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Originally posted by: Bloem123

Realy nice begin Can't wait to read the next part

I'll soon update its second part...in one or two days...and thnx for the appreciation

Originally posted by: fullhouse

Its just a username.. My real name is Riwaaz...

hey, welcome to the forum!!
loving you FF, please continue soon!

welcome to the forum Riwaaz...

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Hi Riwaaz, welcome, I'm not a Raji fan though do you like Goham?

The characters played by Ahem and Gopi are great...No doubts in acting but seriously speaking, I find their story a little dumb and unrealistic ( please don't mind that ). I mean in today's world its nearly impossible for a guy (a business tycoon) to fall for a woman who is illiterate...Also they show no progress in Gopi's literacy...

Whereas in case of RaJi(as u call them), although Rashi is evil but still she has some feelings for Jigar...Its a unique character because generally they don't show the good side of a negative role like Rashi...

Evenn then it all depends upon the choice.. I like RaJi and other people like GoHem..no probs with that.. :)

Hi Fullhouse Riwaaz

Welcome to the forum i loved you ff but plse can you translate the last bit as some of us can understand some of it thank you

hey folks

I have completed the second part of my fan fiction. For those who needs a recap, go to the first page. In this second part, since many of you told me the problem of understanding hindi, so I have written my dialogues in english.

As a precap of 1st part, Rashi's truth is exposed and she is thrown from Modi bhawan and Rajpal Nagar. With some twists and turns she lands in Udaipur ending up teaching in a primary school and living a monotonous life alone. Jigar visits Udaipur for his friend's wedding and there he meets with Rashi. Rashi returns her marriage ring and with full of guilt says that he should marry some other woman. Jigar then return home after this.


Part 2

Scene 6

Jigar returns home. But he is not happy. He is continously thinking about Rashi and all the evil things she did. He is thinking about divorcing Rashi but he is not firm about it. Hetal observes Jigar for quite some time. As a perfect mom, she automatically guesses that something is wrong with Jigar. One night she goes to his room and asks about his problem. First Jigar tried a lot not to tell anybody about Rashi but he couldn't resist that night. He told Hetal about his meeting with Rashi in Udaipur, about her living condition and her loneliness. Hetal tries to console him saying that "there will be times in future when you will face Rashi as you faced Sonal in Navratras. But you cannot afford to worry every time. You have to move on otherwise you will not be able to live happily. Leave all this behind. And for Rashi, I wish that God gives her the wisdom to judge the good and bad in life. " After this Hetal says goodbye to him and goes to sleep.

Scene 7

Rashi in Udaipur continues to live her monotonous life. From home to school and school to home. Nothing colorful is left in her life. But one day, one of her colleagues ( Sheena) urged her to go for shopping. Rashi unwillingly said yes and she agrees to go for shopping. While shopping, they get to meet Sheena's husband. And he too decides to shop with them. While shopping Rashi sees how Sheena's husband is buying things for her, be it jewellery, sarees or chocolates. Rashi sees all these things and feels sad. She remembers all those gifts which were brought by his loving Jigar but at that time she couldn't feel the importance of that. She remembers those days when Jigar would buy something or the other to pamper Rashi from his hard earned savings. She regrets pressurising Jigar for money and gifts. Rashi feels so sad seeing the couple that she couldn't bear to stand in front of them. She makes an excuse and she goes to home.

Scene 8

At Modi bhawan, Gopi too observes that Jigar is sad and worried about something. Since she shares a good bond with him, she asks Jigar about his problem. Jigar in course of searching the solution of his problem feels that he can share it with Gopi. He tells Gopi about all those things that happened in Udaipur. And he asks Gopi for solution.

Gopi-" There's nothing I can do in this Devarji. Rashi ben committed some mistakes which broke the hearts of many people in this house."

Jigar – " But bhabhi tell me whether should I break all my relationships with Rashi?"

Gopi- " The only thing I know about marriage is that one you are married, you are partners for ever. Nothing can break this relationship. When I came to this house, even I faced problems in my marriage with Ahemji. The situation got so worse that he couldn't even tolerate me in front of his eyes and I have to leave this house. But God had some other plans. If my marriage has to fail, then I wouldn't have been able to step in this house again. But God sent Naniji, because of which Ahemji had to come and take me home. It was a signal from Kanhaji. Slowly and steadily, I guess Ahemji has started giving me some respect. I don't know whether he loves me or not but that little bitof space in his heart is enough for me. So I guess think again before you decide to completely give up the marriage because even though Rashiben committed mistakes

Gopi leaves

Scene 9

Along with days, nights too are hell for Rashi. There was a time when she never woke up without seeing the face of Jigar, and today she is missing him like hell. While trying to sleep she remembers the night, when Jigar thanked and kissed her hands. She regrets all those nights when Jigar would ask her for long drives and everytime she would make some excuses to avoid that. She misses those moments when she felt that Jigar is trying to come close to her. She misses that gentle touch of his hands of his body. She feels so incomplete.

Scene 10

It has been 4 days since Jigar has returned from Udaipur. Every night Jigar gives it a long time to think about his broken marriage. He recollects all the rare beautiful moments she spent with Rashi. He remembers all the words said by Gopi bhabhi. He gives it a thought. "There were so many hurdles in front of Gopi bhabhi. Ahem bhai was no where close to accept her. But Gopi Bhabhi never lost her heart. She had full faith in Kanhaji and today even I can feel something in Ahem Bhai's heart for Gopi bhabhi. She never left Ahem bhai. May be that's the thing that marriage teaches you. For a good married life you have to keep faith in your partner even if she breaks that faith. You can't leave the hands of your partner even if she leaves it. I can feel the love for me in Rashi's eyes. Maybe this is the time when she is alone, I could help her to live life in a better way. I guess it's a challenge for me to accept Rashi as it is and make her fall in love ( although she is already in love with him)."

