SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70*

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

I had to read two updates...lol

Its fab Shilpaben.. you are a real story teller.. Nani was kewl...

I really enjoyed.. so did kate...👍🏼.. She said i am lucky to have a talented softy sis🤣

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Bravo S.. that was another fabulous update whipped up in no time.. It was beautiful... 👏

I loved the fact that Ahem is trying to explain and Gopi is unrelenting, this is a wonderful change.. so different from a Gopi who was always there nodding and accepting..

Ahem definitely needs to try harder and work towards getting Gopi to believe him and earn the trust n love, which he so took for granted...

Look forward to more.. Christmas treat u said..😉

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

what a beautiful story Shilpa. I missed last two parts and had to catch up both at once. Now Ahem has to prove to Gopi that he indeed loved her but it was his ego that came in the middle. Its going to be a difficult job for him. I liked the way Gopi was avoiding Ahem. Poor girl, went through a lot of agony, and now is wary of Ahem's sweet words not to be hurted again. I am a big fan of your SS or FF or VM, or whatever you make. If you have a pm list, could you add me too. I don't wanna miss any update. Thanks.

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indu_shah

@indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

awesome update...i wonder why shud gopi have so many doubts on his love...y cant it be simple yaar..i wud love ahem making her realize by force..as she is not believing him by confessing or comforting..she thinks he is lying...one's mind can lie..but his emotions cant..i want him to show her his passionate love towards her the most clumsiest way :D

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

wow shilpa what a update.
mind blowing.
kinjal needs a tight slap and gopi needs a good hug.
the story has me hooked up.

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641345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

thanks so much Shilpa ben. u are a wonderful writer. This update is really really touching. Love it so much...Hope u can gift us another update for christmas day...

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

great update.loved it.lets see how ahem woos his wife back.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Sandy914
Hey Shilpa.. Nice Update.. keep going!!!

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: varshu27
wonderful update...its going to take a lot to convince gopi of ahems love...he better start working hard...and u r right ...after the flop epi today we needed something good and u provided it...thanks

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed the update, and made up for the crap epi. Ahem will have to work really hard to win her.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
HAHA the sofa is gone👍🏼 .😆 makes me feel very happy ;)..tat was a beautiful part ...loved Ahems lines , not to mention i m loving gopi's cold behaviour even more...lets see how Ahem copes up with this ...Him placing hand on her stomuch was a very sweet gesture ,would love to see him interact with the baby someday while it is in the womb .

Saba thank you so much. You must have read my mind about the sofa, because I felt the same. I tell you, you are very good at reading my mind, because I do plan to make him talk to the baby to try to reach Gopi. The big question will be how will Gopi react.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Beautiful update!!

Kinjal had to open her mouth didn't she!!!

Although it did get Ahem to open up a little bit to Gopi, and I alos love how he is overhearing pertinent things!!

I don't blame Gopi for being a little disbelieving as yet!!

Can't wait for the update!!

Thank you so much Nazma.

Kinjal thinks she is smarter than everyone, she will get her due in time.

You will see why Gopi is reluctant to trust that Ahem loves her.

Originally posted by: gohem_forever
amazing... waiting for moreee

Thanks so much, will try to update soon.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: tina_1234
very nyc part...ahem has done major damage to gopi..aggrhhh i hate kinjal...nyc part...

Thank you so much Tina. Yeah Ahem has a long road ahead, hope he is up for it.

Kinjal as always a spoiled brat.

Originally posted by: navyab
Hey Shilpa...loved the update...waiting for the next one !!!!

Liked Gopi taking a decision of sleeping & leaving his arrangements for himself...I hope Gopi becomes even more colder towards him & does not let him come closer to her at all 😉

Thanks Navyab. 😛Poor Ahem, I wonder what he will have to do to win her trust, I wil do my best to make sure he sweats buckets.😉

I will do my best to post the update soon.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
loved da update
ahem deserved to suffer yet coz he cause so much pain to gopi

she suffered so much wit him, he need to be taught a lesson

Thanks so much. I agree, Ahem does deserve to suffer after what he put her thru, he has come around, but now he has to make up for past deeds.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
A wonderful update😛
argh i hate Kinjal so much😡

Thanks so much Chika. I know how you feel. Ok to make you feel better, you are going to love my Jigar, and of course hate Rashi.😈

Originally posted by: GohamHungry
So sad but beautiful ! Wonderful job..I hate Kinjal as always !! I hope Gopi sees the true Ahem soon.

Thanks so much. I know its sad, but Gopi has had nothing but pain in her life. Gopi is still sweet, but she has closed off her heart, she finally gave up on Ahem and Rashi and Kinjal didn't help the situation either.

Originally posted by: QueenRani2
Nice to see Ahem's Talking about his feelings to Gopi but I understant that she won't believe so fast.

Kinjal is such a _ _ _, can't stand her.

I really loved it and waiting for my gift. 😃

Thank you so much. Yep it will take a while for Gopi to come around. She will be cautious this time around.

Kinjal is spoiled.

Will come back with your gift soon.