Journey of being together - The first kiss !!! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maddy311

Awesome post navyab. Loved it 😃

Thank you Maddy !!!😉 I loved writing it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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navya beautiful analysis... and as usual i save it for the end of the day... to read it and assimilate it...gr8 writing,...


- the first para he was praying unusually long before the incident... did he pray to kanaji to give him strength to tell gopi and family about his going forward in the marriage...

- generally kiss breaks the barriers .. but here the kiss has created new barriers...

now i see jigar the only person to make ahem realize his feelings
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

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"What Ahem did not realise is that those few moments he had taken to understand what has happened & appreciate his wife's first kiss...he lost out on building a comfort for Gopi to tell her he enjoyed it...For Gopi, it was as if she has done something which was never to happen & thats the reason Ahem was moving away from her !!! "
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Great post Navya.. Could only reply now.. Totally agree with the above.. I do think Ahem missed out or rather did not realize the extent to which Gopi was terrified after the kiss.. Her actions told him that she was embarrassed but until he saw her shaking hands and later when she avoided bringing his tea, Ahem did not realize that Gopi is not just shy but is avoiding him. I am really confused about the last expression on his face. He looked thoughtful but also a bit angry? maybe.. Is he angry that his wife is now ignoring him?😳

Thank you Justlikethat...Yeah Ahem thought that things will fall into place when she would come into the room but her not coming bought disappointment to him...What Ahem has not realised so far is that it all his own doing that though knowingly or unknowingly as he was going thru a break-up...His last expression was one of anger+disappointment in him that Gopi has moved far away in the relationship & mayb he might just be little 2 late that... he has realised on it !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great analysis navya!
Wonderful episode. I wish they understand each other or atleast Koki help them to understand each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 5cents


Navya quite a comprehensive analysis dear👏 Ahem moved away from her to buy time...he'll be back with love & lust. 😳
Yes, Ahem missed out big time. Time was of essence there. He cold have just given her a pleasing look but Cv's want to play with it for sometime😉 No he was not angry at Gopi maybe frustrated at himself. I thought he was caught of guard & hence that reaction. He has given Gopi security now is the time for confession...action & reaction everything 😃.

Thank you 5Cents...all the words of appreciation on the forum give me the boost to carry forward 😉 Yeah time was the essence which Ahem did not realise & the distance in the relationship is because he is still in the first level of courting her & the kiss was out of scheme for him now..
So by the time he realised it, the distance has become bigger & he is now at stage where either he has to reach out to her & get it going or if he stands back then the relationship will see further distance which will hurt both of them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlackSonic

Great post. Sometimes we don't know what goes into their mind. Cvs can't show everything. So everyone has different opinions about their actions and emotions behind them. Its really nice to see your perspective. 😊

Thank you blacksonic 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANJ4

That was just beautiful

Thank you ANJ4 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

navya beautiful analysis... and as usual i save it for the end of the day... to read it and assimilate it...gr8 writing,...



- the first para he was praying unusually long before the incident... did he pray to kanaji to give him strength to tell gopi and family about his going forward in the marriage...

- generally kiss breaks the barriers .. but here the kiss has created new barriers...

now i see jigar the only person to make ahem realize his feelings

Thank you Munni...I also wait for your feedback on my writing...it gives me high 😉
Well I hope it will be Ahem who will realise what he has done in the past is effecting her & will put her & his heart in a comfort zone to share their feelings with each other 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gohem_ka

Great analysis navya!
Wonderful episode. I wish they understand each other or atleast Koki help them to understand each other.

Thank you Gohem !!! I hope they understand each other & support each other than letting anyone coming in between them 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

Thank you Munni...I also wait for your feedback on my writing...it gives me high 😉

Well I hope it will be Ahem who will realise what he has done in the past is effecting her & will put her & his heart in a comfort zone to share their feelings with each other 😛


aww thank u so much navya...

but if Ahem realizes on his own... then why was jigar made the witness ? 😕 only so that Ahemji could wipe off that lipstick mark 😕 not sure though...


p.s: navya i saw nafisa addressing u as rekha... have u ever been on kasam se forum way back in 2006 and 2007...ur writing reminds me of her posts...


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