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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 143badra



Hi sugar u broke my heart ... Still collecting the pieces over here ...was it too filmy .. I mean the statement ...
So u are visiting some other city ... Have a nice time .. Will u have some intention
In going out .. Hope everything happens according to ur wishes and in ur favour ...
Was waiting to know Wht would the result of the slap be ... I know u would let us suffer if u had any choice .. U are evil ( as u always stop at place which gives me headaches due to too much thinking) But u aren't tht evil to purposely make us wait for an another week ...

So I have been buttering u up and make u feel guilty at the same time .. As I have a whole different plan for u ...
So are u feeling guilty for breaking my heart ... How could u do this to me sugar ... Oh I am going to depression mode all thanx to u .. At least now are u feeling sad for me ... If u are I have accomplish my goal up to a certain extend ...

So u can make me feel good again .. All u have to do is when u write the update ... Make it long .. I mean huge ... Size of a milan update .. Or even the size of two updates would do ... So Wht are u thinking now ... Shall I guess ... "god she is unbelievable " ...

Don't disappoint me sugar .. Will be desperately waiting for the next update ... And sorry for being such a brat ... Can't help it ... love u .. And will me u ...

So until the next update ...
Tc
Be good
xoxo

Btw if I said anything inappropriate .. Sorry ... Forgive me .. I am still a kid na ( u must be thinking .. Kid my foot .. Rather a walking talking Disaster)



sorry mano yeah too filmy but ...its k i know ur style and thanks for wishing me..

yeah u got me...suffer until i reveal the most awaiting part...so get used to it..as everyone knows

i am a cruel twist writer..

ha ha dont think too much that wil give a migrane and if u wannt i wil give hints to u so that u can mangae..cant i do it for my friend

oh its the buttering so u want something from me lets see what.

well ur attempt is mading me laugh so sorry ...anyways lets see what u want as i wil do it for sure

yes...u are right...now u put me in a fix for sure...

a long update and that too keeping the story in mind...well leets see how wil it turn out...

u want a milan type update...so what else can i do..i wil make it longer so i wil need time for it so be patient then..he he sweet revenge right

what to do..i love this brat in u...and cant help it so play with me all along..

ha ha i love the last sentence...

and yes u are sti.lll a walking talking disaster..for me...it wont change.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maghalakshmi

excellent work...loved it to the core...pl add me to your pm list

thanks magha lakshimm yeah i wil add it to the pm list ...

thanks for asking

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsshree

pls pm wen u add the next part😭

yup i wil rashree..dont cry please...and thanks for askng

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uamaz


Shame, have a safe journey and take care.


thanks umaz


Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Oh no,okay,update quick plz and have a safe journey😭😊


thanks chika...and i wil update soon dont worry.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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Well not so impressed with this part...hope u would like it...- - wow u must be joking about nt being impressed by it .. u know i was totally taken back by it .. wow .. simply amazing .. EXCEL college .. btw were they in college before samrath and gunjan .. or after ...

ha ha ...i thought a whole 5 min keeping u in mind about the college name.. wow u were thinking about me .. i am honored i guess .. should i worry about it😉 .. i knew u would ask me this question but i really heard that there is a real excel college in delhi..so i took the risk.. thtz news for me ... i truly thought tht it was a built up name .. thanx for the info sugar...

and coming to my dear gunjan amd sammmy well...u see gohem are mba and saajan are arts so seperate block u see...dont worry if u want i wil add them too.

now tht all depends on wht type of plot u have in mind .. anyways as i am loving ur GoAham track i wont be bothering much in including them ...


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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it reminded me of MJHT .. and specidfically the story tht nupur and mayan are telling to tht guy who gives them a lift when they were on their way to the contest ... it was the other way though .. i mean the ragging part😉 ...

ha ha u brought the old memory back,...its was so funny in mjht and the expression of mayank was awsome...totally...

so it made u remember mjht..dont worry..i have a mjht concept in mind too...will start that ff when i think its wil be appropriate.. oh so was tht a slip of the tongue or just a reply in the spark of the moment or just being nice to me .. wht ever it was i love the fact tht u gave away tht u have another ff in mind .. will be waiting for it too .. thanx for the hint 😉


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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welcome to hell ... reminds me of kutumb ... god i love tht show ...

