SS: Nahi!!! - Thank You Note - pg13 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sks21

its amazing os fahima...
loved it

thankyou!! glad u liked it!!

Good one...u have got Ahem's feelings...

Nice OS...you depicted our ahamjee's mind very nicely...Loved your writing...yes,aham will have probably gone through that..he was very numb seeing gopi. 👏 for understanding aham well...
Do write more

mayb this was wat ahem was thinking in his inner mind

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

that was really nice!!

Originally posted by: taniks

Lovely os

Originally posted by: vibz88

great update fahima.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

beautifully written

thankyou!! im glad you all enjoyed it!! 😊

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Originally posted by: navyab

Good one...u have got Ahem's feelings...

thankyou!!! i was portraying ahem feeling in this one :)

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Originally posted by: gohem123

Nice OS...you depicted our ahamjee's mind very nicely...Loved your writing...yes,aham will have probably gone through that..he was very numb seeing gopi. 👏 for understanding aham well...
Do write more

thankyou!! 😳 i was depicting ahems feeling...as much as i could...hopefully i will write sum more soon...

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Realy nice amazing os

Originally posted by: rsshree

mayb this was wat ahem was thinking in his inner mind

Originally posted by: uamaz

nice os ...

glad you all liked it!! and that was ahem was thinking...you could read his face like an open book!! thankyou!!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

hello guys i have added more to this OS because i wanted to write down all of ahems emotions...its a bit different to the actual serial now...

hope you like it!! sad reading, again...

Part 2

"You wife is in a critical condition, we need to do her operation as soon as possible" he heard the sound of the doctor. He immediately paid attention. What? How can that happen she's fine? I said she's fine'these thought reeled about in his brain. "Does she have any allergies?" Huh? I don't know'how come I don't know'she's my wife. I'm meant to know' He couldn't face the doctor because he couldn't answer a simple question about his wife! To save him Gopi's mama spoke up, replying in the negative. Please take of your wife till the operation, it's important to keep her awake or else she can go into''COMA" his heart raced. Coma,NAHI!! he will have to wait to see his Gopi smile again, that cute loving smile she always had on her face. She kept me going on my bad days'Gopi, without you, will my happiness return? Oh god! Please save my Gopi. I need her! "Doctor, my Gopi Vahu will become better?" his mother whispered breaking him from his thoughts..." Han mom, she will be absolutely fine, meri Gopi bohot bahadur hai" he wanted to scream these word, but he didn't trust his voice, he knew it would tremble.

The doctor asked them not to overcrowd around his heart otherwise it would be hard for it to breathe. His mother and kaki went to see her; he followed silently behind'when he entered. He couldn't stand to see his heart in such a bad condition. Her head was bandaged and the blood oozed out of it. And his heart was put on oxygen'the need for every being to live' he blocked out all the voices in the background and stared at the angel face, so innocent, so pure. She didn't deserve this. Why didn't it happen to me instead? His heart cried it wrenched inside his body, every cell of his body cried. But he couldn't cry he wouldn't lose hope at any cost, not at any moment. He had to stay strong, with his Gopi fighting death, he couldn't remain weak' he needed to support everyone, especially Gopi. If she saw him cry, she would also lose hope'.

He left from there unable to hold back his tears. Although he tried very hard, he couldn't. He was sitting on the bench outside. Everyone was in their own glum' with an absent minded he took out his wallet where he had a small picture of the full family, his Gopi was also there. He stared into those large black eyes recalling every precious moment he had with her'.her smile, her walk, her magical voice' everything!!

"Mr Modi, I am sorry to tell you but we need an urgent supply of blood, because you wife lost a lot due to internal bleeding" "her blood group is rare, 0-, we have none left". What more bad news, how much will she have to suffer? No god, please don't test me, make my Gopi better, please, I promise to take full care of Gopi'.

ONLY IF HE HAD A CHANCE''..DONT TAKE HER AWAY FROM ME'.

What was his blood group? Can he help her at this critical moment of her life?

To be continued soon'.

sorry for making this a bit sad...and repetative like the firsr part but its neccasary to portray ahems emotions...but the next update will have changes and will not be very sad. it will continue as Ahem's POV...

how was it?? please, like and comment.. thankyou...😃

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

part 3 - page 5