FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb

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shajnaii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wowww baby..

this is picture perfect...

when i read this..everything comes to my mind as imagination...i love it...pls continue dear..

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Fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Very nice update. 👏 😃

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wow! superb update do conitune soon

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Swetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wow Shaina...another ff from u. I just loveddd it. Plz update sooon. Waiting to know about Ahem's past and how he is related to Gopi.

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

lovely nice part continue soon...

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Nilu Dasuni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Superb concept

waiting to the next part

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navitha reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wowww anthr ff hmmm i will follow u nice starting shaina thank u.

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Mridz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I loved the concept!! Looking forward to the next part!

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hi shaina great start its wonderful...love it and love this ahem...
and i also love that in ur ff's rashi and ahem both get along very well love their friendship...loved them in milan also and love them in this ff too
waiting for the next part..update soon

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Shaina ... this story line is very good indeed.

Your style 'Yash Raj' style of introducing the characters awards umpteen superlatives. Simply love the high and mighty Ahem Modi who he has skeletons in his closet. That has to be Gopi whom he saw and that is when he will be expected to crash back to earth. Just what was it that happened between them that leaves a grey cloud hanging over his head?

The most unappealing part is the developing relationship between Rashi and him.

Looking forward to the next update.