FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vibha_v_bhat

awesome. Loved it. Has gopi failed. I don want her to. Pl let her pass

dont worry vibha she got a new friend who wil look after her..now...

thanks dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maghalakshmi

me first😉so so so nice and very interesting...loved to see this ahem...you are an excellent writer👏

ha ha yeah first..u...thanks a lot maghalakshmi...u can see more different shade of ahem in the ff..

get ready for a senstive ahem in the next udpate.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..Awesome..
Awesome..It was mind-blowing Shaina.I loved it.⭐️Ahem changed???I don't believe it.I am sure he is planning something big on our poor Gopi.Wait till u fall in love Mr.Modi..😉
.I forgot to ask for pm again.Plz Shaina do pm me when u update.

Love,
Swetha

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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice to read this chapter.love the way ahem is apologizing to gopi.hope this change is for real.waiting eagerly for the next one.loved this chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous, great. exciting update.
wow simply wow, the slap will go down goham's love history.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shaina loved the update dear...it was amazing
ahem's bashing was awesome..
i dont believe he's changed... i guess he's trying to take revenge
poor gopi...but the update was brilliant shaina
and will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

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u are welcome sugar ...

thanks mano

Fight ...

god shaina .. u totally surprised me 2day ,, wow .. it was amazing .. i love the way Gopi handeled Aham .. it was way better than i would have imagined .. wht a conversation ... very well written .. it rocks .. and for a change i think i am out of words ... loved the entire fight .. every single word .. every single phase ...

thanks..really thanks for liking these dialogues because actually i made half of the update of the fight but still it dint touch my heart and hence deleted everything againa nd started writing just gong into gopi character and once it was done..i felt really sure that it would be really good...u just conformed it.

A big appaluse to Gopi .. she seem to achieve the impossible .. finally she it get through to him ... i thought tht no one will be able to get through tht thick skull of his ..

Ha ha u are right, its really diifcult to get through.the thick skull of his..see u already started to critise him.

and Aham is nothing without his surname .. nice .. and also loved the fact tht she talked about his friends ,, and made sure tht he understand tht he has no friends .. ni true friends ..

It often happens in people..that they think that the people who praise around him are their true firends but only the true face comes when the time comes.

now i am feeling sad for him .. u are telling the truth .. he is poorest man in the world .. now he will start thinking .. about his identity i suppsoe .. will he want a true friend and who would be better than Gopi herself .. well .. will read the rest .. and find out for myself

in a way yes its a ptiy for the persons like ahme but what to do..the things they do are too hard..to forgive...yes he wil think about his identtity for sure...and definetly in need of a friend for sure.

sorry...

this was way better than the fight yaar ... wow .. amazing ... the way Aham tries to say sorry is so sweet .. god tht was so adorable .. he is dam stubborn .. roses remind me of u know who in mjht ... mayan and nupur ... and the waving and winking and the way he talks to Gopi's friend .. reminds me of PM ... shaina u are going make me lose my mind one of these days .. it was a fab part .. loved every single phrase in it too ... love the way he tries to win her friendship and love the way tht she is hell bend in making it as hard as possible for him .. so i guess ...

i didnt quote anything today as i loved the entire thing and if i do quote will have to paste the entire thing here .. waste of space ..

Ha ha so u liked this part..i am glad because i am really satisfied with this part too.Yes ahem is a mixed combination of mayank and pm...but the style of pm more can be seen...

ha ha u asked for it mano...u wanted a fab part...so how can i deny u...dont worry u are just in the start...slowly u wil fall in sync wiht ahem modi.


coming to the story...so

why did ahem change all of a sudden with a single gopi lecture...

now tht is sort of a problem .. at first i thought .. after such an out spoken blasting he had no choice but to understand wht truely he was and u have written it in a way tht even i was so taken by it and it seems to be flawless and no loop wholes .. so no wonder he was unable to open his mouth ..

as u did promise to make sure tht u would make me hate Aham😆 .. it made me think is it really tht simple to change Aham Modi .😉.. another thing tht crossed my mind is tht .. he could be bluffing and trying to take revenge from her by becoming friends and then showing his true colours 😭.. as u are one twisted writer😉 and cruel one too😆 .. u urself said u love to play with my mind😭 ... i was thinking am i in for a heart break .. as i am totally in love with the present Aham Modi ... i know he is bad .. but couldnt help falling for him .. and tht bad boy attitude is the reason i love PM and ASR ...

yes ahem is indeed impressed with gopi speech, because for the first time he reamined calm and calculating in the entire conversation without anger and no one can act that.

haha i wont reaveal anything more and wil leave u to think..but make me clear that though its quite really difficult to change ahem modi but again i would say that even thoguh he is flirtery and boasts about himself it doesnt mean that he is mean .

i wont deney that gopi words effected him and how it hit himm...wait and read.

heartbreak is sure because it wont move the story forward...lets see how it happens..dont worry u wil fall in love for sure..


is this change for real or it is like acting as gopi is thinking...

u tell me ... hope nt hun .. tht would be bad .. i would be devastated .. but if the story deands for it .. i hope u will have to pull tht stunt too ... btw the scolding was even way better than a simple kiss ..

thanks a lot mano...i love the conversation too, u wil know soon whos acting and who is planning from behind...

wil ahem change gopi's strong opinion about him and what happened

i guess if the story need to proceed .. she needs to forgive him and whether he is genuine or nt totally depends on u ,, and i am wondering wht sort of twisted ideas are going through tht head of urs ..

of course anyone can guess it..my mistake...😆

well many ideas..are running but dont know what to take..where to turn..

which destroyed their relation to sore...

if he is putting an act tht would surly destroy their relationship to sore ... or it always can be an misunderstanding tht he was putting a act .. i mean .. tht he is genuine but someone creates circumstances tht make gopi believe tht he is bluffing .. may be anita is involved in it ... so u might surprise us altogether ... who knows .. wht u are up to ...

u are right upto some extent...i leave it to u which one is the right...😉

so catch again coming friday or saturday...see ya

see u around sugar ...
suggestions are most welcomed...

nothing comes to my mind ... expect tht i smell something is cooking .. and i have a gut feeling tht u are upto something .. tht will definitely surprise me .. so i am having my fingers crossed and will wait .. until the next update to find out wht u are planning ...

U wil be suprised for sure...toatally suprised...

btw thanx for the huge update .. and thanx for making up for the delay .. love u ..

thanks to u, as i can keep this length now..

although u are an one cruel writer ... u always stops at such a place when i want more to read ... btw nice nickname GOPS ... and last statement is fab ...

its my specaily of course and yes..i am tired of this gopi and ahemji...so ahem and gops...

i edited this statement at the end in the last minute too...thanks u loved it.

now will see how u bring about the next update and how far will u go in to gin=ving hints .. so tht the readers get more and more confused on it ...

ha ha thanks...and yes i reveal the hints making the readers more confused...

so until the next update ,,,,

see ya


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Posted: 13 years ago
So sweet.good to see the change in Ahem,love it!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc part but i think aHem is actin
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah, dear Gopi finally lashed out 😆

Hope they will be able to make some good memories before Mr Modi breaks her heart which I assume he does from Gopi's entrance in your earlier chapters when you mentioned all the hard work and toil he went through to get her to like him and the satisfaction he felt when he heard the words "I love you Ahem".😕

Anther fantastic chapter, can't wait to read on😃

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