Heyy i love that show too...do u have the videos of it..because i reallly miss the show and pratam mital of course... ditto i too love pratam mital a lot ...

as u already know su is a die-heart fan of gauri and hiten ... mainly gauri .. and if she has got it which means itz nt there in the web 😉 ... she gave me the entire story .. kutumb 1 as well as 2 .. i am nt a huge fan of kutumb 2 .. but cannt hate it either ... but i have no idea from where she got them .. thus no links available ... but in utube u can find the full ep of high quality vids upto 75th ep .. and they will upload the rest later it seems as they are too occupied in uploading the current shows are finding it difficult to keep up with the old ones .. but have promised to upload them when time permits ... if u want more about where u can find the rest let me know i will talk to su about it ..

yeah it wil be a bit of kutumb in the ff..so enjoy

now tht is great news .. and u bet can bet on it .. tht i will enjoy it .. if in case i wont dont worry sugar u will be the first to know😉 ..


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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this part brought forth so much of memories of my fav shows ... it isnt simlar at all .. but the simple fact like the name of the college and tht specific line brings forth the memories ..as i associates those stories with these things ...

wow u put this togheter..even i dint felt the same but ur words makes it sense...yes the introduction of gopi and ahem shows the kutumb scenea nd the remaining events wil uncover mjht for sure..dont worr..

u are making me miss them too..my favs mjht and kutumb god i miss those shows.

sorry babes .. but couldnt help it u made me want to watch ktumb all over again ... btw this one of the reasons tht i keep a back up copy of my fav shows .. of kutumb i have 3 copies .. one on dvd , then in my hard drive and in my laptop ... and i can can watch it as and when i feel ... sorry u must be feeling annoyed .. i would if i u had it and i didnt .. 😆


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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have to say dr this piece is dam nice and unique .. i love the way u goes to the past in a blink of an eye by freezing it all together .. btw it was a good idea to releve the past aat tht ponit .. i was wondering when i would get to kow wht was cookig in ur brain

thanks mano..i want this ff to be unique too...ha tanks still muling to keep it in suspense or to open it out fast...dont know..what to do..the past reaveal is no pbm but the past ending is a pbm

fair enough u should be worried about tht .. as the whole stories attractiveness or tickeness depend on how u put it into words and each and every thing should be releaved on due time .. nt too early and nt too late ... though it is a torture to wait to know wht the past is about .. u continue as ur heart pleases as until now ur attempts have been fruitful .. and every update how late it becomes is worth waiting for ...

because at one pojnt i want to show actually what happend to move the story happend but again i

want a short twist too...dont know how to keep that/

now there i cannt help .. as u are the creative one so .. think and i have no doubt tht u will come up with something and i bet it would surprise me .. but one advice dont give me another heart attack😉


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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and u have introduced Anita too .. ok let see whether i got this right .. anitha is in Aham's class and which means Aham's age and parents are friend .. according to wht he told gopi in their first meeting .. Anita isnt fond of Aham .. and likes gopi ... but in the present she is clinging to Aham and feels insecure when she see gopi ...

yeah i planned anitha but being gopi freind was a brain wave again..what to do..i cant control myself... yes anitha is ahem;s classmate...gopi's senior and yes i have mentioned in the ppresent that koki accepted considering anitha mother being a rich nri and her friend..so its fits.

well i cant say anitha is not fond of ahem but she dont like his attitude..u see she says that ahem is her friend so she wants both the persons friendship at once..lets see..how wil she maintain and

why does she became so negetive and tensed on seeing her friend.. -- i am looking forward to tht ... will see how u pull it off .. hope u wont shake the living daylights out of me 😉


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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so all the previosue ahem lovers...Meet the real ahem modi of saathi re.

how do u like him...?

- - ok .. if u insist on knowing how i felt about Aham .. i mean the new Aham .. i simply love him yaar ... real aham modi is more appealing .. he seems to be a rich , arrogant brat .. having an huge ego and is talented to as he brings in the medals and trophies int o the college .. golden boy of the college .. missuses his power and family name ... but hunny wht do i always tends to adore the bad boy than the sweet lover boys .. so this aham is more appealing than the one in milan .. sorry hun but u have broken ur own record .. this seems to be better than milan😉 ...

Nahhiin why do girls always likes bad boyss more..cant help hun tht is nature i duess -- well u got his chracter right.--glad i did-- .real ahem modi is really full of himself so lets see how gopi breaks his ego..., a real spoilt golden boy and power hungry..

dont worry i too agree that this ff wil be more intresting than milan because as u know..the next one should be better than the prvious one for sure..

and yeah at one point i like this ahem more than milan because this is my ahem modi - -love ur Aham Modi ... is it too much to ask for him for my self .. ok ok .. ok i will settle for sharing him if u dont mind ..


