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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
eagerly waiting for the next update i daily check the post for the next part... it;s soo nice can't wait fr the next part

- munni

sorry muni...i wil update today for sure...almost completed...

i wil pm u...

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: tina_1234
updt plzz

today tina..for sure...no change..

Originally posted by: famzii05
great story...
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thanks famzi...

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: sks21

cant help it shaina😆...in serial also when he was rude to gopi we still liked him and now he's changing in the serial...so its very difficult to hate him here also...
but i really appreciate ur effort...ur doing such a wonderful job

ha ha then i should have started this ff first...poor me...

thanks and lets hope i get suceeded...because it really depends..on people hating ahem in this ff.

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navitha reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

shaina m waiting for ur next update when ur going to udate.

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Ashwin Maharaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Interesting take shaina. And a pleasure to read. Please add me to the update list. Thanks! 😊

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: navithareddy
shaina m waiting for ur next update when ur going to udate.

ha dont woryy...its now...wait for 5 min and u wil have ur update...

thanks for asking...

Originally posted by: ShaunSA
Interesting take shaina. And a pleasure to read. Please add me to the update list. Thanks! 😊

thanks shaunsa...i wil add u thanks for asking..

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Hai guys sorry for the mixing of schedule...and lets hope everyone catches this part...thanks for waiting and accepting my request of pm asking...u made my work easy...so lets begin and thanks once again for encouraging me...
Part-3:

Recap of college days:

AHem modi is a topper of his batch in mba and very arrogant, attitude and proud about being born in a rich family and considers people of lower class as his servants and insults them

he meets gopi rajvansh, his junior who studies on shoclarship and on her first day both falls into a fight, and gopi being a self respect and independent girl cant tolerate ahem's egoistic behaviour

the war continues until ahem tears gopi's thesis for practical and also her parents photo and gopi angered by his action slaps him.

SLAP!!!!!!!!!!!!

THe voice echoed the whole canteen and the silence filled the entire college...Not even one person voiced out and everyone stood stunned looking at ahem and gopi waiting for ahem to explode.. the news spread like

wild fire instantly afterall the mighty ahem modi wont get slapped everyday. Ahem closed his eyes feeling the pain and the humiliation, for the first time he got slapped and that too by a girl who is of the status below him..He looked with a fire in his eyes at gopi... But gopi was not even affected by his glare, she was fuming with anger and tears and looked at him in disguist.

"How dare u slap me!!" ahem thundred , his friends took a step back away from him and gopi's friends closed on to her to protect her. "Yes i dare, and why shouldnt i slap u, what do u think that i would keep quiet after all the harresment u have done with me, like everyone else.. U could humiliate me , trample me, and insult me whenver u want and i would just shut my mouth whatever u do?

"U HAVE TO!! miss gopi rajvansh...that's what u people are made for...u cant rise fingers or raise ur voice at us, because u need us, u survive on our donations and thats the reason u have to respect us!" "Respect are given to the persons who deserve it,,not to the persons who are arrogant beast like u!"

"GOPI!!!" "ENOUGH MR.MODI...enough...i am sick of ur constant bargings on ur status..sick of ur constant warnings...sick of ur godfather attitude!!! why do u think u are so special among here, all those things..u brag about everyday...why do u think that u are famous for it...why should people run away from u, why should i bend before u like a slave,...why should i obey u...Just because u

are rich its doesnt mean i am ur life time servant...and u can treat me whatever way u like...u always feel u are the top and best student among any one of us...Today i ask u Mr.Modi..what is ur speciality that eveyone should obey u, that everyone should treat u like a prince...what is it mr.modi that u consider urself superior to everyone ...everyone of us...What do u have Mr.Modi...!!!"

Everyone looked at ahem for his response to the challenged question and ahem looked stunned for a second and started to laugh madly the next second..."what am i? what am i?I am Ahem Modi...the topper of this college, the grand icon of this college, the elder son of the modi family, the future chairman of the modi empire, the soon to be trustee of this college in which ur fate wil be going to rest...so now say gopiji...what do u think...what am I?

