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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: navyab

Wow Shilpa...wonderful part...Ahem realising that he needs to be patient with her so that she can realise it herself how much he loves her...similar to the 1st year Gopi spent...

I enjoyed the charm bracelet...not only for the sweet memories but also the way he let her decide what she wants...Godh Bharai is something Im looking forward & I think I have a vague clue on what might happen 😉
Ahem has still a lot to do in terms of earning her trust...he needs to able to build in her the strength to forgo herself into him...How about getting someone sweet for Jigar during Godh Bharai which his Bhabhi choose for him even all the while she was away from him...
I know that kalakaari's by Kinjle & Rashi separated Gopi & Ahem...but I do not believe that the exposure of Kalakaari's should bring them together...Their love & belief in them should be so strong to be able to withstand the truth when it is out !!!
Had this thought...not sure if U like it...Godh Bharai & Weddings usually go with women dressed in Red's...beauty ...and love...with everyone watching them entering the place...Ahem missed out on one of the main event of his life...will he catch up on the next ????




Thank you so much Navyab.


Agree with you on the kalakari exposure 100%. This is why I mentioned Ahem realizing his feelings for Gopi before Urshi exposure. Now that he has revealed her true feelings, I thinks Kinjal also should be exposed.

@Ghod Barai, you read my mind. I think Gopi needs everything you mentioned, and I am working out the details of the next update. Thanks for your suggestions. As I have mentioned, I loved your suggestions and look forward to your comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
RESERVED!

Shilpa,an absolute pleasure to read🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏...a very nice and subtle one...emotionally very satisfying chapter❤️😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shilpa. I love you! Thank you for reminding me of that poem. Even though I am not religious at all, that poem always brings a tear to my eye. A lovely update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shilpa ben, what can i say? I love every scenes you presented. I am looking forward to what happen in Godh Bharai. Maybe kinjal fiasco???



my request, so far i havent seen Gopi is graving for any food...I know it's her character to not bother anyone. But at least i hope u can add some scene which she is restless to eat something and Ahem senses it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
the poem was great
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉wonderful update shilpa...ur gopi is very much like the gopi from show...has so many doubts and thinking a lot...first abt the confession then godh bharai and now abt ahem's love...and passion...
waise dekha jaaye to...gopi's thinking is very true...she cant let ahem come close to her and pull back from her once again with the fear of losing control...god he loves her so much that he cannot resist her...and losing self control is something which he cannot afford...duffor ahem...y dont u keep loving her daily man...then u will start building self control... 😉 and slowly u will realize how good it is and also understand there is nothing as such losing control on life or getting distracted...😉...i am telling u the a kiss a day from/to gopi will keep all ur troubles away...😳 and stress free man is the happiest in the lot and loving her daily will keep u and ur family happy forever...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update Loved it
liked the poem i am glad to read the relation of gohem is getting better
Awesome Update like always😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic shilpa!! loved it so much...it was a pleasure to read... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shilpa.. Again wonderful. I love that it Ahem was the reason for Gopi's got back her faith again as he was also the reason she lost it in the first place. I have read this poem before and have felt the truth behind the words.. Thanks for reminding me again..
Loved how Gopi is slowly trying to trust Ahem. It is understandable that she is still frightened he may pull back again when he loses control. Hopefully Ahem is able to convince her that he will not do that anymore..

The ending was heart warming. This couple need to have some peaceful nights after everything they have gone through.. I will be awaiting the net update with interest. Thank you so much for giving a weekday present..

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