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Xarina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Lovely update munni. It is written really well. 👏

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

munniji!!!! dhanyavad for the pm!!!!!!!! nice progress of story!!!! plz update soon!!!

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

That was once again beautifully written munni. ...,love how the story is progressing...would love a little more of jigars back story next time... Thanks for the pm

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Munni the story is developing well.

This is their first proper meeting after the unexpected occurrence in his room that has changed their thinking for each other - and we can sense to awkwardness they are experiencing. Both have something more for each other.

Hope her dad is not in trouble.

Update soon.

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Amal Aziz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it.. Well Done!

👍🏼

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Nadiine_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

love you story its realy amazing Cant wait too read the next part!

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Munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
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Loved it Munni.. Very good update👏 It was fantastic.. And I kept smiling at Aham and Gopi's conversation and discomfort 😆

It looks like Aham and Gopi are really good friends and Gopi certainly wants more.. Jigar is so very serious 😕 What happened to the poor guy?
Thank you for the long update. The scenes were really cute. Gopi's obvious preference to her father and her being spoiled by both her dad and mom are all so real.. Great going 👏

Thank you harini for the wonderful comments...😛

yeah it was their initial conversation after a gap of 5 years... there were some initial inhibitions and discomfort... which will be cleared out with this meeting...

yeah jigar is too serious... he was not like this... but something happened which changed him...yeah gopi is the most pampered girl, mainly her dad spoils her

Originally posted by: sks21
munni that was a wonderful update...
loved it...ahem and gopi are so cute...
hope gopi's dad is not in too much trouble...
and very curious about curious past
update soon

thanks kavya dear...

Gopi's dad's problems are getting bigger and Jigar's past will come out in a couple of episodes

Originally posted by: kamjal
munni thank for the pm and love the update . what's cooking with Jigar and his past do tell soon and waitng for the next

Thank You Kamjal...

Jigar's past will be unveiled in the next couple of parts hopefully

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Munni, beautiful update.
I hope Gopi's dad is not in trouble.
Loved Gopi/Ahem interactions. So they are friends only but Gopi definitely have feelings for him. Ahem seems like he needs to grow up a little.
Jigar is so serious and workaholic too, nice to see.

Looking forward to next part.

Thanks you shilpa...for the wonderful comments...

yep Ahem needs to grow up a bit...he is just starting off ...he has been away for the last 5 years... he is back home ..he will eventually learn to take care of family members and be serious in attitude

Jigar is working mainly to cover up his past... he is hiding himself in a shell , in the name of work

Originally posted by: Nilu.Dasuni
munni thats superb.,and gopi is so cute in her behaviour
i want aham to step forward to their relation ship

Thanks Nilu...glad u liked it...

gopi is one cute girl, pampered by everyone mainly by her dad😃

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Munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: shruts18
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great update Munni!😊

really loved Gohem teasing each other and having fun well as feeling something for each other.

Looks quite like a filmy romance...great job! looking forward for more intimate love feelings for each other to happen😊

Thank you shruti...as of now they are very best friends.. we have to see who will have the initial feelings of falling in love😛

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan
that was awesome!!!i love your gopi...she so cute!!hope ahem realizes his feeling for her!!i wanna see some romance.over all great update!!eagerly waiting for the next part!please update soon!thanks so much for the pm.

Thanks Nihira...

yeah gopi in here is very cute and very pampered

Originally posted by: feviewer
It was a great update Munni. I read it just now coz I am at my in-laws place...can't spend much time on the forum😭

Thanks feviewer .. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: navyab
Lovely update Munni !!! Ahem & Gopi are realising that they are women & man ...a step beyond friendship...both are in some small way effected because of what has happened...so where will it go from here...what did 5 years of separation do to them ???

Their childhood was fun...Ahem being grounded was good...so Koki did not let him have his way as he grew up !!!

Where does the story go from here...waiting for the next update !!!

Thank You Navya...

very true navya... they are realizing that they are man and woman, two opposites and there is this awkwardness which has come along with the duration of separation...

Ahem was and is still naughty ...going further.. there will lot more twists ...

Originally posted by: 5cents
Munni, lovely long update...it was indeed a very nice read👏. All the scenes were cute & flowing so well. Gohem's conversation brought a smile on my face 😳. What's wrong with Jiggy?? Haila he so serious 😛 Keep writing it is going very well👍🏼

thank you tina... glad u liked it😃

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Munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: -Vrinda-
Nice part again
gopi and ahem 's part is well written...

thank you vrinda... glad u liked it😃

Originally posted by: hanaGoHem
MUNNI LOVE IT THX FOR PM ME CONT SO LOVELY

thank you hana... glad u liked it

Originally posted by: hansa2
munni res love update i hope gopi dad will not lose the company i love the way ahem n gopi was talking but i think ahem is not in love with her now may be later thx for pm me

thank you hansa...

yeah he is not in love with her yet... we have to see when he will fall in love with her

Originally posted by: Xarina
Lovely update munni. It is written really well. 👏

thank you xarina ... glad u liked it

Originally posted by: abbay
munniji!!!! dhanyavad for the pm!!!!!!!! nice progress of story!!!! plz update soon!!!

than you abbay...glad u liked it

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Munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: varshu27
That was once again beautifully written munni. ...,love how the story is progressing...would love a little more of jigars back story next time... Thanks for the pm

thank you varshu... glad u liked it...jigars flashback will come in couple of episodes

Originally posted by: swasthi
Munni the story is developing well.

This is their first proper meeting after the unexpected occurrence in his room that has changed their thinking for each other - and we can sense to awkwardness they are experiencing. Both have something more for each other.

Hope her dad is not in trouble.

Update soon.

Thank you Swasthi...

there is initial awkwardness due to the duration of separation coupled with their first meeting...

her dad's trouble seem to be on the rise going further...