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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suk19

fabulous enjoyed it need more n now in the serial itself



Thank you suk!!!
I want see some more of that in the serial as well. A kiss on the forehead must be in it at 7pm mustn't it?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice Os kristin,
very sweet Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for doing this lovely OS... waiting for it to pan out like this 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kristin that;s an awesome os... really loved it,,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it! that was just fabulousss! i wish that really happenss! i loved it all! your a fab writer! really got me touched :')
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloem123

Very nice Os kristin,

very sweet Loved it



Thank you!!! Glad you enjoyed it😃


Originally posted by: uamaz

Thanks for doing this lovely OS... waiting for it to pan out like this 😆



Me to, me to. Its my plessure and I am glad you enjoyed it!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

kristin that;s an awesome os... really loved it,,,,



Thank you munni 😃


Originally posted by: HeyyYouu

loved it! that was just fabulousss! i wish that really happenss! i loved it all! your a fab writer! really got me touched :')



Thanks dear!! 😳 also hope that it happens similar to that. But to be honest as long as gohem are togehter and Ahem is taking care of her and being nice to her will make me happy!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a very interesting read.
Ahem was so self reflective and realised that Gopi is everything to him. Through this he conscientiously closed the gap between them and made every means possible to make her feel comfortable.
Well done.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome, i really loved it, in the beginning of the OS I felt you really dialled into Gopi's selfless behaviour by talking about Aham being fine and not worrying about her own health, then loved when he carried her up the stairs and because she is a shy virgin she would be all blushing and embarrassed for making him carry her, through no fault of her own, then loved that caring scene of him staying up half the night putting cold compress on her forehead to bring her temperature down, and I loved how they ended up most of all, just loved the ending of her moving from his arm to end up on his chest, I could see the whole thing happening...lol, loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏
Kristin I'm away for one day and you've come up with such a nice surprise!!!
I really loved it!!
It was so believeable I could actually imagine it happening!!
Well done!!

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