longer needs their approval or love.

Knowing what you know about this Ahem, do you think he will turn away from her after seeing the physical deformity on Gopi? Or the fact that she may not be able to give him a child? Or do you think he will finally put all her fears to rest with his love?

Trust me this will all work out. No way will Ahem ever hurt his Gopi again.

Thank you again Navyab, I will update soon, just have yet to pen it down.

Originally posted by: A2ZV

Dear Shilpa, whenever I read the updates I get goose bumps. The romantic in me wants to become Gopi. Not that my hubby is less romantic, but this Ahem is the absolute killer. Thanks for writting it.

Thank you again Anna. Trust me I feel the same when I write about him. He is a killer.

Will update soon.

Originally posted by: vibz88

selfish me would not mind asking you to post that one page also lol and am sure its fantastic:-) house renovations seems fun enjoy!!! Will wait for the weekend :-)

Vibha I wish I could enjoy the loads of fun but at the moment I only want to choke my hubby for putting me in this situation, I have company coming on Thursday and if my kitchen is not in working condition I will be in big trouble.

I will see about posting a sneak peak tomorrow.

I am off to bed, supposed to be at work at 6am.🤢