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@MereMahiyaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Amazing part Loved it

Your a amazing writter

Cant wait to read the next part~!

Edited by Bloem123 - 13 years ago

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

awsum update luvd it

wonda hw ahem gna convince er

eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

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Fahima

@famzii05

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

that was really nice!! loving the story concept...ahem has to suffer a bit more...continue soon!! hope gopi dont give in quickly...a bit more grovelling and pleading from ahem...waiting eagerly for the next update...

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

omg!!! loved the part!!!! finally!!!! ahem knows and he's right by gopi!!!!!!!yayyy!!! can't wait for the confrontation!!!! feeling bad for poor gopi but now that ahem's here, he'll make sure she's ok

i wonder if gopi will give him hard time or will she go back with him???? can't wait for their reunion...already dreaming it!!!!! pls hurry with the next part...lolll

loved ahem's side...too good!!!

pls cont sooon

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

That was a lovely update Shilpa. Now Ahem has realised his mistakes and where Gopi stands in his life he will surely do anything for Gopi's health. Just can't wait to see the confrontation of Ahem and Gopi. Thanks a lot for the update.

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

I like the way the Flashback and present worked. It was really fab... A good read. And no, I am not on her Archer🤣, Presently on ludlum.

Way to go ben..kuddos👍🏼

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

awesome update,,, ahem realized gopi's love,, he came to know about her pregnancy...
can't wait to see gopi's reaction to ahem's request...
very well written

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Ah! Just caught up with both parts and absolutely loved it :)

Such an interesting take on the story, and I am absolutely glad to see Gopi leave, and Aham realizing his feelings for her. Make him grovel a bit before she accepts him back! 😆

But anyway, I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how Gopi reacts to Aham's presence.

Do continue soon!

Cheers!

Naina

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QueenRani2

@QueenRani2

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Wow lovely update.

Cant wait for the next one.

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evad

@evad

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Absolutely Fabulous update Shilpa,please update soon we're all hanging by a tiny incy winsy little thread.Always happy to read you even if i don't comment often due to laziness😆