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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep on updating, I updates mine as well today, xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys, thankyou sooo much for all your lovely comments. 🤗
this is the next part...hope you all like it!!

i tried to make it longer...

Part 3

Ahem, tumhara blood group to 0- hai? His kaki spoke from behind him. Yes, that's right. It's my time to save her; after all, she is my heart. He knew he couldn't do any better than help his wife to save her life...they connected even more, not by heart but as bloods too.

'Doctor my blood is 0-, I am ready to give, take as much as you want, as much as my wife needs'. He knew that this was his chance to pay for his bad past, this was the chance that god has given him. They led him towards the room where his heart was laid, unmoving and completely still, waiting for the new life to be breathed into it he was told to lie down on the bed next to his heart. His eyes never left the pure soul, he trained his eyes on her, never leaving her face which was covered with the horrible oxygen mask. The nurses hovered around him, piercing the needle through his arm, he never felt any pain because he knew that the pain that Gopi was going through, his pain was nothing compared to it. The severity of her situation was intense, her life depended on him. They connected the blood pipe from him to his heart; the red blood flowed like a river, thick and dark, rushing towards a new life, strength for someone.

As the blood left him he stared at Gopi, as the blood entered Gopi, her eyes flicked over, lingering on the figure near to her, 'Ahemji' she whispered, but that was all to make ahem mind at peace. He knew, his heart told him that she will survive, waiting for the operation to end along with all the grief and sorrows of the past year. On the other side the doctor and the nurses continued the operation and has given Gopi anaesthesia, which had her unconscious, both of then unmoving, helping each other to live, a great support to each other. While the operation took place, their heart beats at the same speed, each breath at the same rate. The bond that they shared had become stronger with every second. Bloods connecting, hearts connecting.

Couple hours later the operation had ended. So had the troubles. Few hours later Ahem's eyes opened because he had fainted because he had not eaten for quite a while before the blood giving... Gopi? The first words that had left his mouth, he needed to know, to make sure that his heart was still beating. In the other room Gopi had woken up as well, she expected to see her Ahemji, very softly she whispered 'Ahemji?' her head hurt, the events of that day flooded back to her, the goons, Rashi ben, Ahemji. She also had a vague memory of seeing someone lying down near her. Who was it? She lifted her hand to feel what was causing the pain but her hand felt very heavy, it was immensely bandaged. She felt very tired and rifted to sleep again. No one was near her because the doctors had refused to stay around her until she was fully conscious; the tension could make her feel weaker than she already was.

All ahem was worried about was his Gopi, he needed to see her right now. He swung his legs over to the other side of the bed and rose, but suddenly everything spun around him and he hit the bed again, unable to control himself he put his head into his hands and stayed like this for a few minutes. He looked up and everything was normal, this time being more careful he got up and made his way outside. Opening the door he found his distraught family all looking pale and helpless. What happened now? I hope Gopi is fine! When they saw the door open they immediately looked up, his mother rushed to him to see if he was fine, he assured her. all he wanted to know was about Gopi. He asked quickly, but clouds of worry passed over his mothers face. All she said was 'Ahem, Gopi Vahu'. 'Mom jaldi bataye, Gopi to theek hai na? mum aap bolti kyun nahi'.'Wo.. she left her sentence unfinished.

Tension not over yet!! well i will leave you to your thoughts..
hope you all liked it!!
please comment and like...thankyou!!!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x


part 4 - page 7


Edited by famzii05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Great update Fahima!!!!

Nice that you spared as the whole Urmi blood giving drama😆 couldn't have taken more of it. Again the emotions were very well written and the twist at the end was great. Loved it please update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: d-luna88

Great update Fahima!!!!

Nice that you spared as the whole Urmi blood giving drama😆 couldn't have taken more of it. Again the emotions were very well written and the twist at the end was great. Loved it please update soon!!!



Thankyou soo much!! 🤗 even i couldnt take that urmi drama...so left it out, but ahem was initially my first choice for giving gopi blood...will do...need to work on my other FF.. so probs the next update will be in the weekend!! 😊

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: famzii05



Thankyou soo much!! 🤗 even i couldnt take that urmi drama...so left it out, but ahem was initially my first choice for giving gopi blood...will do...need to work on my other FF.. so probs the next update will be in the weekend!! 😊

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x



🤗 okay I wait 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fahima ur bloody brilliant! U r a gr8 writer, can't wait till the weekend, gonna start from the beginning though lol x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Cool...the one which i want in sns..aham to have O-ve blood...Nice update...

Update the next part soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Loved IT Fahima!😉



im glad you did!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update it was amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome loved it 😍
& Thanks for the Pm!
Edited by Bloem123 - 13 years ago

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