new member - fan-fic updated (Part 2 on page 3.)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey folks,

I started watching SNS from january and I am one of the loyal fan of SNS. I love all the characters be it Gopi, Rashi Jigar or Ahem. But my preference is towards Rashi Jigar. Dunno why but I feel the chemistry b/w them is very mysterious which excites me.

I was a silent observer of SNS for two months. So I thought to introduce myself with a fan-fiction (self created). I know there are not too many Rashi- Jigar out here but I am hopeful that I'll not be discouraged here. I hope to impress all of you especially to GoHem fans. The theme of my fan fic is not a new one. You might have heard or seen such story. But believe me it fits perfectly with Rashi Jigar.

The title of fan -fic is

After Rashi's truth is exposed to everyone(Part -1 )

The story begins from the day when Rashi's truth is exposed to everyone.( Eventually one day it will) And as expected it will be a doom's day for Rashi. And why not, she deserves that. But here I'll not mention how she is caught and what all happens to her. The thing is that I have tried to show the change in Rashi (which we all want) after her truth is exposed.
Pardon me for spelling mistakes..


Scene -1

The day Rashi's truth is exposed in font of everyone, as obvious she is thrown out of the house. And this time its Jigar who does this job. ( How she is been thrown out and all, this u can well imagine what will kokila do to Rashi once she is exposed). Alongtwith Rashi, Urmila too get caught by Modi's. Both of them leave for Rajpal nagar.

At Rashi's house, Jitu shouts at Urmila and Rashi. He even slaps Rashi for misdeeds. He is dejected by the fact that both of them played such mischiveous games with the Modi's. But since she is her daughter, he allows her to stay at their place. Kinjal finds it as a golden oppurtunity grill Rashi. Whole day she keeps on taunting Rashi for her blunders. But what is disturbing Rashi more is that she lost a partner like Jigar with a golden heart, who loved her so much. She feels guilty for betraying such a good person. The guilt feeling and the taunts of Kinjal for about 4-5 days forces Rashi to leave that house and go somewhere else where she could find peace. She leaves a letter while leaving writing that she wants to live alone from now onwards. Urmila cries like hell. Kinjal is happy.

Scene -2

It has been a fortnight when Rashi's truth was exposed in front of everyone. Jitu goes to a market to buy some household goods. By chance he gets to meet Jigar. Jigar as usual was being polite to his elder. Jitu with guilt in his eyes, asks forgiveness from Jigar. Jigar feels embarassed and he comforts him saying that" I know you were not involved in all these things. The mistakes were done by Rashi and she is paying for it. Very soon I'll be sending her divorce papers for her signature. But Jitu says that Rashi has left home and is missing til then.

Scene -3

After Rashi is caught, there hasn't been a single day when Jigar was not in pain, he didn't cry. He couldn't pay attention in any work whether in office or at home. Hetal is worried about Jigar. Fortunately, one day she receives a telephone from Jigar's old friend from Udaipur. He was inviting Jigar for his marriage. Hetal sees it as an oppurtunity for some refreshment for Jigar. She talks to Ahem about this, and for the first time Ahem caring about his brother, agrees with her. Jigar is no mood to attend the wedding but he is forced by Hetal and Ahem to go to Udaipur. Finally he agrees to attend the wedding. Ahem allows him a leave of 7 days (week) so that Jigar gets some time to overcome the mishap in his life.

Scene- 4

Jigar reaches the beautiful city of Udaipur. He is busy in the wedding for the first 5 days. After the wediing is over, he decides to tour Udaipur as it is one of the most tourist attracting places in India. While touring, he gets to see a glimpse of Rashi getting down from a school bus. He is shocked. He runs behind her, but in crowd he loses her. Jigar remembers the name of the school and he goe sto that school for verification. There he gets to know that there is a woman named Rashi who is a working as a primary teacher. Jigar comes back to his friends house. He is sad, thinking about Rashi the whole night. There is something because of which Jigar couldn't detach all the strings of relationship from Rashi. He couldn't sleep all night. It was the sixth day. Next morning( the last day), he decides that he'll meet Rashi and will tell her that he wants a divorce.

Scene -5

Today is the last day. Since he has got no clue about Rashi, he again goes to that school. He reches there early in the morning. And yes, Rashi comes to the school. While she is teaching to class, Jigar stares her from outside the class and for a moment all those bad incidents which has happened with both of them. He tries to get information about her from other teachers. And the feedback he gets is that "Rashi is a very nice-hearted person. A very good human being." Jigar gets a hint that maybe Rashi has changed. After the school gets over, he follows Rashi to her home. Her home is now a room in ladies lodge. Jigar stands in front of Rashi's house door and he is thinking whether to meet her or not. He ponders upon it for around an hour and finally he knocks the door. Rashi opens the door. She is shell-shocked. Her eyes cannot believe that Jigar s standing in front of her. Now here is the conversation:

Jigar ' Hi Rashi! ( as always humble)

Rashi ' Jigar ji aap?

