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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

eagerly waiting for the next part.loved this.

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641345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

thanks so much Shilpa ben...love it to the core. Please post part 5B soon...

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-JollyJabeen-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Oh wow 😲

A fantastic and very emotional part!

Urmi are the meanest b****** ever! and how could thy talk to Jigarji like that😳

I would have punched anyone who spoke to me like that😆

Poor Gopi vahu!

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Fab Update S.. Love the way your are playing between the past n the present ... 👍🏼

You brought out Urmila n Rashi's characters so well, I would wonder what would it take for them to get out of Gopi's hair or even the Modi's for that matter.. a modeling contract is good enough.. considering the gold digger Urmila who would settle for anything so long as she saw the money...

I am happy you managed to push Rashi n her mom out of Gopi's life.. she is better off with out them... 😊

I am extremely curious to know what Ahem did .. >sigh< .. that stupid arrogant man !! 😡

Look forward to the next part...😃

P.S. - Thank you for the lovely treat on Christmas Eve..⭐️.. Happy Holidays !!

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

All the kalakaries are out tat too right from the horses mouth ! Rashi crossed all limits , the way she spoke to jigar..her words were so harsh ,and she wished for gopis death 😡 'ehsaan faramosh'.

I do agree with Ahem he is 'an arrogant Idiot' ...but he not to be blame totally somewhere the way he was broughtup has conviniently allowed him to build up the walls around him.

Do i need to say i m waiting for 5B ,looks like Gopi got Leg cramp ,lets see wat Ahem does to help her with tat (i havnt figured out as yet wat to do whn ppl around u gt leg cramp😕😆)

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

well it is generally expected out of Rashi & Urmilla to be bad & worse...waiitng for ur part on Ahem !!!!

He must have hurt her really bad...

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Oh wow wow wow. Am loving it and your writing is sooo good. Would be nice if the past kalakaaris come out like this in the ME in January. Great.

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Great updateh i wanna ask if there s any hope for rashi or she s a lost cause?? Great update now am curious about ahem. Am hooked

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Thanks for the fabulous update. I just loved the fact that even when Ahem and Rashi was hurting Gopi, she was the apple of Modi family. I just love the Goki relationship, the way Kokila supported Gopi when UrShi was trying to shatter her heart. Ahem stood up for Gopi at that time only to hurt her the next day. You kept me intrigued to the story and you have to update the next part soon. Please. Thanks for the pm.

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Grr Rashi -_- Is there any chance she'll turn positive and get back with Jigar?

Awesome part though! Can't wait to read the Aham part of this :)

Cheers!
Naina