OS: The move to the bed - Page 3

Originally posted by: swasthi

That was a very interesting read.

Ahem was so self reflective and realised that Gopi is everything to him. Through this he conscientiously closed the gap between them and made every means possible to make her feel comfortable.

Well done.

Thank you swasthi!! Glad you liked him. I so hope Ahem will realise Gopi's worth in the serial as well soon. 😳

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Awesome, i really loved it, in the beginning of the OS I felt you really dialled into Gopi's selfless behaviour by talking about Aham being fine and not worrying about her own health, then loved when he carried her up the stairs and because she is a shy virgin she would be all blushing and embarrassed for making him carry her, through no fault of her own, then loved that caring scene of him staying up half the night putting cold compress on her forehead to bring her temperature down, and I loved how they ended up most of all, just loved the ending of her moving from his arm to end up on his chest, I could see the whole thing happening...lol, loved it.

Thank you so much Nafisa. So glad you liked my OS. i just hope we will see some scene like that in the serial as well. I am sure that it would be okay for the time of day the serial is running for Ahem to carry Gopi up the stairs. He can't make her walk that much, it is a long staircase after all 😳

thanks for os update .

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

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Kristin I'm away for one day and you've come up with such a nice surprise!!!

I really loved it!!

It was so believeable I could actually imagine it happening!!

Well done!!

😆 Thank you Nazma. It just got to me while reading through a threat where they were discussing the end of the hospital track. and out of a post got a OS

very fabulous... i am already imagining this in sns...

Originally posted by: faayey

thanks for os update .

please update for os 2.😍

Thank you dear. But what do you mean with OS 2? I updated my FF as well today have you read it? and do you mean that?

Originally posted by: savvi

very fabulous... i am already imagining this in sns...

so lovely each and everybit of words are realistic ...

Aww 😳 thank you savvi. I also hope that it will happen in sns soon as well

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Thank you dear. But what do you mean with OS 2? I updated my FF as well today have you read it? and do you mean that?

I MEAN OS PART TWO OR CONTINUED

Originally posted by: faayey

I MEAN OS PART TWO OR CONTINUED

Oh gosh another story to continue 😆 I can't promise you anything but I will if I got an idea how to continue the story

its amazing kristin...i loved it
i could feel it happening and felt real