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AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Jassi jaise koi nahin!! Sorry hun but couldn't help it, I just remembered it when I saw your name lol😛.
Oh thanks so much Jess, well I'll think about it lol, and thanks so much for reading it. 😉

jassi ki bachi... hurrr
🤣

n as soon i saw ur comment here... i was like... Babe, i am coming to catch ya... buh u r so fast to be caught... lol...
btw plzz come on fb... i hv sm work fr u.. :P

Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: NRChau
Oh Ahem, you broke my heart into so many tiny pieces with your 'Isn't my life worthy of your love anymore' question... Ahh, chica, thanks for writing this heart-melting OS ... All the bad acting, bloopers and utter non-sense of what actually happened in SNS earlier this week has been washed away - kudos to you, Mallika-ae-FFs...lol... Sorry but you are stuck with this title now... hehehe...
Though I have to say, when I read this piece in Tasha's story, I was all choked up!! I would have had similar reaction if I had skipped on watching Saathiya's version of the whole tragedy!!

Oh babez, thanks so much!! But it was the only thing I could think of whil changing Dutta's views to Ahem's words lol, and in those short minutes these were the only words I could think of that would let Ahem's views be justified after everything he did.

Hmmm Malika-ae-FFs eh, I kinda like the sound of that lol, I suddenly feel gangster! hehee, but trust me hun there's so many better writers out there on this forum lol, and they might just get offended and we don't want that do we. 😛 But you sure know how to butter me up lol.

LOL I could imagine as tasha's version was reall intense innit, spesh after everything Naku went through, it was only right that she faced death, though I didn't feel that build-up when Gopi was facing the same on-screen.

I've got too many sad scenes in that ff innit, it's time I spiced things up lol. 😉

Thanks for commenting hun, loved it as always. 😛

xxx

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jasminedayal

jassi ki bachi... hurrr
🤣

n as soon i saw ur comment here... i was like... Babe, i am coming to catch ya... buh u r so fast to be caught... lol...
btw plzz come on fb... i hv sm work fr u.. :P

Btw I'm older then u, so I can't really be your bachi...so haha...😛😆, nice try. 😛😛

I thought I'd see u pop here lol, I've proper been under cover lol, seriously I've got so much to do that I just don't know where to start from! 😆 But trust u catch me lol😛.

Okay I'll be there in abit, just lemme finish up the comments on here k. 😳

xxx

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: uamaz
👍🏼

Thanks babe, I guess actions do speak louder then words lol, 😉

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swasthi
Thank you so much Tinks for an outstanding OS. Well done.

Thanks a lot Swasthi, your words are aways encouraging. 😉

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: gohem123
Awesome...👏 Nice OS...Nice writing style...Thank you for making this wonderful piece of work

Thanks a lot babe for all the lovely comments, I appreciate it. 😉

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AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Btw I'm older then u, so I can't really be your bachi...so haha...😛😆, nice try. 😛😛

I thought I'd see u pop here lol, I've proper been under cover lol, seriously I've got so much to do that I just don't know where to start from! 😆 But trust u catch me lol😛.

Okay I'll be there in abit, just lemme finish up the comments on here k. 😳

xxx

well are you a mind reader or what??
while typing the comment... i exactly knew your reaction... lol... 😃

hmmm... so jassi ki mammi... lol 😆

whats bothering you...??

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
awesome...

Thanks 😊

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jasminedayal

well are you a mind reader or what??
while typing the comment... i exactly knew your reaction... lol... 😃

hmmm... so jassi ki mammi... lol 😆

whats bothering you...??

Well I guess you know how dramatic I am lol, so you should expect it of course, 😛😛

Jassi ki Mammi - "cheee." No ways man, "never!" I ain't that old lol, think of suttin better, 😆

I've got loads of work to do that's all, but I wanna bother about the less important things of course, that's all. 😳😆

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Eva456
Awesome tink!in on word, FABULOUS!u should write more of these one shots u know..it was just wonderful..loved every bit..xx eva

Hi Eva, thanks so much darlin', erm I would defo try to, but I can't promise as I'm not very good with OS's but from time to time I will attempt babe. 😉 Thanks a lot for liking it so much. 😊

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