This is such a sweet story and you have developed the plot well. I wish some one would make a movie of it with Giaa in it.
Why don't you send your story in to some filmy folks. There quite a lot of drama and enough suspense for Indian audiences (Looks like you like 'An Affair to Remember'). It doesn't have to be made in the US, all they have to do change names
Thanks again for a lovely story. Please continue to write