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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sravz23

loved the interaction.plzzz do end it as gohem. no other pair.

continue sooon.

ha ha dont worry gohem for sure..but with a lot of twists and turns..

thanks

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

wooowww loved the 2 second part 👏 finally we r not soo far of ahams past now i guess

aham in the show is better then this aham😆atleast
update soon n do pm me 😛

yup u are not so far a more 2 or 3 updates and over...

yeah agree, that kadoos ahem modi is really far better than this flirtery fellow..its up to u to who u love.

k and yeah i wil pm u, thanks for asking

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sks21

omg loved the second part...it was fantastic...
so we get to see the real ahem here...but still love him...
the update was amazing shaina...
and add me to the pm list
waiting for the next update

yup , u got the real ahem modi now..so lets see how wil u suprise him later...

god why cant anyoen say i hate himm.. i am here trying so hard to make the charcter have a neg

impact...poor me😆

thanks sks and yeah i wil add u...

wil pm u for the next update for sure...and thanks for asking

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: faayey

WOOOW...That was brilliantly written i totally loved the ending can you PM me when you update it next 👏

thanks faayey...yup i wil pm u for sure...thanks for asking

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gohem123

I was reading all FF's and i came across this one..simply awesome..I didn't like your aham much, but i know he will become sweet as the story progresses...I want goham only ..no aham- anita please...love your story...please continue...

ha ha tanks and dont worry for the gohem part..its a gohem love story for sure..no triangles welll there wil be..but all wil end well..

finally i got the statement i was waiting for...u dont like this ahem...dont worry it wil be my challenge to make u love hima nd ask me to make them togheter urself..

thanks once again

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Posted: 14 years ago

loveee it a lottt


ahhh thanks a lot

]Hai guys thanks for waiting and thanku thanku thanku so much for such a huge response for the first part...and well read and i wil tell u... - - u are welcome sugar ... the 1st part was so captivating ... i guess most couldnt help but comment😉 ..


ha ha maybe u are right..lol...anyways thanks for the kind words..

Part-2
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Well not so impressed with this part...hope u would like it...- - wow u must be joking about nt being impressed by it .. u know i was totally taken back by it .. wow .. simply amazing .. EXCEL college .. btw were they in college before samrath and gunjan .. or after ...

ha ha ...i thought a whole 5 min keeping u in mind about the college name..i knew u would ask me this question but i really heard that there is a real excel college in delhi..so i took the risk..

and coming to my dear gunjan amd sammmy well...u see gohem are mba and saajan are arts so seperate block u see...dont worry if u want i wil add them too.

nt only Aham .. Gopi seems to be different too ... wow it was amzing ...


yeah gopi is a strong character..of todays world not a navie dumb person as she is shown in the sns world who forgives people so easily

loved Aham and Gopi both the conversations and the interactions are so intense ... initially i thought Aham was too good when he said sorry aand he change his tactic in a blink of an eye .. u took me by suprise .. by showing his true colours .. love the way u have put it ...


thanks for the kind words dear..i wanted this scene to be more..u know...drama and ahem to be

more cruel but what to do..ditn got into the character so easily...ahem is really tough..hence i was bit dissapointed to with this part as i couldnt potray him properly...

but i am glad u all got the intention what i wanted to show..that Ahem modi..is a realll u know what...😉

it reminded me of MJHT .. and specidfically the story tht nupur and mayan are telling to tht guy who gives them a lift when they were on their way to the contest ... it was the other way though .. i mean the ragging part😉 ...


ha ha u brought the old memory back,...its was so funny in mjht and the expression of mayank was awsome...totally...

so it made u remember mjht..dont worry..i have a mjht concept in mind too...will start that ff when i think its wil be appropriate..

welcome to hell ... reminds me of kutumb ... god i love tht show ...


