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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Hi Everyone! So sorry I fell behind on the update because I got caught up with other things. I am working on the update, and hope to post it by tomorrow. Thanks so much for all your comments.

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navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Hi Everyone! So sorry I fell behind on the update because I got caught up with other things. I am working on the update, and hope to post it by tomorrow. Thanks so much for all your comments.

Hey Shilpa holding you to the promise...will wait for your next part tomm !!!

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Hi Everyone! So sorry I fell behind on the update because I got caught up with other things. I am working on the update, and hope to post it by tomorrow. Thanks so much for all your comments.

Thanks for letting us know

Cant wait to read the next part

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Awww thanks for letting us know Shilpa!😃

Take your time,update when you can!..we'll be waitng😛

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

brilliant update!!!

loved the poem...such a beautiful peom...had tears in my eyes.

very well written shilpa...you're amazing!!

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

ok, will wait for the update

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sakinatahseen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

😊desperately waiting...!!!!!😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: angelirebelli
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This was a superfab update Babe.. loved every bit of it.. sooo mushhh !!

The poem was super way to reinforce faith n trust.. Loved the idea of the gifts, return gifts.. the charm.. the birthstones et al.. beautiful!!

A very GoHem filled update and gong by the show these scenes could soon b something we could watch on SNS...

Keep 'em coming hun ..

Hey Angeli, Thanks so much. I have been itching to use that poem for this story, and it worked. Glad you enjoyed the mush, I don't know how long I will be able to pull it off.

Originally posted by: sks21
wow that was just brilliant👏 loved it
loved the growth in their relationship
and loved the gift ideas...
loved the poem
loved the whole update shilpa

Thanks so much Kavya. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments and feedback. It really helps.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
shilpa, you are the master in this art. i felt as if i was watching the whole interaction between them. the poem was wonderful. i love this gopi and love more than anything this aham. he is so cute, hot and well what not.

Thank you so much Shurti. I hope you are feeling better. Glad you are enjoying this Ahem and Gopi. Thanks so much for the comments and feedback. Most appreciated.

Originally posted by: varshu27
wonderful update ...it was just perfect...and the poem... footprints...wow...i just might print it out and put it up where i can see it everyday...loved jigar being his happy and teasing self...gopi and ahem are moving forward one step at a time and i like it...

Thanks so much Varshu. I read this poem when I was in High School and made a copy to keep it with me always. It has seen me thru some tough times.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: tangam
A big thank you Shilpa. Foot prints in the sand has been close to me for a long time ... A gift from my mother, You had me in tears today...believing is everything, You are a gifted writer.

Thanks so much Tangam, this poem has been with me for long time also, and it helped me thru my loss when my mother passed. Thanks for all the wonderful comments, they are very encouraging. You and all the forum members who give me feedback inspires me to be better and better.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
loved da update
do continue it was amazing

Thanks so much, glad you loved the update.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
RESERVED!

Shilpa,an absolute pleasure to read🤗

Thanks so much Chikka. And I am sorry it took me so long to update, but it just couldn't be helped.

Originally posted by: shruts18
👏...a very nice and subtle one...emotionally very satisfying chapter❤️😊

Awe..Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: uamaz
Great update ...

Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: Xarina
Shilpa. I love you! Thank you for reminding me of that poem. Even though I am not religious at all, that poem always brings a tear to my eye. A lovely update.😊

Thank you so much Xarina. I think that poem applies to anyone who believes in higher being. Just believing is enough. I am not very religious myself, but I do know there is power in prayers.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: thejazzgal
nice update

do cont soon

Thanks so much Jazzgal.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg
Shilpa ben, what can i say? I love every scenes you presented. I am looking forward to what happen in Godh Bharai. Maybe kinjal fiasco???

my request, so far i havent seen Gopi is graving for any food...I know it's her character to not bother anyone. But at least i hope u can add some scene which she is restless to eat something and Ahem senses it...

Thanks Monyka for your wonderful comments and feedback. You have to wait for the Ghod Bharai for the next update, but I hope you enjoy what I have for this update.

I been wanting to write food craving, but I have yer to figure out what Gopi's favorite food is, I think it's Ras Malai, but I am not sure. I will see how I can add your request into the next update.