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Munni

@munnihyderabad

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

such an amazing and emotional OS...i simply loved it Tink... btw i love ur ff too...

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Take a bow👏. Please add me to ur pm list.

Love

Smitha

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

superb tinkerbell

u provided a better version of the hospital scene than the serial..

and i can imagine ahem blasting the members who gave him the deadly news..

good characterization...

well done..and a nice title too..

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rsshree

@rsshree

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

its graet and i have tears in my eyes😭

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AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

WOW!!!! i can only think of one word for your OS:- superb!!
please write more!!!

Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Absolutely amazing, loved the last line: but her heart didn't fail him, it proved that it only beat for her Ahem Ji

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NRChau

@NRChau

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Oh Ahem, you broke my heart into so many tiny pieces with your 'Isn't my life worthy of your love anymore' question... Ahh, chica, thanks for writing this heart-melting OS ... All the bad acting, bloopers and utter non-sense of what actually happened in SNS earlier this week has been washed away - kudos to you, Mallika-ae-FFs...lol... Sorry but you are stuck with this title now... hehehe...

Though I have to say, when I read this piece in Tasha's story, I was all choked up!! I would have had similar reaction if I had skipped on watching Saathiya's version of the whole tragedy!!