Gopi looked calmly at him and a mocking smile slipped her face and ahem mood turned sour within a blink of an eye "u feel this a joke!!" ahem threatned her.. "i thought though arrogant mr.modi u might be smart too to some extent..i mean afterall u are the topper of this college..but today i knew that u are the dumbest fool of this whole world!" "How dare u" ahem took a step towards her.. "yes i do mr.modi.. i asked u a simple question

regarding about u but all u tell me is about ur family!!" "what nonsense are u speaking miss.rajvansh?" ahem asked confused in anger.. "there's nothing any confusion mr.modi...i asked u in a simple sentence.. that what are u? and u have given me ur whole family history. all those things u say, all those titles around u, are given to u by ur parents, u are the elder son of the modi family...the modi family which ur parents strived very hard to establish,

U are going to be the heir of the modi industries/...the modi industries which was created by parents,All that which u have said earlier like ur modi empire, u becoming a trustee, its not u who which achieved it, its ur parents, ur grandparents, ur entire family who worked hard day and night, strived through every obstacle so that their children wont suffer the hard ships but u people, never realize what ur parents went through to make u succusses,

instead be boastful about their parents, take their credit, use their power to make others feel humiliated...U have such a egositic nature that even ur parents dont have it,, because u are blind due to the power u have...all those things which u are boasting now are given to u by ur parents mr.modi!! everything which is their with u is given to u by ur parents...what do u have something which is of ur own..something which is created by u, achieved by u, without ur parents help

or without their name behind it...Atleast i used to think that u are smart enough to have acheived so many records and medals to the college but who knows maybe u got them using ur influence their also!

everyone looked at ahem for his reaction, because everyone knew ahem wont tolerate a insult on his family name or on himself...never!!"

But ahem stood stunned without any reply and for the first time he was listening to her with rapt attention and without any signs of anger or displeasure. gopi continued "so now i ask u again mr.modi what are u really...because everyone around here only knows u as mr.ahem modi but no one knows u as ahem himself..we all have our own identies, every person have his own identity whereas u dont!! when people take my name they consider me only as gopi, the girl

who have is doing well in her academics, a good friend to my fellow classmates, I have a meaning in my life mr.modi, a goal to achive, to look somthing into my future, and mostly i have my own self respect which i am sorry to say u dont!! not only me mr.modi..everyone have something in their lives to give it a meaning, all ur friends out their, have their own dreams, their own goals in life to achive,ur classmates have something to do in their lives, everyone is recognized by their name in some or other way but only u have no reconization with ur name.

u are always the great ahem modi to everyone, but u are never have been only ahem to anyone, because where i stand mr.modi all i can see is ur life is already defined. u are born with a silven spoon, u dont have the need to look for ur future, dont have the intrest to build a career because u already have everything in ur life...a life without no meaning, without any goal, a life with no life at all. u are the first person mr. modi who dont have any meaning in ur life being only ahem without ur surname!"

"so now i ask u again mr.modi...no mr.ahem...what are u?"

AHem simply looked at her with a calm and calculating expression and gopi took a deep breath and continued "u know mr.modi i always pity u, because u always live in a false hood, all those friends out their who are tagging alone with u now, and praising u is because of ur money, all those who are supporting u is because of ur family name, and once u are down...no one would come to ur aid,,..not even one person..u have no friends, no goal, no ambition,u are more poor than all of us mr.modi... u have nothing mr. modi, nothing..." gopi voice vibrated in the silent room and giving

one cursing look at ahem, she went away taking her parents pic and her damaged thesis wiping her tears feeling satisfied. Ahem stood still in the room, dont know how many hours, and slowly the silence broke out, everyone started wishpering around, some supporting gopi, some supporting him, and everyone slipped into their classrooms as if nothing happened nor sligthly effected. His friends cursed gopi and his friend ajay asked ahem for his next move, but ahem gave a single glance at them which meant to leave him alone. Everyone left and slowly sat down in the same room in deep thought.

3 days passed and everything fell normal in the college, busy with practicals, waiting for the holidays to prepare which no one does, all forgot the incident happend in the cafeteria 3 days back after much gossip and debate and it became a juicy news which passed away. but only one person was hugely effected with the incident. If anyone would tell that ahem was a cruel beast pointing at him, then the person wil think u as a mad person, because the change in the great ahem modi was so drastic and unbelivable that it was very hard for anyone to digest, some thought that ahem is acting to escape punishment,

some say that he is trying to keep his reputation but whatever anyone says it was true now that ahem modi was not the cruel golden boy now, he was changed..

"Rubbish!" gopi said taking her dress from her cupboaard, "u always have a grudge on him gopi, just open up and see" shruthi , her co-room mate spoke. "He was so sweet to me while handling the book...and even said mention not! HAIII" preeti fanned herself and fainted. both gopi and shruthi laughed at her. "seriously girls, stop it, i dont want to hear about him!" "Gopi whats this?" shruthi said picking a paper from her note book, all the 3 girls opened it at once and their on the letter was the word "S.O.R.R.Y!!" with a smiley and immediately gopi tore the paper and threw it into the basket. "He's must be feeling

guilty!" anitha explained. "i dont want to listen so please ani...tell him not to interfere in my life again" "But gopi!" "no anitha..please..no more argument, the less i do with him,, the more i wil feel better!" and the moment gopi opened her locker a white rose and a card fell down. Both looked at each other and gopi picked up the card and started reading it "People do some things, out of ignorance, some do out of anger, some do out of pride, some do out of curiosity...consider whatever reason u want...but just give a forgiveness in return" gopi looked up to see ahem looking at them leaning against a wall with a small