And Jigar decides that he will not break his marriage with Rashi.

Scene 11

Next day Jigar, after spending a whole night on his decision, is in tension about the reactions he will get when he'll tell his family about his decision. He waits till breakfast is over. And with all the dare he has he tells family about his meeting with Rashi in Udaipur and announces his decision to every one. And as expected, Kokila blasts at him.

Koki- "Are you mad or what? So much has happened to you and Modi family because of Rashi and you still dare to talk about that evil in this house? "

Jigar- "I understand your anger kakiji and its valid too. But I feel I should give Rashi a second chance."

Koki- "Don't talk rubbish. Even you know what an actor she is; full of disguise. You can never predict about her evil thinkings. Its better to stay away from that witch"

Ahem-"Yes Jigar, mom is right. How can you still think about that woman who did so bad with you and your family?"

Jigar- " I know that she made some mistakes and she deserves all the punishments. But she is all alone there. Even her parents don't know about her. And I feel she should get a chance to change herself. And in that I can help her."

Chirag-" But why all of a sudden you are talking about Rashi?"

Jigar-" Papa, the day I met Rashi in Udaipur, I can feel her loneliness. She really needs someone for support. And in her eyes I felt something for me, as if she was always waiting for me. Let me give it a last try. I don't want to end up without trying"

Kokila- " Okay fine, but Rashi cannot enter the premises of Modi Bhawan. I cannot allow history to repeat itself".

Chirag-" I support Kokila in this. I cannot risk my family's peace for a girl who did so bad with us."

Jigar- " I knew you would say that. That's why I have decided that I'll stay there with Rashi. Since you all cannot see Rashi in this house and I can't see Rashi alone there, so I have decided to stay with Rashi."

Hetal crying- "What are you saying Jigar? How will I live without you"?

Jigar – " Maa I am going away from this town but not from your heart. I know deep inside your heart you support me. Have faith in me and Kanha ji. With his grace, one day I'll return with Rashi in this house. But now please don't stop me."

Jigar to all – " I know that my decision is not right in your eyes. But I cannot change it either. I apologize for this and I promise that I'll return with Rashi only when you all will forgive Rashi."

Kokila- " That day will never come"

Jigar-" I have full faith in Kanhaji. If my love is true, I'll return to my home."

Jigar is leaving for Udaipur. Gopi somehow manages to meet him.

Gopi-" I don't know why, but I feel you made the right decision. I fully support you in forgiving Rashiben. After all she is a human, and mistakes are committed by humans only."

Jigar- " Thank you bhabhi. But I have to ask some thing?

Gopi- "What Devarji"?

Jigar – "Have you forgiven Rashi"?

Gopi – " I did the day when her mistakes were exposed. After all she's my only sister in this world".

Jigar leaves with a smile

Scene 12

Jigar reaches Udaipur. He rushes to the Rashi's house but he finds a lock. Its evening time there. He asks neighbours about her but none of them has got any clue. Jigar is worried. He searches for her in whole town. And he reaches somewhere in the outer premises of the town where there is a sunset point. There he finds Rashi. He slowly walks towards her. Rashi has got no clue about him. Jigar is standing a meter away from her. Rashi suddenly feels that Jigar is standing behind her. And her feeling turns true when she turns. Rashi eyes are wet . She turns again hiding her tears and saying

Rashi – " You must have come for my signature on divorce paper. I will definitely sign it. You made the right decision. You deserve someone who loves you, understands you and cares or you".

Jigar – " Yes you are true. '

Rashi – " Give the papers. I'll sign right now."

Rashi puts her left hand forward. Jigar holds the hand, takes out the ring which she returned to him and puts her in her finger. Rashi is shocked.

Jigar-" I didn't buy this ring for you initially but today I realized that only you are the person who deserves to wear it."

Rashi-" No Jigar ji. This is not right. I don't want to enter your life again. I don't want to create mess in your life again. The mistakes which I have made will haunt me forever and I'll never be able to face you."

Jigar- " That's what you think. No mistake is as big as forgiveness. I am confident that deep inside your heart you miss me a lot and you love me. And what do you thought, just by signing papers you can go away from my life so easily. That will never happen. We got married with all the rasams and vachans and we are tied together for ever. "

Rashi starts crying. Jigar holds her face with his hands

Rashi-" But your family will never accept me again"?

Jigar- " Don't worry Rashi. Do hell with the past. I'll be there with you to make our present better. I know we cannot return back straightaway but keep faith in Kanhaji. One day will come when we will go to our home. But till then I'll be there for you. With my love for you I'll help you to overcome from the past. As a good husband I'll always take care of you."

After a pause

Jigar-" Never thought I would say like this to you but I guess the time is right for this".

I Love You

Jigar kisses on her forehead. Rashi eyes are full of tears. She hugs Jigar tightly. And jigar to hugs her tightly. He says " Nothing can be as precious in life as your partner( Saathiya). Together we will make things better for future." Jigar and Rashi are hugging each other with the dark background of sunset.

With this the story ends. Since Gopi has forgiven Rashi and Hetal too would be pushing Kokila, ultimately Kokila too will forgive Rashi one day and then RaJi can return to their own house at Rajkot – Modi Bhawan

I have tried to end the relationship of Rashi and Jigar in a love story because that's what we want. I hope u all enjoyed reading it.

:)

good story... luved it... try to write more...

Hi, welcome to the forum.very nice story.keep going.

this part is fabulous & awesome part