SS: Nahi!!! - Thank You Note - pg13

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wah! wah! what an episode today!! loved it to the full...
the most amazing was AHEM today!! he made up for everything in the past...
when he left gopis hand the pain in his eyes were reflected sooo nicely and the expressions...
when he bought gopi out of the mess he was lost...he couldnt think right...and he was only thinking about gopi...his gopi...

heres a one shot after Ahem picked up gopi.. happy, actually sad reading...

his eyes went wide...breath caught in his throat...he couldnt believe it!! Gopi!!!!! he screamed...he shouldnt have left her alone...quickly he got the mess off gopi...unable to see the injuries on Gopi he pulled her towards his chest...wake up, please gopi wake up!! her eyes fluttered open...okay shes alive...suddenly her eyes shut tight...NAHI...he had heard jigar and rashi approach from behind and so did the police...the police had instructed him to take gopi into the ambulance...

why abulance? my gopi will be fine na? i'll hold her till shes fine...near me...i wont let her go.. he thought himself...his heart raced thumping loudly...very carefully he picked gopi up afraid of breaking his fragile wife!! swiftly he took her down the flight of stairs into the dark night where the cars were...he headed towards his car...he wanted gopi to be fine...he will keep her by him till she is fully fine...he couldnt think right at the moment because he couldnt get over the fact that she was injured sooo badly... "bhai, the ambulace is over there, we need to take bhabi to the hospital as soon as possible" jigar spoke to ahem, he didnt argue...wordlessly he took gopi over to the ambulance...holding her very close to his heart...jigar asked him to place his heart on the stetcher..he couldnt, not away from him...she was his heart!! NAHI!! he wanted to scream but couldnt get the word out of his mouth...

the entire journey to the hospital he held her close to him not wanting to lose her at any chance...

they placed his heart on the stretcher...and wheeled her to the ICU...her eyes opened...ahemji, she whispered, her voice hoarse...he let his heart beat, yess please be fine...but then they pulled her away...he went after her...bhai, aap nahin ja sakte...verly slowly he let his heart go...fingers slipping...to fast for him to stop...without her would he be able to breathe?? she was his heart, only his!!



how was it??? i wrote what was in my thoughts...please excuse my grammer...and i hope i portrayed the emotions wel!!

hope you liked it...

comment and like!!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x


part 2 - page 4
part 3 - page 5
part 4 (last part) - page 7
epilogue - page 10
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NazmaJ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice work Fahima!!
You've written a great OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Really nice work Fahima!!

You've written a great OS!



😳 thankyou!! glad you liked it!!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really well done Fahima!!!

I loved your OS. Ahem's emotion were described so vividly. Your nearly got me crying for real and that takes a lot. So sad😭

Thanks so much for writing it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: d-luna88

Really well done Fahima!!!

I loved your OS. Ahem's emotion were described so vividly. Your nearly got me crying for real and that takes a lot. So sad😭

Thanks so much for writing it!!



thankyou!! aww..lived up to expectations...ur welcome...

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent Fahima,i loved it,so cute and sweet,amazing OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

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Excellent Fahima,i loved it,so cute and sweet,amazing OS!



😳 thankyou!! im feeling happy after the epi!!...i was sad that its my bday and gopi is in hospital 😭 anyways all your comments have made me happy again...after a fantastic b'day!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey that was awesome, didn't know u had the talent in u, that was gr8, keep it up x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nadiamimi18

Hey that was awesome, didn't know u had the talent in u, that was gr8, keep it up x



hey,, thanks...😳...glad you liked it...will do xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its amazing os fahima...
loved it

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