Heyy i love that show too...do u have the videos of it..because i reallly miss the show and pratam mital of course...

yeah it wil be a bit of kutumb in the ff..so enjoy

this part brought forth so much of memories of my fav shows ... it isnt simlar at all .. but the simple fact like the name of the college and tht specific line brings forth the memories ..as i associates those stories with these things ...


wow u put this togheter..even i dint felt the same but ur words makes it sense...yes the introduction of gopi and ahem shows the kutumb scenea nd the remaining events wil uncover mjht for sure..dont worr..

u are making me miss them too..my favs mjht and kutumb god i miss those shows.

have to say dr this piece is dam nice and unique .. i love the way u goes to the past in a blink of an eye by freezing it all together .. btw it was a good idea to releve the past aat tht ponit .. i was wondering when i would get to kow wht was cookig in ur brain

thanks mano..i want this ff to be unique too...ha tanks still muling to keep it in suspense or to open it out fast...dont know..what to do..the past reaveal is no pbm but the past ending is a pbm

because at one pojnt i want to show actually what happend to move the story happend but again i

want a short twist too...dont know how to keep that/

and u have introduced Anita too .. ok let see whether i got this right .. anitha is in Aham's class and which means Aham's age and parents are friend .. according to wht he told gopi in their first meeting .. Anita isnt fond of Aham .. and likes gopi ... but in the present she is clinging to Aham and feels insecure when she see gopi ...

yeah i planned anitha but being gopi freind was a brain wave again..what to do..i cant control myself... yes anitha is ahem;s classmate...gopi's senior and yes i have mentioned in the ppresent that koki accepted considering anitha mother being a rich nri and her friend..so its fits.

well i cant say anitha is not fond of ahem but she dont like his attitude..u see she says that ahem is her friend so she wants both the persons friendship at once..lets see..how wil she maintain and

why does she became so negetive and tensed on seeing her friend..

which means there are more skeletons in the closet .. letz see wht u have for us .. so will wait desperately for ur next update ...

yup defineltly more plotting in mind..the journey just began..get ready..

and another thing .. i was imaging the whole college scene replacing charater in mjth .. it was hard .. but i did enjoy it a lot ...

oh and i imagined the kutumb college...ha ha

so all the previosue ahem lovers...Meet the real ahem modi of saathi re.

how do u like him...?

- - ok .. if u insist on knowing how i felt about Aham .. i mean the new Aham .. i simply love him yaar ... real aham modi is more appealing .. he seems to be a rich , arrogant brat .. having an huge ego and is talented to as he brings in the medals and trophies int o the college .. golden boy of the college .. missuses his power and family name ... but hunny wht do i always tends to adore the bad boy than the sweet lover boys .. so this aham is more appealing than the one in milan .. sorry hun but u have broken ur own record .. this seems to be better than milan😉 ...


Nahhiin why do girls always likes bad boyss more..well u got his chracter right..real ahem modi is really full of himself so lets see how gopi breaks his ego..., a real spoilt golden boy and power hungry..

dont worry i too agree that this ff wil be more intresting than milan because as u know..the next one should be better than the prvious one for sure..

and yeah at one point i like this ahem more than milan because this is my ahem modi

looking forward to read more and more about how the bad boys gets his heart stolen and wht happened to change all the typical expectation ...

u wil watch and wil get a zhor ka jatka for sure.


so what wil ahem modi gives in reply for the slap given to him infront of everyone. - - how about a kiss ... it might nt be right ... but Aham will and cannt slap her back .. and if he wants to hurt her and her ego .. kiss would be a nice solution .. and also tht mind actually bring forth emotions tht both never thought tht they could posses for each other ... or u can always suprise me .. by pulling an unexpected trick .. will see ???

oho u have ideas too and good one i must say...but the kiss wont move my story...as u wil know why..the love story have to begin right..so i am giving u a fast love story instead of a dragiging one and then the real heart break regardng why they got seperated.

i really want to suprise u...so the kiss wil be postponed..mabe to the next ff i got or to the some point in the update..dont know for sure.. and kiss wil be a real serious issue..so u wil know why ahem dint kiss her in the coming updates...for sure..

what change brought him to bring close to gopi and why does he went to anitha now?...stay tuned... and sorry if the part is boring

- - it isnt boring hun .. nt at all .. but one problem .. i am feeling like shooting u for stopping it at the slap .. now have to wait a whole week to find out wht u have in ur mind .. and it is killing me ... dont worry will be tunned .. until the end .. as i am addicted to it by now .. cannt help myself ... well done agin .. give ur self an applause for making me an addict 😉 .. thanx for tht btw ..

thanks for liking it...ha ha eveyrone does..and as u know..i am a cruel writer..and always play with ppeople brains...maybe u got used with reading milan by now and if u dint then better make the habit now...

sorry for the delay and i cant move the schedule now too as i have promised people that it wil be on friday...so just wait adn all i can do is to nto to dissapoint u with..

thanks mano and dotn worry i wil make party for myself to make u like the ff and now my motive wil be to make u hate ahem modi..lets see how wil i succeed.