friendly smile. Gopi closed her eyes and tore off the card and crushed the flowers and went away fuming. "give him a chance,!!" "NO" gopi shouted...Her life became suddenly so impossible to live, whever she goes,,,,only one thing was said to her..."forgive ahem modi!" her classmates, her friends, the cards, the gifts..it became a nigtmare suddenly...since 2 days she was trying her best to forget the fact that she met a man named ahem modi but he was coming back in her life with vigorous volumes. "gopi, dont be too hard" "why shouldnt i be, because of him i got a zero in the practical, i got lost my shcolarship nd

please,,,i know u all swoon over mr.handsome but leave me alone, i know he's acting!!" "GOPI!!!!!" preeti shouted excited "Mr.Handsome is standing out their" , gopi and shruthi rushed to their window to see ahem standing with a big board saying "sorry" with a expectant look. Gopi could see that a storm was coming and it was getting hard for the golden boy to be outside without ac. She pushed preethi out of the window and slammed the window shut. THe storm started but inside her room another storm was going on. "Talk to him, see what he wants" "he might have gone by now" "yes he is!!" preeti pouted looking

outside the window. "see, i told u...he was acting all the way...there no repenctence nothing ...its just...acting" "well u can tell him that now!" shruthi spoke and when gopi looked at her, she pointed in another direction of window and gopi rushed to see ahem trembling under a tree holding the board and the moment he saw her, gave a huge grin and raised the board high. "Intresting!" shruthi spoke, "irritating!" gopi corrected. "talk to him!" shruthi urged and gopi looked at his direction...

"U are mad..." AHem grinned at gopi. "Mr.modi what..." "Ahem!!" he corrected... "my name is ahem!" gopi stoood dumb for a second. "what do u want?" "Friends..." ahem asked hopefully. "u are definetly mad!" gopi shouted. "wait wait..listen...i know i behaved very badly with u, and it was not right,,.. i shouldnt have treated u like it, but everyone gets a chance to make it right, so here's the deal..u make friendship and i promise i wil the best friend u wil have ever.afterall i have the credit of being a good friend with any girls...ask ur friends if u want!" ahem waved at her friends, and they waved back vigorously...

"see," ahem said raising an eyebrow, grinning and gopi looked at him lost for words..."mr.modi" "ahem!" "shutup, point 1, i hate u, point 2, u wil be the last person in the whole universe i want to be with, point 3...i still hate u!, so leave now and stop ur acting because u are really a horrible actor, and i dont want to do antyhign with u, nor hatred, no friendship nothing, so please go home!" "i get it that i am the person u hate most..but one thing is for sure miss.gopi that everyone person deserve a chance, but u have every right to be angry on me, and its my duty to make that anger go away from ur face, and make u happy.

afterall its a real previlage to be a friend of mine...so better dont lose this opportunity.."ahem grinned.

"u are impossible...and by the way ur way of saying sorry is more like a warning to me...mark my words modi...u cant change and the friendship u are expecting can never happen among us, i dont want to see ur face again,,,so leave me and this place again." "in that case..i am more stubborn than u, until u accept me as ur friend and forgive me...i wont leave u or this place" "Fine, then rot here...i dont care!" gopi said and rushed away leaving him drenching in rain. it was morning and the gopi got ready for her college and all the 3 girls left down.. "do u think he wil be here!" "no way, drenching in rain all night...we are talking about

ahem modi here!!" gopi laughed and ahem sprang instantly infront of her making her jump back "i think someone remmebered me!!" gopi looked at him shocked to see him all drenched in rain and already having a sore throat. "U...U...stayed all night!!" gopi asked suprised. "yes" ahem grinned. "drenching in rain?" shruthi questioned. "anything for my friend" ahem replied. "How sweeet" preeti woowed again. "thanks darling!" ahem winked and preeti gigllled..."SHUT UP!" gopi shouted at her. "Mr.Modi!!" "Ahem" "what do u think, that by doing all this...saying sorry, drenching in rain,,,sending cards,, u can win over me" "yes!" ahem said

confidently "u are the first person who told me what was right, nd what is wrong...i want a person like u in my life more than anyone is...so miss gopi rajvansh...dont even imagine that i am a passing cloud in ur life..because once ahem modi thinks to get something...he wil get it" ahem spoke sincearity ringing in his words...leaving gopi fuming with anger..looking for words... "come on girls" she said still looking at ahem and sped away.

"HEY GOPS..."ahem shouted and gopi turned back..."run wherver u want... whatever u say..or whatever u do...one thing is for sure...u cant escape from me...U wil be my friend one day...for sure...and until then...I WONT LEAVE U!!"

