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ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

I am glad you wrote in english (Nani Part) love it I hope gopi does not go with ahem... I would love it if ahem has to beg her... Rip out Ahem's Heart. would make me feel good really good... I am so mean.

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ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Please update soon , I want to know what U have decided to write.

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sweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

uff wat a clif hanger , u actually had to stop there ? but no worries definitely we are having GoHem face to face in the next update ...eager to know how gopi will react and what Ahem has to say

Btw you can call me Saba 😳

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: vaasanthi
super .ur making me curious.waiting 4 3rd part

Thank you so much. Ok I see I have left this for too long, so hope the next part helps.

Originally posted by: sweet1210
Hope she will go bach with him 😕

Thank you so much. Will she go back??😛 Let's see.

Originally posted by: Eva456
U hav me hooked shilpaben!wonderful update..xx

Awe..Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: uamaz
Fantastic... Hope she gives him a hard time before going back with him ...

Thank you so much. You know our Gopi is a softie, but lets see how much she hold back.

Originally posted by: hansa2
nice lovely hope gopi will go with him

Thank you so much! Hmm..You want her to go back, lets see what she does.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: sks21
that was a amazing update shilpaben...loved it
cant wait to see how ahem is going to convince gopi to come with him...

Thank you so much! Do you think Ahem will beg or in his usual stern way order her to go with him? Poor guy still has hard time expressing himself.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

thanks for the pm Shilpa ben. well, this is the first time i am angry with u. How can u stop the story in the most awaiting scene??? God, u made me addict to ur story so much...continue soon please

Thank you so much Kaka. I muist apologize to you. I know I left you hanging, but I had to stop there, I wanted to make sure the next part worked out the way I wanted to. Also sorry I could not update over theweekend, it was just too hard.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update...

Thank you so much!

Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

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This was fantastic.. love the pace .. and u leave us wanting more...

Nothing to say except, waiting to turn the page...😉

Thank you so much Angeli.

You are just too awesome for words, I will have the update up soon, hope you enjoy it.

Originally posted by: Traxy101
A really good update, love your story

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: navyab
Liked the part...no...Loved it...😉

Ur parts are all heart wrenching !!!! So now Ahem knows the truth...he will use it to get Gopi to move back to his house...but Gopi moving back to his heart is what he will want & is what Gopi will not want !!!

Thank you so much Navyab. I can't help but think Gopi has more pain coming her way on the show, so I thought lets keep the theme the same here with a twist of course, and let Gopi decide what she wants to do. I will make sure Ahem work just as hard to earn her love as she did. She waited long time for him, so it won't hurt him to wait.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
A wonderful update,yay Ahem knows Gopi is preganant😃

Thank you Chika! 😆 Yep he know, lets see what he does now.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
shilpa, excellent update. and you left me hanging.
i was eagerly waiting for the update. once again it was beautiful.

Thank you so much Shruti. I know I left it hanging but, I think it would be better to wait for them to come face to face.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: tina_1234
nyc ss...plz pm me

Thank you so much Tina.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Again this was great.

I'm sort of glad that we didn't have any Gopi today, we get to see a lot more from Ahem's point of view!

Can't wait to read more!!

Thank you so much Nazma. I like this, I will be going back and forth between Gopi and Ahem from this point on.

Originally posted by: kanu_nvlkh
hey great story😛

Thank you so much!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Bloem123
Amazing part Loved it
Your a amazing writter

Cant wait to read the next part~!

Thank you so much. I hope the next part is worth the wait. Will be posting soon.

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsum update luvd it

wonda hw ahem gna convince er

eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

Thank you so much. Lets see what Ahem does to convince her.

Originally posted by: famzii05
that was really nice!! loving the story concept...ahem has to suffer a bit more...continue soon!! hope gopi dont give in quickly...a bit more grovelling and pleading from ahem...waiting eagerly for the next update...

Thank you so much Fahima. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far. Ahem will suffer trust me, I am not going to let him off the hook to quick.

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
omg!!! loved the part!!!! finally!!!! ahem knows and he's right by gopi!!!!!!!yayyy!!! can't wait for the confrontation!!!! feeling bad for poor gopi but now that ahem's here, he'll make sure she's ok

i wonder if gopi will give him hard time or will she go back with him???? can't wait for their reunion...already dreaming it!!!!! pls hurry with the next part...lolll

loved ahem's side...too good!!!

pls cont sooon

Thank you so much Anshu. I just love your fantastic feedbacks, it inspires me to write more.

I think Gopi should give him hard time, but don't expect her to explode at him, I don't see her doing this, she is too soft, but she will frustrate him in her own quiet way.

Originally posted by: _Precious_
That was a lovely update Shilpa. Now Ahem has realised his mistakes and where Gopi stands in his life he will surely do anything for Gopi's health. Just can't wait to see the confrontation of Ahem and Gopi. Thanks a lot for the update.

Thank you so much Precious.

Yes Ahem has come to his senses, although he think he had a good reason to push her away, he was still selfish and only thought about himself. He in his own stubborn way will convince her somhow, and she is not a fighter but she will leave him wondering.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: JakeR
I like the way the Flashback and present worked. It was really fab... A good read. And no, I am not on her Archer🤣, Presently on ludlum.

Way to go ben..kuddos👍🏼

Thank you so much Jake. You really are more into the JP style, this is good to hear.

😲No Archer, already? Well Ludlum is good too.😆

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
awesome update,,, ahem realized gopi's love,, he came to know about her pregnancy...
can't wait to see gopi's reaction to ahem's request...
very well written

Thank you so much. He really does and has for a long time, but is too scared to admit it. Lets' see how Gopi reacts.

Originally posted by: rsshree
wonderful👏

Thank you so much!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Naina2127
Ah! Just caught up with both parts and absolutely loved it :)

Such an interesting take on the story, and I am absolutely glad to see Gopi leave, and Aham realizing his feelings for her. Make him grovel a bit before she accepts him back! 😆

But anyway, I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how Gopi reacts to Aham's presence.

Do continue soon!

Cheers!

Naina

Thank you so much Naina. I think Gopi needs to go away for a while, so Ahem can see what he is missing. I will make sure Ahem suffers, just as Gopi had. Again thank you so much.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
loved it

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: QueenRani2
Wow lovely update.

Cant wait for the next one.

Thank you so much. Next one coming up soon.

Originally posted by: evad
Absolutely Fabulous update Shilpa,please update soon we're all hanging by a tiny incy winsy little thread.Always happy to read you even if i don't comment often due to laziness😆

Thank you so much Eva. I know that was mean of me to leave it there, but I hope to make up in the next.

I know what you mean about being lazy to comment, I am like that too sometimes. glad you are enjoying the story.

Originally posted by: ANJ4
I am glad you wrote in english (Nani Part) love it I hope gopi does not go with ahem... I would love it if ahem has to beg her... Rip out Ahem's Heart. would make me feel good really good... I am so mean.

Thank you so much Anju. Nani sounds better in hindi, but I am just not good enough to write in Hindi.

You know out Gopi, she will pur baby's needs ahead of her, so lets see what she does.

I am sorry update was gettin late, but things have been hectic.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
uff wat a clif hanger , u actually had to stop there ? but no worries definitely we are having GoHem face to face in the next update ...eager to know how gopi will react and what Ahem has to say
Btw you can call me Saba 😳

Thank you so much Saba. Yep I had to stop there, otherwise it would have been too long. Update coming up.