A small request for all the readers...i dint expect this ff to be so hit with such huge responses -- nt fair sugar .. i did tell u tht it will be a hit .. u didnt believe me .. i feel heart broken .. weeping over here ...

dont dear...i expected it to be hit..with ur words but nto super hit..

so i really dont know to how many people i have to pm so please let me know only for this time to whom i should pm u so that i can make a list..and i wil pm them until the ff ends.


and the people who dont want any pm the daily shedule of update is every friday night or saturdays...its a regular shedule and if any change i wil intimate in the ff.

thank u

Note : i alreday pm the persons who requested earlier,.no need for them to ask. again. - - oh i see😉

let me end my comment telling u tht u have out done ur self ..and i am looking forward to find out more anbd more .. so keep me updated .. and surprise me sugar 😉 .. btw i have doubt on tht dept ..

ha tanks once again for making me shy and bulldozing me to keep moer effort on the update..

i wil suprise u for sure atlest i know that ...

see u around .. until tht be good and behave😉😆

btw feel free to inform if i am annoying .. i know i am .. but u like it na 😉

Be good well thats a challenge for me...

well what to say...u and i know it very well...i love it.. and feel free to annoy me..u like it na

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Precious_

I read both chapters in one go and absolutely loved it. It has to be good, bcoz it comes from the author of great Milan. Even though you portray Ahem as arrogant, egoistic, self centred and with all bad qualities I can not hate him. I really hope Gopi will transform him to a sweet person who will be loved by every body. By the way, I loved your Gopi better than the serial one. I know you love Rashi more, but please give us equal GoHem also. Could you pm me when you update next. Thanks.

thanks precious...oh u are making me blush now..i stil dint get that how did u all like milan so extrodinary way..well u cant hate ahem...well no one cant and i dont know why...well its good for me as what wil i write if i show himm a lover boy...and ur loving this arrogant fellow wil make me

go more deeper into his character..see i am again talking to myyself here..

of course..gopi the changer wil do her magic but lets see how it wil affect him..

yes i love this gopi more too rather than in ssns...ha ha finally the first person who told me on

the face that i am a rashi lover...ha i like it adn thanks..

dont worry i love the gohem and rashi both equally and when comes to ff...u will see gohem more as people wil kill me if i write rashi autobigraphey here..

but still i manage to slip my rashi in between somehow...and i am glad people loved her in milan..hope to do the same here and dont worry...i wil justify the couple equally...

yup i wil pm u for sure..dotn worry and thanks for asking

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetySweetu

Wowww...I didn't expect Ahem to be so arrogant.Iam sure he would definitely avenge for this slap.I just loved this Gopi,standing up for herself⭐️.Bring the update soon Shaina...Not able to wait till Thursday...That's a real long time

well its a suprsie.well i wont kil the suspense...so waita nd read..

yeah i love this gopi too..a strong character rather than a crying pricness.

i wil update soon i promise...

hope u wil catch soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vibha_v_bhat

Omg this update was awesome. It was masaledar to the maximum.i loved it. So u r the one who wrote milan? Tat s the best ff i ever read.loved the relation between rashi n ahem in tat.started likin rashi oly after readin ur ff.job well done.add me to ur pm list.am waiting eagerly for this friday.love the way story s progressing.hope next part is more tadakta bhadakta.don want gopi to fail coz of ahem.

ha ha tanks vibha..that was really a unique way to describe it...i loved it too.

yup i am the brain eater who wrote milan..Wow thanks i thhougt u were about to bash me for writing it..

yes i love rahme in milan and many did hence i kept both the persons in good terms here too. but u wil have fun with gohem more.

yes i got a rashi lover again from my ff...thanks i am so happy with teh statemnt that u liked my orange girl.

yup i wil add u dont worry..and thanks for asking..

sorry for the delay..andn wil update soon..

u bet next part wil be very emotional with all the feelings..dotn worry...i wotn let u down...

no she wont fail.. dont worry about it

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: magi11

oh no... i have been eagerly waiting for your update...

its ok happy journey...don forget to update it as soon as u return...
will be waiting...

thanks maggi and sorry dont worry i wil update soon as i come..and here i came.. the update wil take time..

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