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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looking forward to read more and more about how the bad boys gets his heart stolen and wht happened to change all the typical expectation ...

u wil watch and wil get a zhor ka jatka for sure. - - i expect nothing less from u babes 😉...i think i am ready for it .. hope i am 😉


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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so what wil ahem modi gives in reply for the slap given to him infront of everyone. - - how about a kiss ... it might nt be right ... but Aham will and cannt slap her back .. and if he wants to hurt her and her ego .. kiss would be a nice solution .. and also tht mind actually bring forth emotions tht both never thought tht they could posses for each other ... or u can always suprise me .. by pulling an unexpected trick .. will see ???

oho u have ideas too and good one😳 i must say - - wow .. thanx for the compliments😉 ...but the kiss wont move my story...as u wil know why..the love story have to begin right..so i am giving u a fast love story instead of a dragiging one and then the real heart break regardng why they got seperated. - - u are cruel .. u always want to give me a heart attack .. but i guess the story demands for it... i dont mind at all as at the end it is worth it .. 😉

i really want to suprise u...so the kiss wil be postponed..mabe to the next ff i got or to the some point in the update..dont know for sure.. and kiss wil be a real serious issue😳..so u wil know why ahem dint kiss her in the coming updates...for sure.. - - as along as u are writing it i dont mind when and where ... and btw a kiss would satisfy me for now .. but as u continue i expect more 😉 .. u know wht i mean ...


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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what change brought him to bring close to gopi and why does he went to anitha now?...stay tuned... and sorry if the part is boring

- - it isnt boring hun .. nt at all .. but one problem .. i am feeling like shooting u for stopping it at the slap .. now have to wait a whole week to find out wht u have in ur mind .. and it is killing me ... dont worry will be tunned .. until the end .. as i am addicted to it by now .. cannt help myself ... well done agin .. give ur self an applause for making me an addict 😉 .. thanx for tht btw ..

thanks for liking it...ha ha eveyrone does..and as u know..i am a cruel writer - - cruel to the core 😉..and always play with ppeople brains...maybe u got used with reading milan by now and if u dint then better make the habit now... - - i am used to it .. but hun .. every time u do it i just feel the same .. the more prepared i am the more impatience i get .. trying to make it a habit .. but it doesnt seem to be doing any good .. but will try harder

sorry for the delay and i cant move the schedule now too as i have promised people that it wil be on friday...so just wait adn all i can do is to nto to dissapoint u with.. -- will be waiting .. and just fyi .. how much bad u write it will nt dissapoint me as ur worst update will be excellent .. think u got my point 😉

thanks mano and dotn worry i wil make party for myself to make u like the ff and now my motive wil be to make u hate ahem modi..lets see how wil i succeed. - - now hun .. i am wondering whether u have sighed up for more than u can handle😉.. will see how u make me hate Aham Modi ... if u accomplish this u will be dam .. i mean dam good at ur job .. will be waiting for u to make me hate him ..


Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

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let me end my comment telling u tht u have out done ur self ..and i am looking forward to find out more anbd more .. so keep me updated .. and surprise me sugar 😉 .. btw i have doubt on tht dept ..

ha tanks once again for making me shy and bulldozing me to keep moer effort on the update..

i wil suprise u for sure atlest i know that ... - -- wow .. now why doesnt it sound like news .. i am delighted tht u intend to surprise me .. having my fingers crossed ..

see u around .. until tht be good and behave😉😆

btw feel free to inform if i am annoying .. i know i am .. but u like it na 😉

Be good well thats a challenge for me... - - dont worry u will accomplish it 😉 .. i wish .. but will have my fingers crossed just in case ..😆

well what to say...u and i know it very well...i love it.. and feel free to annoy me..u like it na - - as u gave me the official permission to annoy u in the ff as well as ur previous ff ... hope u wont regret giving me permission .. fair warning hun ..be ready for whtz coming ur way ..

god .. this is a bit too long ...

will comment on the other post in a while ... . and as this is too long did nt include it here ..

so until the next update 😉

- - badra

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma


sorry mano yeah too filmy but ...its k i know ur style and thanks for wishing me..

yeah u got me...suffer until i reveal the most awaiting part...so get used to it..as everyone knows

i am a cruel twist writer..

ha ha dont think too much that wil give a migrane and if u wannt i wil give hints to u so that u can mangae..cant i do it for my friend

oh its the buttering so u want something from me lets see what.

well ur attempt is mading me laugh so sorry ...anyways lets see what u want as i wil do it for sure

yes...u are right...now u put me in a fix for sure...

a long update and that too keeping the story in mind...well leets see how wil it turn out...