Jigar ' Kya main andar aa sakta hoon.

Rashi doesn't answer that but Jigar enters the room. He sees the room and seeing it he understood that Rashi is not living in a great condition. His eyes are wet. Don't know why but he feels sorry for Rashi

Jigar- Jitu uncle ne bataya ki tum ghar se bhag gayi thi? Kyun kiya tumne aisa? Kya tumhe is baat ka andaaza nahi ki wo kitne pareshaan hain?

A tear drops from Rashi's left eye. She is full of guilt. She is so ashamed that she cannot even see into the eyes of Jigar

Rashi- Kis muh se main rukti us ghar mein? Apni gunahon ki wajah se kahin bhi nazar milana mushkil ho gaya tha. Roz sharmindgi ke maare ghut ghut ke jee rahi thi. Isliye maine faisla kiya ki main sabse kahin door chali jaaongi.

Jigar ' To phir Udaipur kaise aana hua?

Rashi ' Kismat ka khel tha udaipur aana. Jis din main ghar chhod kar nikli usi din mera accident ho gaya tha. Jinki car se mera accident hua, wo ek aunty thi. Mujhe hospital le gayi aur mera ilaaj karvaya. Par ilaaz ke waqt kisi ko bhi yeh nahi pata tha ki main kaun hoon aur mera is shehar mei koi apna hai bhi ya nahi. Operation ke baad, mujhe dekhbhal ki zaroorat thi. Is liye wo aunty mujhe apne saath udaipur le aayi. Apne ghar mein unhone mera khoob dyan rakha. Par theek hone ke baad, mujhe laga ki main inki koi nahi lagti phir main inke ghar kisliye rukoon?? Theek hone ke baad maine aunty se guzaarish ki main akele jeena chahti hoon. Unhone mujhe sirf ek shart mein aisa karne diya. Unhone kahan ki "main tumhe ek teacher ki job dilwa doongi. Lekin tumhe isi shehar mein rehna hoga". Aunty ne meri bahut madat ki. Unka ehsaan main kabhi nahi bhula paaoongi.

Jigar- Accident mein zyada chot to nahi aayi na? ( worried expression)

Rashi- Accident se zyada chot tab lagi, jab mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua ki maine Modi parivaar ke saath kitna galat kiya hai, Gopi ke saath kitna galat kiya hai, aapke saath vishwaasghaat kiya hai. Galti bhi aisi ki jiski maafi mujhe kabhi nahi mil sakti. Ab saari zindagi mujhe is galti ka boj apne sir rakh kar jeena hoga.

(After a pause)

Main jaanti hoon ki ab bahut der ho gayi, phir bhi Jigar ji main aapse ek baar sache dil se maafi maangna chahti hoon. Maine aapke saath jo kuchh bhi kiya wo nahi hona chahiya tha. (Rashi pulling her ring of the finger and giving it back to Jigar) Yeh lijiye Jigar ji. Aapki di hui yeh angoothi ke laayak nahi hoon main. Aur main yeh bhi nahi chahti ki aap apni poori, meri kadwi yaadon ke saath bitaye. Aap jald doosri shaadi kar lijiye. Divorce ke paper pe aap jab kahenge tab main sign kar doongi. Main chahti hoon ki aap mujhse hamesha-hamesha ke liye door chale jaayein taaki dobara aapko kabhi chot na pahunche.. Aapka dil na toote. Aap bahut achhe hain Jigar ji. Aap ko duniya ki har khushi milni chahiye.

Jigar turns his back to Rashi. Even his eyes are wet. But he has nothing left to say to Rashi. He says goodbye to Rashi and leaves. He returns from the flight to Rajkot


(to be continued)

will continue after some positive response. I tried to show how it might end up in a good love story between Rashi and Jigar. Thnx for reading

See ya!!


Edited by fullhouse - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey first of all welcome to the forum, hey you have done great fiction i ur first post ...😊
Hoping that it happens in the series soon...
Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for posting 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats a grand entry for a new member...
very well written and eagerly waiting for its second part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi welcome to sns world this part is really nice & very nice entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello and welcome to the forum. I can see it's your first post.

My name is Nafisa...how come you called yourself fullhouse? Do you mind sharing what you name is please?
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story... i luv it.. there are not much raji ffs... thank u for writing one please update soon. i want to see rashi repenting like this some day... can u write the dialouges in english.. i think most people likes that.. its difficult to read hindi like this.. anyway please continue soon... if possible write more raji ffs..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! nice.. update soon.. write more raji ffs... i luv them...
Edited by sarastella - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Realy nice begin Can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Hello and welcome to the forum. I can see it's your first post.


My name is Nafisa...how come you called yourself fullhouse? Do you mind sharing what you name is please?


Its just a username.. My real name is Riwaaz...

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