Hope u all liked it...finally the bashing of modi is done...

I have pm everyone who asked it, and if i left someone then please let me know...

coming to the story...so

why did ahem change all of a sudden with a single gopi lecture...

is this change for real or it is like acting as gopi is thinking...

wil ahem change gopi's strong opinion about him and what happened

which destroyed their relation to sore...

so catch again coming friday or saturday...see ya

suggestions are most welcomed...

Part-4 -pg 25

Edited by shaina.sharma - 13 years ago

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maghalakshmi

@maghalakshmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

me first😉so so so nice and very interesting...loved to see this ahem...you are an excellent writer👏

Edited by maghalakshmi - 13 years ago

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

awesome. Loved it. Has gopi failed. I don want her to. Pl let her pass

Edited by vibha_v_bhat - 13 years ago

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

😳res

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u are welcome sugar ...

Fight ...

god shaina .. u totally surprised me 2day ,, wow .. it was amazing .. i love the way Gopi handeled Aham .. it was way better than i would have imagined .. wht a conversation ... very well written .. it rocks .. and for a change i think i am out of words ... loved the entire fight .. every single word .. every single phase ...

A big appaluse to Gopi .. she seem to achieve the impossible .. finally she it get through to him ... i thought tht no one will be able to get through tht thick skull of his ..

and Aham is nothing without his surname .. nice .. and also loved the fact tht she talked about his friends ,, and made sure tht he understand tht he has no friends .. ni true friends ..

now i am feeling sad for him .. u are telling the truth .. he is poorest man in the world .. now he will start thinking .. about his identity i suppsoe .. will he want a true friend and who would be better than Gopi herself .. well .. will read the rest .. and find out for myself

sorry...

this was way better than the fight yaar ... wow .. amazing ... the way Aham tries to say sorry is so sweet .. god tht was so adorable .. he is dam stubborn .. roses remind me of u know who in mjht ... mayan and nupur ... and the waving and winking and the way he talks to Gopi's friend .. reminds me of PM ... shaina u are going make me lose my mind one of these days .. it was a fab part .. loved every single phrase in it too ... love the way he tries to win her friendship and love the way tht she is hell bend in making it as hard as possible for him .. so i guess ...

i didnt quote anything today as i loved the entire thing and if i do quote will have to paste the entire thing here .. waste of space ..

coming to the story...so

why did ahem change all of a sudden with a single gopi lecture...

now tht is sort of a problem .. at first i thought .. after such an out spoken blasting he had no choice but to understand wht truely he was and u have written it in a way tht even i was so taken by it and it seems to be flawless and no loop wholes .. so no wonder he was unable to open his mouth ..

as u did promise to make sure tht u would make me hate Aham😆 .. it made me think is it really tht simple to change Aham Modi .😉.. another thing tht crossed my mind is tht .. he could be bluffing and trying to take revenge from her by becoming friends and then showing his true colours 😭.. as u are one twisted writer😉 and cruel one too😆 .. u urself said u love to play with my mind😭 ... i was thinking am i in for a heart break .. as i am totally in love with the present Aham Modi ... i know he is bad .. but couldnt help falling for him .. and tht bad boy attitude is the reason i love PM and ASR ...

is this change for real or it is like acting as gopi is thinking...

u tell me ... hope nt hun .. tht would be bad .. i would be devastated .. but if the story deands for it .. i hope u will have to pull tht stunt too ... btw the scolding was even way better than a simple kiss ..

wil ahem change gopi's strong opinion about him and what happened

i guess if the story need to proceed .. she needs to forgive him and whether he is genuine or nt totally depends on u ,, and i am wondering wht sort of twisted ideas are going through tht head of urs ..

which destroyed their relation to sore...

if he is putting an act tht would surly destroy their relationship to sore ... or it always can be an misunderstanding tht he was putting a act .. i mean .. tht he is genuine but someone creates circumstances tht make gopi believe tht he is bluffing .. may be anita is involved in it ... so u might surprise us altogether ... who knows .. wht u are up to ...

so catch again coming friday or saturday...see ya

see u around sugar ...
suggestions are most welcomed...

nothing comes to my mind ... expect tht i smell something is cooking .. and i have a gut feeling tht u are upto something .. tht will definitely surprise me .. so i am having my fingers crossed and will wait .. until the next update to find out wht u are planning ...

btw thanx for the huge update .. and thanx for making up for the delay .. love u ..

although u are an one cruel writer ... u always stops at such a place when i want more to read ... btw nice nickname GOPS ... and last statement is fab ...

now will see how u bring about the next update and how far will u go in to gin=ving hints .. so tht the readers get more and more confused on it ...

so until the next update ,,,,

will wait ..

xoxo

- -badra

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