u want a milan type update...so what else can i do..i wil make it longer so i wil need time for it so be patient then..he he sweet revenge right

what to do..i love this brat in u...and cant help it so play with me all along..

ha ha i love the last sentence...

and yes u are sti.lll a walking talking disaster..for me...it wont change.

glad u like it ... u do know me too well by now😉 ...

u might be a cruel writer .. but babes u are one hell of a writer .. a dam good one .. so cannt blame u for being evil .. can i .. as i am at ur mercy 😉 ..

btw i do enjoy putting u in trouble 😉 ... it feels so good 😳.😆..

will try my leave best to control myself ... yep .. sweet revenge ... 😆 ... but i guess it is all worth it .. so wil take it ... just for u 😉

thanx hun .. love u too for being u... u are such a sweet heart and a dear friend ... love to play eith u and glad tht u are willing to play along ...😉

yep .. i am a walking talking disaster .. u being there feels it .. just imagine the people around me .. i am feeling sorry for them😉😆 ... u might be feeling sorry for su .. i so dont .. she is nt less than me in any way ... different for sure ,, but nt any less ...

as my brother always says the guy who marries me or fall me will nt know wht hit him .. he is doomed ...

so catch u later ... and i will try to keep my act together .. i promise 😉

- - badra


Edited by 143badra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next update i daily check the post for the next part... it;s soo nice can't wait fr the next part

- munni

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

yup , u got the real ahem modi now..so lets see how wil u suprise him later...

god why cant anyoen say i hate himm.. i am here trying so hard to make the charcter have a neg

impact...poor me😆

thanks sks and yeah i wil add u...

wil pm u for the next update for sure...and thanks for asking


cant help it shaina😆...in serial also when he was rude to gopi we still liked him and now he's changing in the serial...so its very difficult to hate him here also...
but i really appreciate ur effort...ur doing such a wonderful job
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 143badra


ha ha so i am saved without having mjht...saajan...thank god..dont worry i wil give a sweet saajan scenes in the ff too.


agreed its a slip of tongue as the story is still developing...for ur kind information it wont come so sooon.


wow that great news for me...i miss kutumb so much...so so much...can u give me the link to the utube please...


WHAT...this is unfair...iam crying here...mummmyyy

giving u a killing look


agreed with u...revealing the past is too early now i accpet but without revealing i cant add spice dialgoues to ahem modi...well lets see how my brains wil turn...

sorry mano..heart attack is planned...


it wil for sure...


good because i dont have any intention to leave him alone...once i have done with him..u can have him all to urself.


u have to be...hope it be a zhor ka jatka...


he he what to do...i am known for giving heart attacks to people...wil cook somehtign intreston for u for sure..but for that u have to wait...


yes it wil be a real job to make people hate ahem...and if i suceed then i wil say that if ff wil be memorable for sure...wow so i am cruel to the core...i acept it totally..yeah i got ur point...whatever crap i write..i have a darling friend to read.

all i can say is bring it on..the game begins now and the more u rirritate me..the more i am pleased...god i think i am a goner case now..thanks to u.

god .. this is a bit too long ...

will comment on the other post in a while ... . and as this is too long did nt include it here ..

so until the next update 😉

- - badra

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 143badra

glad u like it ... u do know me too well by now😉 ...

u might be a cruel writer .. but babes u are one hell of a writer .. a dam good one .. so cannt blame u for being evil .. can i .. as i am at ur mercy 😉 ..

btw i do enjoy putting u in trouble 😉 ... it feels so good 😳.😆..

will try my leave best to control myself ... yep .. sweet revenge ... 😆 ... but i guess it is all worth it .. so wil take it ... just for u 😉

thanx hun .. love u too for being u... u are such a sweet heart and a dear friend ... love to play eith u and glad tht u are willing to play along ...😉

yep .. i am a walking talking disaster .. u being there feels it .. just imagine the people around me .. i am feeling sorry for them😉😆 ... u might be feeling sorry for su .. i so dont .. she is nt less than me in any way ... different for sure ,, but nt any less ...

as my brother always says the guy who marries me or fall me will nt know wht hit him .. he is doomed ...

so catch u later ... and i will try to keep my act together .. i promise 😉

- - badra


ha ha thanks so my talent is saving me i think..better guard it ...he he u are at my mercy until i update but after that..god save me

what are firends for if they dont tease or play with u...i like u silly little demands..afterall who else can u demand exept me and su..

i pray for the poor soul who wil come in ur life...jigar part 2 for sure..😆

pity dear su...but i agree..sometimes silent persons..make remarkable disaters..like me

catch u too. tomoroow because i wiil update today

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